hai i just read 8th part of remix .i didnt read previous parts yet.but this chapter is very intersting.i will definitly read it .
hai i just read 8th part of remix .i didnt read previous parts yet.but this chapter is very intersting.i will definitly read it . Hai i read all the parts.very nice story .i like sakshi as mats and j's mom.but hate tia aka t.i want to know did uday really know mats as his childhood friend.next time pls pm me
Originally posted by: fireroad99
u will get to know soon but i dont get somethingeven i hate her tobut without negative roles there is no fun in the show
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SORRY GUYS FOR THE INCONIVENCE
I PROMISE THAT I WILL UPLOAD DURING WEEKEND
CHAPTER 9
M: YOU GUYS (J& JAGAT) HOLD THEIR BREATHS) FAIL THIS TEST!
J & JAGAT WERE BROKING INTO PIECES🥺 AND J START CRYING
J:😭 MATS, DON'T DO THIS TO ME! I CANT LOVE WITHOUT JAGAT
MATS BURST OUT IN LAUGH AND J & JAGAT LOOK AT EACH OTHER WITH A CONFUSE 😕LOOK
M:( 😆😆) BOTH OF YOU LOOK AT YOUR FACES! IT LOOK LIKE I AM A EVIL QUEEN AND YOU ARE MY SERVENTS AND I AM about to hang you guys!. OMG! j and jagat you have A's this test!
j & jagat hug each other.
m: hey ! i am still her so, romance later.
mats j & jagat laugh
j hug mats
j: YOU ALMOST KILLED ME. if you lready agree to this relationship then why did you did al this drama
m: (broke the hug) because i want to show you the serious mats
j friendly hits mats on her left arm
m: but seriously , at first i was really made that you hid about jagat bu after hearning( gross face) jagats " dramatic dialogues, ( smile😊) i realize he loves you a ton and i believe you are made for eachother. i am still mad at you
j: why?
M: ( puppy face) you didnt told me about jagat before
j: actually mats, i did it for you
m:(😕) for me?
j: you know mom alwyas want that you should marry frist and i know athat mom will nver accepted my relationship until you get married.
M:( FUSTRUTED FACE) hey BAKGO! THAT HITLER WILL ALWAYS LIVE IN 2 CENTURY AND I AM GOING TO KILL THAT GUY WHO MADE A RITUAL IN MY FAMILY THAT THE ELDER SIBBLING SHOULD MARRY FIRST. MOM ALSO KNOW THAT I HAVE A BIG ALLERGE FORM MARRIAGE. ( 😊) YOU DONT WORRY I WILL CONVICED MOM THAT THE FIRST BRIDE WOULD BE J
J: MATS ITS IMPOSSIBLE! MOM WOULD NEVER CHANGE THE RITUAL GOR US!
M: (simirk)she have to ! today rani laxmi bhi will have choose between her children's happiness or her so called " rituals"
j hugged mats tightly
j(hug & crying) THANKS A TON MATS! today i seriously want you to call you " jiji"
mats broke the hug
m: DONT YOU DARE or i will make sure that you both dont get married.
all 3 of them laugh
m: JUST RELAX
J INTERPUT MATS
J: ( ONE HAND AROUND MATS NECK) MATS IS HERE NEVER FEAR. (😆)
M:( ALSO PUT ONE HAND AROUND J NECK&
Enthusiastically) EXACTLY!
J & JAGAT LEFT . MATS 😊TURN INTO A frown
m(relief) thank god!
mats left the cafe and went to her favorite beach. she goes there when she is in tension or confused
mats was sitting on the beach AND THE water waves was overlapping her leg but she was zone out and was in deep thinking
m:( talking to herself & tension face)) how should i convince mom? (Ouch)! what the hell was that?
she turned around
m: rock?
she start looking around the beach
she saw a tall guy, he look really angry and he was throwing the rock so hard that it could chop someone head off
m: (😡😡)who the hell is that blind person?
mats ran up and was ready to put that guy in ICU
M:(😲) TUM! WHO ELSE CAN IT BE!
U: ( 😡) do you have a problem?
m: no, i have no problem with you becz YOU ARE THE BIGGEST PROBLEM!
u: JUST SHUT YOUR FACE!
M: DONT SHOW ME YOU'RE SO CALLED "ATTITUED"
U: WHAT EVER!
M: BY THE WAY, WHAT HELL YOU ARE DOING HERE?
U: WHY? IS THIS UR FATHER'S BEACH
M: HEY, DONT GO ON MY FATHER!
U: WHY?
M: BECZ MY FATHER IS DEAD
M: BURN!
u: THE WORLD CHESSES JOKE EVER!
M: GET TO THE POINT! What in the world r u doing here
u: 😡)that none of ur business! AND BTW this is not ur personal property(pointing figure on her
m: i know but it doesn't mean that you throw rocks so hard that you were about to send me to ICU
u:( sarcastically) oh i am sorry! Next time i will try harder
m: what's ur problem. mr bing ( making fun of uday's name)
u: mr. singh
m: Whatever! But the point is you could hurt me
u:(frustrated) I GET YOUR POINT
M: (sarcastially0 I DIDN'T KNOW YOU BRAIN! THANKS FOR UNDERSTANDING!
UDAY PUT HIS HAND IN HIS POCKET AND TOOK money out
u: here you go ! that's what u need! i know your kind of people. ( attitude) SO KEEP IT.
MATS TOOK THE MONEY
M: ( FAKE SIMILE) YOU KNOW WHAT I DIDN'T DID LAST TIME I WIIL DO THIS TIME
U: ) WHAT ?
m : THIS
MATS THOW THE MONEY ON UDAY'S FACE. UDAY GOT (FURIOUS)
m:(😡) NEXT TIME DON'T YOU DARE EVER TRY TO BUY SOMEONE FORM "YOUR" money
uday pull her closer
u:(😡) i know how to held your kind of girls
m: ( 😡) LEAVE ME ! CASNOVA
UDAY PULL HER EVEN CLOSER
U: NOW i will show you a real Casanovar!
m: Halka Vare!
uday push mats away. uday put his hands over his ears and close his eyes. " halka vare" were echoing in his ears.
Flashback
there is a gil running and calling a guy halka vare!
g: (😆)halka care! try to catch me
b: ( attitued) CHALLENGING A YUVRAJ
END FLASHBACK
UDAY WAS FEELING DIZZY
U( IN DIZZNESS) WHATS HAPPEING TO ME!
M: ( ATTITUTED) DO I LOOK LIKE A DOCTOR TO YOU
U: ( FRUSTRATED & 😡😡) WHAT ARE YOU GOING TO TAKE TO SHUTUP!
M: I TRILLION
UDAY SITUTION WAS GETTING WORSE
M: (SERIOUS) ARE YOU ALRIGHT?
U: ( YELL)JUST LEAVE
M: (YELL) ARE YOOU CRAZY! ( OVER EXAGGERATIN THE SITUTION)YOUR'RE ON THE EDGE OF DIEING AND YOU ARE TELLING ME TO LEAVE!
U: ( DIZZNESS) GOOO
UDAY GOT UNCONSCIOUS
M: ( looking at the sky) WOrst day of my life!
MATS PUT HER HAND AROUND UDAY AND HELP HINM GET IN HER CAR. MATS PUT HIS SEAT BEALT ON.
M: ( 😡AT THE GOD)HE Bahgo! i have to babysit my enemy!
mats took uday to hospital. mats took him to a PIRVATE hospital.
m: ( furstrated) OMG! its so crowned in here! ( looking at the celling and normal tone) hey Bahgo! tell me one thing ( angry tone) WHY ARE YOU THROWING MT. EVERST'S CLIMBING PROBLEMS!
A GIRL WITH A 😕 LOOK AND A FREAK OUT FACE
M: DO YOU NEED SOMETHING LADY? ( YELLING AND😡)
G: NO( SCARED & WHISPER)
GIRL WAS ABOUT TO LEAVE. MATS NOTICE A STETHOSCOPE AROUND HER NECK.
M: ( MIND) ( SMIRK) lets start my drama> ( fake cry) plz help me
g:stop crying! who is he?
m: (mind) what to say
m: MY HUSBAND
G: ( 😲) HUSBAND?
SORRY GUYS FOR SPELLING AND GRAMMER MISTAKE
QUESTION:
#1 WHY DID I CHOOSE THIS BACKGROUND MUSIC
#2 HOW WILL MATS CONVIENCE HER MOM?
# WILL THE DOCTOR BELIEVE MANYATA ?
#4 WHY HEARING "HALKA VARE" MADE HIM GO UNCONIOUSE
NO RES BOX
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hai its a nice one.mats has attitude.what happened in the past?iam eagerly waiting for that part..whats uday's identity and where is his family?whats he doing?
Originally posted by: ...anju...
awesome fire.
wat is manveers past.
wana to know uvs whereabouts
continue soon.
plz pm me next time.
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