REMIX LOVESTORY CHAPTER 9 PG 36 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
It was nice bt it was really short... like the sister bonding... there were some spelling mistakes i got a suggestion u shall re read the update urself so the spelling mistakes can b less... other thn that update was good again some one said manyata to stop n update ended its deja vu ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜†seems like the person in the car in the precap would b uday jst guessing... plz make the update long nxt time if u can..
thnx for the pm๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
gr8 update ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
great bonding bw j and m
and the precap was awesome
i guess would be manveer first meeting
cont soon :)
p.s thanx for the pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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THANKS FOR THE Suggestion and next time i will make sure and reread it
fireroad99 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
sorry guys for delay but the school start so was busy on that but going to post the next chap by this weekend
fireroad99 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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SORRY I TOLD U THAT I WOULD SENT IT THIS WEEKEND BUT HAD TONS OF HW SO THIS WEEK PROMISED
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
intresting and fabuolous concept dear๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hmmm...intresting...i hope that oily princey is not uday...update soon.
Edited by swetsurati - 12 years ago
fireroad99 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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M: J i am not going to be scared

J: MATS THAT NOT ME

THEY BOTH turn around and there mouth and eyes wide open

only one word was coming out of their mouth OMG!

J AND MATS MOM



M: RANI LAXMI BAI

J: WHAT?

M: WHEN OUR TRUSTEE IS WALKING SHE REMINDS ME OF HITLER. I think she was Hitler wife. Don't u think so? (Said with a giggle)

J: JUST SHUT UP!

THE trustee look at them with angered look , it was like she was abt to murderd them MANYATA OBOEROI AND JAYNANDANI OBOEROI IN MY OFFICE RIGHT NOW.

JO: IT WAS EXPECTED FROM U MANYATA BEING LATE TO COLLEGE AND NOT DOING UR WORK THAT UR CHILDHOOD HABIT BUT J U MORE MATURE AND MARK MY WORDS ONE U WILL REGARD THAT SHE IS UR SISTER

Manyata got shattered and break into tear. j couldnt tolerate that.

J: SHUT UP MOM!

JO couldn't believe J had first time yelling at her

JO:J U CANT TALK TO ME LIKE THAT!

J: YES I CAN!

JO : I AM UR MOM

J : DO U EVEN KNOW THE MEANING OF MOM. After dad die, u forgot that u have kids and the only thing matter is business that's it. LISTEN ONE THING JHANKI DEVI I WILL NEVER REGARD THAT MATS IS MY SISTER BUT, I WILL BE PROUD OF HER. You u why? When u didnt give me attention, mats was there to take care of me and tell me right or wrong. She was there for me, when I need her. You didn't even care if we die or live. You know what? You are a insult to calling a mom.

M: (slap J) SHUT UP J

J: DIDI (WHISPER VOICE)

J ran from the office with tears in her eyes.

M: J '.. I am sorry

Mats went after J but couldn't find her but, remember she would be in the fire escape.

M: I knew u are going to be here. j turn around and her face was red tomato.

J: WHAT U DOING HERE (ANGRED TONE)

M: I know that when u are upset or confused abt something u need me.

J : THAT'S AWSEOME. Be the first one to hurt and also be the first to put on medicine.

M: SORRY! I REALLY I AM. YOU J that I can't hear anything wrong abt mom.

J: mats she was insulting u.

M: no, you are wrong here, she wasn't insulting me, she was just mad at me. You know that mom doesn't like someone breaking rules.

J: Mats my question is how can someone hate their own child

M: you are wrong her again her, she doesn't hate me, is just that she gets irritate easily because you know after dad die, mom got really heartbroken and didn't want to alive but she knew that she have to live for us.

J AND MATS DAD

M: U KNOW what's makes me more mad?

J (confused look) WHAT?

M: YOU told mom that she is insult calling a mom, no, she is a god to us.

J: what did she did for us?

M: she always scarisfed her dreams for our happiness. Mom always wants to be a fashion designer but she didn't got support from her family and we both were young so, she join her hated profession business.

J: why mom hated business?

M: there were 2 main reasons. First was that, she knew that if she join business there is no place for heart, only place for heartless people. I know mom it was impossible thing for her but there was no other option for her.

Few years it was hard for her but as years went on she learned abt business and behind business she hide her feelings

M (MANYATA STAND UP) THE BIGESST REASON WAS DAD. BUSINESS KILLED DAD

J: WHAT U MEAN?

M: DAD HAD A BUSINESS PARTHNER AND A BEST FRIEND. I don't know his name because mom never told his name. Mom told me one thing about him, that he was never a friend to our dad. He just need dad's money and he kill dad.

WHILE SAYING THAT MATS HAD TEARS IN HIS EYE.

J : SOORY MATS ( HUG)

M: DON'T SAY SORRY TO ME SAY SORRY TO MOM.

MATS WIPE J'S TEARS.

M: DONE WITH THE DRAMA AND TEARS( WITH A LAUGH) we have party today so, I have the party stuff in my car.

J : OK LETS GO!

THEY BOTH WERE WALIKING TO THE CAR AND SUDDENLY A CAR THROW MUD ON MAT'S CLOTHS.

M: (GOT MAD) DEKA KAR NAHE CHALA SAK THA.

THE BLACK BMW STOP RIGHT THERE.

.UDAY'S STYLISH CAR

UDAY




U : DIRVER YALLO PAISA , VASA BHA YA LOGO ANTA MEIN PAISA MANGA.

DR. JI SIR.

M: DEKHA NA J AB HE WILL COME OUT OF HIS CAR AND WILL SAY SORRY TO ME.

(WITH SIMILE)

MATS PUT HER HAND FORWARD AND FELT SOMETHING

M: YA KYA HAI

DR. DEKHA NAHE SAKTE KYA YA PAISA HAI.

M: OHHO DRIVER HO KA ETANI AKAR.

M: YA PRIASA MEIN TUMHARA MALIKA FACE PE MARTAI HO.

MATS START WALKING IN ANGERED TO UDAY'S CAR

Dr. PLEASE MADAM STOP RIGHT THERE.

MATS OPEN THE DOOR AND PULL UDAY'S COLLAR AND PULL HIM OUTSIDE. UDAY ALSO PULL MATSSunshinegirll COLSER.


UDAY AND MANYATA CLOSER

GUYS I REALLY WANT TO POST THE PICTURES OF MATS AND J MOM AND DAD BUT WHEN I POST IT THEY REMOVE THE PICTURES ONCE AGAIN SORRY

SORRY FOR LATE POST

Edited by fireroad99 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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THAT RONIT ROY IS THERE DAD FROM ADAALAT
AND SAKSHI TANWAR THEIR MOM FROM BADE ACCHE LAGAT HAI
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Awsome...
J and manyata's bonding very good
and manveer's first meeting is hamakedar.
upadte soon..thaanx for PM.
Edited by swetsurati - 12 years ago
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