REMIX LOVESTORY CHAPTER 9 PG 36

azwa

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Posted: 12 years ago

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😊intro

3000

the world had changed

there are flying cars all the place

no royal families anymore

people rule there own life's

manyata mansion

manyata:mala coffee

mala open the door and said sorry mats i am late (mats as in manyata nick name and manyata

dosent like to be call madam that why all servants call her mats)

manyata woke up from her beautiful red bed

HER BED

OH MY GOD MALA WHY DIDN'T U WAKE ME UP ITS 8:30 AM AND I HAVE A HUGE LECTURE AND BECZ OF U I HAVE TO LISTEN TO THAT SINK OILY HAIR PRINCI

OK GET MY CAR OUT I AM COMING IN 3 MINS

SHE RAN DOWN STAIRS

HER CAR

SHE DIDN'T EVEN WAIT UNTIL THE GUARDS OPEN THE GATE

SHE CRASH THE GATE AND DROVE THE CAR LIKE A WIND

WHEN SHE GOT TO THE COLLEGE IT WAS 9:00

SO SHE KNOW THAT THE GUARDS WONT LET HER IN AND THEN SHE HAVE TO PAINT THE COMMON ROOM

SO SHE CLIMB THE WALL THAT STRAIGHT TAKE TO HER FIRE ESCAPE

FROM FIRE ESCAPE SHE WENT TO THE THE HALL

SHE START TO RAN BUT SUDDENLY SHE HEARD STOP

GUYS THIS IS MY FIRST TIME WRITING A STORY ON INDIAN FORUMS IF U LIKE IT THEN PLZ COMMAND ME

SORRY FOR SPELLING MISTAKES

TELL IF U WANT ME TO CONT

INDEX

INTRO: PG 1

CHAPTER 1: PG 2

CHAPTER: PG 3

CHAPTER 4: PG 6

CHAPTER 5: PG 7

CHAPTER 6: PG 10

CHAPTER 7: PG 18

CHAPTER 8: PG 28

CHAPTER 9: 36

Edited by fireroad99 - 10 years ago

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Swinipriya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hmmm interesting yaar.Dont tell me that oily hair princi iz Uv haha just kidding yaar.N mats haha...Cont soon n pm me if u can.
Swinipriya

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M

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Do continue... but plzz no writing in capital letters!... Sounds good!👍🏼

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757315

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Posted: 12 years ago

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great i loved the pics and the intro was awesome i hope uday is not the oily princy please please update soon and pm me if possible please update

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Mehwish

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Posted: 12 years ago

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sounds nice & diff.. interestin.. hope oily hair princy isnt uv though.. plz continue n pm me if u can when u update nxt...

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azwa

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Posted: 12 years ago

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THANK S ALOT GUYS

I WILL POST IN 2 DAY

TRUST THIS MANVEER LOVE STORY WILL BE REALLY FUNNY

NOTE THAT MANYATA IS LITTLE TOMBOYISH

I MEAN SHE DOSENT WERE THOSE CHWAL CLOTHS BUT SHE DOSENT LIKE TO DRESS UP AND PUT MAKE UP

NEXT CHAPTER IS GOING TO BE LONG AND NEW CHARACHERS

MAYATA AND UDAY WILL MEET SOON😊

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mahnoork47

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Posted: 12 years ago

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lovely please continue soon😛

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hamra

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Posted: 12 years ago

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sorry for late reply

all that i can say is cont soon :)

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azwa

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Posted: 12 years ago

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chapter 1

STOP right there miss.manyata oberoi

manyata close here eyes and turn around and said sooorrry.

she suddenly heard someone giggles

she open her eyes and her mouth was open and her eyes got wide

manyata littler sister

j: (with a laugh) didi close ur month or an ant will think that a food and then get in to ur month

M:(with an angry look) j ki bache teri waja se muja heart attack agaya

J: next time i will not laugh and will come will all practice becz i want u to see in ICU i will be fun

M: tu meri baahan hai ya meri dusmen

J: aaa (put her finger of her head)

M: is mein kya sochna

J: fine didi

M: dont call me didi it so auntti types call me mats ok

J: okkk mats achla aur u we both have to paint the common room

M: ohh shit

J: kya hua?

M: i forgot to make notes on that lecture now that Mr. khaana will beat me with a giant stick

its worst than painting the common room.

J: when mats sister is hear never to fear

mr. khaana is sick and no lectures today so party time in mr. khana's lecture hall.

m: long deep breath THANK GOD J U MADE MY DAY I JUST LOVE U

J: I ALSO LOVE U

THEY BOTH HUGGED EACH OTHER

LETS GO

THEY both start to run

suddenly heard

STOP

M: j i am not going to get scard its not scary anymore

J: MATS THAT NOT ME

THEY both turn around and there month were open and eyes were wide open

precap: MATS AND J WERE WALKING TO THERE CAR AND SUDDENLY A CAR COME AND SPLASH THE MAD ON MATS FACE AND HER BODAY MATS GOT REALLY ANGRY AND YELLED ANDA HO KYA

THE CAR STOP RIGHT THERE

Edited by fireroad99 - 12 years ago

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757315

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Posted: 12 years ago

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it was nice thanks for the pm please edit there are some grammar and spelling mistakes and loved it thanks for the pm and please edit the title and say that u have updated and which page so that people can know please update longer next time and i loved this part please update soon

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