Hum Bewafa Hargiz Na The (Part 29 - Page 73)

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Hum Bewafa Hargiz Na The
(I was never unfaithful)
 
 

Character Sketch

 

Maan: He belonged to a very rich family but then one day disaster stuck and his parents died in a car accident, he was very small around 10 years old and his uncles manipulated and took away all that Maan had and left him and his younger sister Pinky on the footpath to fend for themselves. Maan did odd jobs along with his studies so as to earn enough to survive in this big bad world and even provide for his kid sister. Since he was a computed wiz he participated in programming competitions as he grew older and earned money for their bare necessities and schooling. He became aloof from the world due to the hardships he had faced till he met his angel, his whole world lit up with her one smile till the ill-fated when all hell let loose.

 

Pinky: Maan's kid sister, she was 7 years old when their parents died. Her whole world revolves around her brother whom she considers and respects as her mom, her dad and her brother. She looks up to him as her idol and wants to help him in every way possible but Maan never lets her do anything. He kept her cocooned in his protective embrace showering his sister with all the love and care, shielding her from this evil world. She is like his little princess and he always took care of all her needs however small they may be. In the early days he would go hungry but never ever let his sister sleep on an empty stomach.

 

Adi: He is Maan's best buddy since childhood. He has been with Maan through thick and thin. He even used to save his pocket money in order to help Maan though Maan would always refuse unless it was really urgent and that too for Pinky. He was Maan's true buddy ready to lay his life for his friend. He really respected Maan for what he was as a person absolutely honest, hard working, self-made, kuddar (having immense self-respect), always standing for the right and truth come what may even in the worst of situations. He secretly loves Pinky and even she feels for him.

 

Geet: She was really bubbly by nature, very naive and innocent, always laughing, very jovial and ready to make new friends. She was the only child of her parents. Her mother died when she was really young. Her father was a very rich and influential person who gave her all the riches but couldn't spend enough time with her. She looked up to her father and loved him a lot. She understood that he was really busy but still she desired to be loved. Her that desire was fulfilled the day she met Maan in college and slowly he became her life. His love and care wiped away all the loneliness from her life till the fateful day when everything was destroyed.

 

Geet's father (Mohinder Handa): A very rich and powerful man who didn't have any values and considered that everything in this world has a price tag but he didn't understand that some things can never be bought.

 

Will introduce the other characters as they come...

 

Concept:

 

Geet (self thought):

I gave you my heart

Your simply tore it apart

 

Mere pyaar, meri wafa ka yeh sila kyon diya? You ruined my soul today, you destroyed my very existence on Earth, why Maan why? What did I do to deserve this in return of my never ending love for you? What'

(Why did you do this to me return of my love, my faithfulness? You ruined my soul today, you destroyed my very existence on Earth, why Maan why? What did I do to deserve this in return of my never ending love for you? What')

 

Her heart shattered beyond repair that day.

 

Maan (self thought):

I know I broke your heart

But I simply can't stay apart

 

I know I ruined your soul

But I had no control

 

I wanted to give you all the happiness

But I, myself pushed you in the dungeons of darkness

 

I wish I had died

Before due to me you ever cried

 

I can neither live nor die

Will I be ever be free from this lie

 

Oh Lord, to your tunes I will dance

But I beg her for one chance

 

My soul seeks her forgiveness

Please grant me a chance to give her happiness

 

From this universe remove my every trace

But please grant her solace

 

Give her every pain, every grief to me

But make her life sorrow free

 

Please grant this sinful soul one wish

Give me back my love, my worship

 

He fell on his knees tears pouring down his eyes

 

Hum bewafa hargiz na the
Par hum wafa kar naa sake

 

(I was never unfaithful

Yet I could never be faithful to you)

 
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Chapter 26

Maan resumed cooking but Geet was sad how could she eat knowing how hungry her Maan was when an idea clicked her and she made a bite and fed Maan. He was taken completely by surprise as tears brimmed his eyes at her love and he happily ate from her hand as she alternately made a bit for herself and one for him.

 


And hence our kitchen romance continued with Geet feeding Maan while he kept on getting lost in her but fortunately didn't burn any paranthas hehe 😆…


Here on the other hand Mr. Handa was really furious as he had to cancel the engagement which was so embarrassing for his image and he felt his prestige getting destroyed but in order to save his face he lied to all the guests and the press out there. He called for a press conference to clarify the reason of postponing the engagement.

 

Mr. Handa: We are really sad to inform you all that we have to postpone the engagement ceremony as my daughter is unwell. We regret the inconvenience caused to you all.

 

Reported 1: Are you sure Mr. Handa that she is indeed unwell or are you trying to cover up. She was just fine a few hours ago then what can happen.

 

But before Mr. Handa could reply another reporter spoke.

 

Reporter 2: Yes, we have been hearing rumors that she has indeed run away with her long time boy friend and…

 

Mr. Handa (really furious 😡 as he lost his temper, not letting the reporter to continue): Shut up, just shut up you moron… How dare you spread such rubbish about my prestigious family? (somehow calming himself as he knew the power of press) My daughter was not well since morning but the doctor had assured that she would get better by the evening but unfortunately her health just worsened. She is running very high fever and is too weak to even stand properly. Hence we have to postpone the engagement ceremony.

 

Reporter 3 (started to question): But…

 

Mr. Handa's secretary: No more questions now, this press conference is over.

 

And his security escorted Mr. Handa back to the hotel room where an agitated Vikram was pacing like a mad tiger.

 

Vikram (as soon as he saw Mr. Handa he literally pounced on him, gripping his collar): What the hell is all this Handa? (shaking him up) Where the hell is your daughter?

 

Mr. Handa (meekly replied): I don't know…

 

Vikram (shaking him more): Don't you dare try to play games with me, you are probably not even realizing who you are messing with.

 

Mr. Handa (meekly replied): I really don't know…

 

Vikram (jerking him away seeing him tremble, mocking him): You don't know… and you were boasting only yesterday about how she was in your control, how you could as much as crush her under your feet and she wouldn't even whimper but what happened Handa, she ran away right under your nose.

 

Mr. Handa (really furious at been ridiculed by all but he was sure she couldn't dare to deny him): Never, Geet can never so something like this.

 

Vikram: I don't care. You just remember our deal, if I don't get Geet then you just wait and watch Handa what I do with you. No one will even remember that you ever existed once I am finished with you.

 

Mr. Handa (in deep thinking, disregarding whatever he was blabbering): We should focus on the problem at hand right now. She can't run away on her own that is for sure. It must be… yes… it must be that someone misled her and aided her to run away… no… no… even that is not possible, it must be that someone kidnapped her… yes… that is what must have happened, someone has surely kidnapped her. Yes, this is it.

 

And he rushed out to the control room where the CCTV cameras were controlled from. But to his extreme disappointment, the camera focusing Geet's room had no recording and he threw the cassette in extreme rage.

 

Mr. Handa (holding the collar of the monitoring gut): What the hell is this? How come the cassette is empty?

 

Monitoring Guy (trembling in fear): I have no clue sir, I don't know what happened (obviously how could he know, after all it was the master plan of the great MSK)

 

Mr. Handa (threw him down in real fury): I don't know how or what you will do but I want as much coverage of the events leading to the party as possible and you get all the hotel staff recognized by the hotel manager. Even a slightest of mismatch should be reported to me, understood. I want all this done by tonight otherwise (he screamed pointing a finger at the poor terrified monitoring guy and he meekly nodded as his voice simply failed him knowing pretty well that, that mad guy would have him dead without a second thought)

 

Here Geet very lovingly fed Maan and soon the 3 of them were done with the breakfast.

 

Adi: Maan paranthe toh ek dum lazez the… your hands have the magic buddy… (Maan the paranthe were absolutely yummy… your hands have the magic buddy…)

 

Geet (full on beaming): Woh toh hai (Yupp, so true) (and she kissed Maan's hand and hayee… he was once again lost in his Jaan admiring his Mishti while savouring the divine feel of her soft rose petal like lips on his palms)

 

(assume Geet kissing his palm 😉)

Adi (was like not again guys and he cleared his throat wanting to catch their attention): Ahem… ahem…

 

Bringing both of them back to reality as Maan blushed, seriously he just couldn't control but simply get lost in his Jaan…

 

Maan (seeing that Geet was really tired, how could she not be after what all she had gone through especially since yesterday and she toh hadn't even slept at night): Jaan…

 

Geet: Hmmm…

 

Maan (really worried): You couldn't even sleep at night na, please take some rest na Jaan.

 

Geet (hayee… she was completely blown away at his love and care and she smiled at him): Okie Jaan but promise you too will rest…

 


Maan (blinking his eyes): Yupp Mishti…

 

And Geet retired to the room feeling really exhausted but finally happy that she was with her Jaan, her Maan.

 

Maan (as Geet left to sleep, Maan looked at Adi and said in a really serious tone): Adi…

 

Adi: Kya hua Maan? Why are you so worried? (What happened Maan? Why are you so worried?)

 

Maan: Adi, we need to find out what the bas**** Handa is up to now. He must surely be really agitated as the engagement broke off knowing that Vikram would for sure ruin him. I am sure he must be leaving no stone unturned to find out where Geet is and this time I just can't let him spoil our lives… no… never… not again.

 

Adi: You don't worry, I have my person at the hostel and he just called up that Handa is really restless but as of now he hasn't got even the slightest of clue as to what happened. He is raking through all the CCTV footage and has given an ultimatum to the guy to find some clue by tonight. Let's see what they find and report back and we can take an action accordingly.

 

Maan nodded… yeah it was the best to wait and watch his strategy for now before deciding what they should do next and also he wanted Geet to calm down completely. He knew how torturous this ordeal had been for his Jaan and he wanted her to relax before they took any action.

 

Maan (as his eyes numbed): Adi…

 

Adi (confused as to what had suddenly happened to Maan): Kya hua Maan… (What happened Maan?)

 

Maan: I know that in friendship there is no sorry and no thank you but I really want to express my gratitude to you buddy. I am so fortunate to have a friend like you who has stood by me through thick and thin. You have always been there for me come what may. You have looked after my family like your own. (and tears brimmed Adi's eyes as he instantly hugged him).

 

Adi: Khabar dar joh tune thank you kaha toh (breaking the hug) and dare you call Pinky and Geet your family, they are mine too. (Adi faked anger and Maan smiled amidst tears, he was really really fortunate to have a buddy like Adi).

(Dare you say thank you)

 

Maan: Acha Bhai as you say (and they both smiled. The dark clouds had finally lifted from their lives but had they really lifted with that Handa still lurking over, God only knows what destiny had in store for them) Chal Adi you also rest na, you also didn't sleep at night.

 

And Adi nodded as he headed to take a nap in the other room while Maan went to check on his Jaan.



Hayee… she looked so heavenly, so angelic while asleep that he was completely lost in his sleeping beauty. His legs wandered on their own, as he was totally lost admiring her, and they slowly lessened the distance till he banged on the foot of the bed almost tripping over her. Geet stirred a little in her sleep as Maan somehow balanced himself, phew fortunately his Jaan didn't wake up or else he would have had made a complete fool of himself.

 

Maan gently rubbed his leg as he mentally slapped himself to be so lost in his Jaan that he just didn't see anything but his heart pouted that what could it do, it toh was totally fida (flat) on her na. He gently settled down on the ground on his knees next to the bed post as he sat softly admiring his Mishti as if his eyes pouring his truly unconditional, pure and divine love on her.

 


Precap: Geet(super excited): Let's camp on the terrace…

Flash Back about camping trip too



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