FF: The Fire in our Hearts; Khisher. (Chp 6; Pg 10) - Page 6

Aw, lovely chapter. So, Khirad has a past of some sort, I suppose. And I really wasn't expecting a Sara 😆 But, it works. I think we're in for some surprises. The way you write, is very calming. I read it slowly and try to take in every word. You just do that. Excellent work.

o-o! sara hun? nice... loved it! continue asap!

Resss :P
Can't wait to read :D
Will read as soon as I can :P

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I jus read the FF!! Ohhh MYyy it's not fair yaar you are so good at this !!I was laughing like a idiot through out reading it !! Ahhh the flow was perfect <3 Hayeee asherrr????pls find me someone like him !!And she cares abt khirad !! And Sara's entry was perfect !! And khirad's has a past !!! Ahh I so can't wait to read further !!Ahh it was lovely !! Too good Naqi <3Awww !!! You deserve all thr applause !!:)

Originally posted by: --Iqra--

Aw, lovely chapter. So, Khirad has a past of some sort, I suppose. And I really wasn't expecting a Sara 😆 But, it works. I think we're in for some surprises. The way you write, is very calming. I read it slowly and try to take in every word. You just do that. Excellent work.

so. like I've said before. any thoughts about dramatizing this?
because it's brilliant and it's the kind of writing i've always wanted to see in a Pakistani drama.
coming to the FF, Naqi you just keep on getting better and better.
no honestly I love your FF.
Asher remains my favourite character, Khirad is close by.
I can't wait to see how everything else unfolds and I'd love to see a jealous Khirad.
also. Please don't keep us in suspense for too long. I'd like to know who the guy was.

uff..what do I say that hasn't been said before? This just keeps getting better & better!

fab update..!!

OMG ... I am Loving it I am Loving it I am loving it man <333

the story z going on tooo good,,,plzzz write more,if u r busy then just end it up in 2 chapter but plzzz write more,,,can't w8 to read more plzzz update soon plzzz😛

Loved it dea! please write more soon!