NEW RIMA OS LOVE STORY WRITTEN WITH COFFEE BEANS

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Hey friends it's me Piya most of the Geet forum members know me as the romantic writer of Maaneet FFs. This is the first time I am writing an OS on RISHAB and MADHU (RIMA) 

I was having coffee and this small idea crossed my brain so as usual I was not able to resist myself and here I am with this OS "LOVE STORY WRITTEN WITH COFFEE BEANS"


I dedicate this OS to my friend Pooja (mandymore) 

 

 

 

Delhi,


The Cupid was dispersing the fragrance of love and romance in the wind, and was requesting the wind to welcome every young heart in this magical territory


There was a mesmerizing blush evident in the light of the moon giving a divine touch to the romantic paradise


The sky was releasing the pearls of water generously; showering the arrows of Cupid in every direction to connect every soul with the bond of love


The earth was dancing in joy as the combination of the rain pearls and the moonlight were decorating it with a carpet of diamonds


Oh the entire scene was more beautiful than a poet's imagination as it appeared that the Almighty had himself decorated a dream on the canvas of destiny


Every messenger of nature was indicating that tonight is an auspicious occasion, something special is going to take place; everything looked so perfect.


But he was not ready to accept this truth everything appeared fake to him


According to him, the wind was not tickling his senses with a romantic feel but it was showing him the cold mirror of truth


The moon was not spreading a blissful light but it was highlighting his weaknesses


The sky was not releasing any magical pearls but it was sharing his grief


He was unable to see the carpet of diamonds on the earth as it appeared a disgusting wet mud which made his legs dirty with its touch


How can this situation be perfect? How was this occasion special?


He failed to understand


He was an ordinary guy belonging to the middle class family and today he had lost his biggest strength, he had lost his job. Was the nature celebrating his failure?


If yes, then the nature was indeed cruel as it showed him his real picture, yes he was poor and his condition was so bad that he could not even think of taking a bus back home


He continued to walk; not sure where his legs were leading him


He was tired and shattered as his future was in complete darkness; there was no ray of hope, he was not sure how will he earn his bread and butter tomorrow


It was a dark day for him, a chapter which he would love to tear from the book of his life.


He was a good distance away from his house; it would take him atleast 2 hours to reach there.


He was already depressed emotionally and his physical state was also not helping him, he was hungry and his stomach was craving for food


He removed his wallet to check the amount of money that he had at that moment


He laughed at his helplessness as his wallet had a lone note of rupees 10 in it once again making him realize about his poor financial condition


He kicked the thought of eating anything from his mind; as it is; what could he purchase with this single note?


His legs were not supporting him in this mission they were making him realize that he was tired and it is his duty to gift his stomach some food


He was helpless, he continued walking and after taking few steps he saw a small cafeteria


It was an ordinary cafeteria but there was a unique magic in it


It was the only source of light in that particular area and this was the factor that was attracting him to it


The ordinary light appeared angelic to him maybe because he considered his life to be a dark end; whatever maybe the reason he couldn't stop his legs from moving in that direction


With every step that he took, some part of his tension starting dissolving making him feel different and special


He opened the door of the cafe; it was empty yet full of life


There was a strange freshness which was giving him a royal welcome and making him feel optimistic towards life


He kept on admiring the cafe and was forced to think why was he getting attracted to this place?


His thoughts were broken as a melodious voice knocked the doors of his soul


Girl: Cafe bannd ho chukka hai [The cafe is closed]


He turned to face the girl


All his senses were paralysed as his eyes went into a trance as soon as he saw the epitome of simple beauty standing in front of him


Her twinkling eyes narrated the beauty of her heart; her innocent face could embrace the entire definition of purity in its folds


She was ordinary yet out of this world


The girl was going to say something but before she could speak he started sneezing


Girl: Aapko coffee leni chahiye lagata hai aapko sardi ho gayi hai [U should take a coffee it seems u have catched a cold]


The girl didn't wait for a reply; she walks ahead and starts preparing the coffee


He couldn't stop himself from asking a question


Man: Par aapne toh kaha tha ke cafeteria bannd ho gaya hai [But u were about to close the cafeteria]


Girl: Haan ye sach hai [Yes this is the truth]


The girl did not say anything else and started making the coffee


He kept on admiring her silently as all of a sudden he could visualize his life with the colors of positivity giving him a strange confidence


The girl prepared coffee and offered it to him


Girl: Ye lijiye [Have it]


He took the cup from her hand and was surprised to see black coffee in it; the girl did not add milk in the coffee.


Girl: Kabhi kabhi kuch bada haasil karne ke liye kuch cheezo ki kurbaani zaruri hai, aapki sehet ke liye filhaal ye black coffee hi thik hai, dudh nuksaan kar saktha hai iss liye uski qurbaani deni zaruri thi[Sometimes to achieve great heights u need to sacrifice somethings. This black coffee is the right medicine for your present condition if I had introduced milk then it would have harmed your health]


This simple statement of hers gave a new strength to him, he was so depressed after losing his job but now he was having an all together new outlook towards life, maybe destiny has a better option for him and this job loss was just the beginning of his bright future


He started drinking the coffee, the girl made herself comfortable besides him.


Both were silent as none of them preferred to talk but this silence was also a special moment for them


After few minutes he drank his coffee and the girl picked up the cup and washed it immediately


It was then that he realized that he had a lone note with him and since this was a cafeteria the price of a simple coffee would exceed more than the cash that he was carrying with him


The girl faced him; he had no option but to speak the truth


He removed the ten rupees note that he was carrying with him and placed it in front of the girl's eyes


Man: Maaf kijiyega par iss waqt mere paas itne hi paise hai, agar aap chahe toh main aapke cafe ka kuch kaam karke iss coffee ke paise chukka deta hoon [I am sorry but right now I have only this with me, if u want I will do some work in your cafe and pay the remaining money of the coffee through it]


Girl: Aapko shayad meri baat yaad nahi, maine kaha tha k cafeteria bannd ho gaya hai [I think u have not understood what I was telling u, the cafeteria is closed]


He was shocked to hear this; he lifted his gaze and saw a smiling angel in front of him


Girl: Ye samaj lijiye ke aapne ek dost ke  ghar coffee pee hai aur dost paise lekar coffee nahi pilate [Just imagine that u were at ur friend's house for coffee and as far as I know no friend will charge his pal for a simple coffee]


Her smiling face was a light in his dark life, she was a stranger but this meeting gave him a new hope and a new strength to fight for his success, she was indeed special.


Man: Kya main apni iss dost ka naam jaan saktha hoon [May I know the name of my friend?]


Girl: Madhubala


Oh such a beautiful name and every word of hers was itself a melodious tune that touched the chords of his heart


Man: Mera naam Rishab hai [I am Rishab]


She smiled hearing his name


Madhu: Rishab ab hume ghar jaana chahiye, aap apne sehet ka khayal rakhiyega [Rishab its time to leave for our respective destinations, do take care of your health]


Madhu closed the cafeteria and both of them walked together for few minutes after which Madhu and Rishab took the directions of their respective houses


Rishab knew that this day was indeed unique as he had met an angel today and though she was a complete stranger somewhere or the other she had successfully made a special place in his heart


This night sowed the seeds of a divine relationship in the garden of love


Rishab started visiting the cafeteria regularly and slowly their friendship started blossoming


Rishab got a small job of a theatre artist and a great companion in Madhu.


They started sharing every small and big incidents of their day to day life during their coffee meetings.


Though Rishab was employed now but Madhu never charged him a penny for his special coffee, she told him the day he touches the skies of his dreams that would be the day she will accept whatever token he wants to give her


As time passed their bond became more special and Madhu started loving Rishab


She made it a point to support and encourage him during his depression, to dance and sing with him during his success...Oh they were a perfect couple but she was not sure of Rishab's feelings and she never took steps to know the secret of his heart as he was a special friend of hers whom she couldn't afford to lose


One fine day


Madhu was feeling restless as Rishab had not turned up to meet her


She tried to contact him but all her attempts were in vain, a sudden fear of losing her most precious possession started making way to her heart


She tried to make herself busy but her eyes were fixed on the door and were waiting for the arrival of her Rishab


It was late evening now but still there were no traces of Rishab


Madhu: Rishab aap kaha ho? Jaldi aa jaiye aapki Madhu aapka intezaar kar rahi hai [Rishab where r u? Please come soon your Madhu is waiting for u]


She closed the cafeteria and started taking slow steps still hoping to get a small glimpse of her Rishab on her way back home


That night was a nightmare for her as all insecure thoughts started haunting her; she prayed for the safety of Rishab to the Almighty and drifted of to sleep with great difficulty


Days started passing but the situation remained the same


Everyday she would wake up with the hope to meet Rishab but alas her hopes would take the form of dreams and would remain confined in the boundaries of her eyes.


She got to know from one of the theatre artists that Rishab had got the lead role in one big budget movie which was being directed by a famous director and Rishab had left the theatre group and had flown to Mumbai with the director


She was happy that her Rishab is safe and was very close to his dreams


But her heart was crying as it realized that she was never an integral part of his life, she was just an ordinary girl who used to make coffee for him, maybe he did not consider her as his friend and that's why he left her so easily.


She started to live with this truth, everything remained the same, her cafe was working decently, her day to day life was running smoothly, she welcomed all the guests of her cafe with a smiling face but deep down her heart she felt incomplete...yes she was living a life without her soul, her Rishab making her feel imperfect


After 1 year,


Rishab's debut movie was a blockbuster hit and he was the owner of millions of young hearts


In this one year he had made a special place for himself in Bollywood he was superstar today


He had completed the promotion of one of his movies and had announced a temporary break of few months from movies


On being questioned about the break Rishab had announced his marriage plans and had made it clear that he was going to marry the princess of his heart very soon


This news spread like fire and every individual of the country came to know about this fact


Delhi,


It was yet another day for Madhu she had learned to keep herself busy in some or the other work during this year


She wanted to shut the cafe early today as she was feeling restless and uneasy but the heavy rain was not allowing her to step outside her cafeteria


It was late evening and Madhu went and stood next to the window looking at the night sky


The rain had subsided by now and the night sky was rising in glory with the twinkling stars and the captivating moon


There was a strange romantisim in the breeze which was trying to communicate with her heart giving her the message that tonight is special


The wind was wrapping her in its sensous folds decorating her with the diamonds of the sprinkling rain pearls trying to dress her up like a bride


There was confusion in her heart why was she feeling so different today; it was simply another day of her ordinary life then what was so special?


Her thoughts were interrupted as she sensed someone's presence in the cafe, this fragrance was not alien to her; her soul was decorated with this masculine smell from a very long time


But this can't be true, he can't be here, it has to be yet another illusion of her heart


The footsteps started becoming dominant which made it clear that someone was indeed present in the cafe


Madhu: Cafe bannd ho chukka hai [The cafe is closed]


Rishab: Main toh apne dost ke haath ki special coffee peene aaya hoon [I am here to drink the special coffee made by my dear friend]


Madhu's lifeless body got a new hope with his magical masculine voice, she had forgotten to breathe long back but she could see the rhythmic patterns of her chest dancing happily making it evident that she was alive


Oh was he really here? What if it turned out to be another dream of hers?


No she had to take this risk, it might be an illusion but she was ready to die with this illusion rather than leading a life of a living dead


Her body was trembling and with great difficulty she turned around to face him


Her eyes were closed as she was still fighting a battle between her heart and her mind


He started reducing the distance between them; she could now feel his warm breath on her sensitive skin


He touched her chin and lifted her face delicately


Rishab: Aakhein kholo Madhu kya apne dost ko dekhogi bhi nahi? [Open your eyes Madhu, won't u look at your friend even once?]


He kissed her eyes deeply allowing the pearls of her eyes to flow through her cheeks


Madhu knew her Rishab was here and without wasting a moment she carefully opened the windows of her heart and allowed them them to capture the picture of her Rishab permanently in them


Yes it was indeed her Rishab, the same eyes, the same silence, the same affection, nothing had changed but yet there was an unbearable distance between them


She had loads of questions in her mind but did she possess the right to ask him those questions?


Maybe yes, maybe no, she was not sure...


Without giving her any warning Rishab scooped her in his arms and placed her lovingly on a chair


He went to the kitchen and started preparing coffee


Madhu was in a trance she kept on admiring him


He had worn the same outfit that he was dressed in during their first meeting


She could still sense a warm and loving touch as and when his eyes met hers


This night seemed an exact replica of their first meeting the only difference was they were strangers at that moment yet close and today though there was a name to their relationship but still they were miles apart


Her thoughts were interrupted as once again Rishab made her insane with his possessive touch and soul searing look


Rishab: Ye lo Madhu tumhare liye tumhare Rishab ne coffee banayi hai[Here is the coffee that ur Rishab has made for u Madhu]


Rishab: Mere Rishab? [My Rishab?]


Rishab placed the coffee on the table and scooped her in his arms comfortably


He sat on a chair and placed Madhu on his lap


He offered the coffee to Madhu once again


Rishab: Coffee peeyo Madhu [Drink the coffee Madhu]


She took the cup from his hand and was surprised to see black coffee in it


Rishab: Kabhi kabhi kuch bada haasil karne ke liye kuch cheezo ki kurbaani zaruri hothi hai [Sometimes to achieve great heights u need to sacrifice somethings]


Madhu was depressed as seh heard this statement, she felt Rishab was talking about his superstar status and to achieve this it was important for him to remove her permanently from his life


Rishab: Puchogi nahi mere zindagi ki sabse badi kammiyaabi kya hai jise main haasil karna chahtha hoon [Won't u ask what is the biggest success of my life that I wish to achieve]


Madhu takes a sip of the coffee and tries to hide her emotions in its bitter taste


Madhu: Aapko toh aapki kamiyaabi mil chuki Rishab aaj aap ek bade superstar ho aur iss kamiyaabi ko haasil karne k liye aapko jinki kurbaani deni padi wo sahi thi [U have succeeded in touching the heights of success Rishab and it was essential for u to sacrifice the unimportant elements of ur life to achieve this]


Rishab placed his hand on her waist and pulled her closer


Rishab: Mera superstar banna toh bus ek choti seedi thi apne zindagi ki sabse badi khushi ko haasil karne k liye aur ab main apne uss manzil ke behet kareeb hoon, jaanti ho Madhu main shadi karne jaa raha hoon[Becoming a superstar was a small step to achieve the biggest happiness of my life but today I am very close to my destination do u know Madhu I am going to get married]


It seemed someone had stabbed a knife on her innocent heart; she took few more sips of the coffee


Madhu: Mubarakho kafi khoobsurat aur special hogina wo ladki[Congratulations that girl must indeed be beautiful and special]


Rishab: Tum jaanti ho usse [U know her very well]


Madhu gave a confusing expression to Rishab, her heart was bleeding but she had to ask him this question


Madhu: Ek sawal puchu Rishab aaj ek saal baad aap yaha kyun aaye? [Can I ask u a question why did u come here after 1 year?]


Rishab looked directly into her eyes


Rishab: Aaj meri engagement hai [Today is my engagement]


There was a lump in her throat as she heard this confession from Rishab, Oh so the girl was also going to come over here


She started looking towards the door as now her dreams were shattered beyond repair


But before she could think of something all of a sudden her finger appeared heavy, she moved her eyes towards her finger and got the most magical surprise of her life


Rishab had introduced a ring made from coffee beans into her engagement finger


Emotions were oozing out from Madhu's eyes


Rishab placed her hand close to her heart and uttered lovingly


Rishab: Thik ek saal pehle issi din, issi barsaat ki raat meri zindagi mein ek pari aayi thi jisne mujhe jeene ki sahi raah dhikayi, apni muskurahat se mere din ko sunehra banadiya, apne pyar se mere dil ko dhadakna shika diya...uski khushboo meri saason ko mehkane lagi, ek hi pal mein wo dilkash ajnabee mere saason ki leh bankar mere ruh mein behne lagi[One year before on this very day an angel entered my life, she showed me the correct path of life, she glorified my mornings with her bright smile and taught my heart to beat in the musical rhythm of her love, her fragrance beautified my breaths and within no time the mesmerizing stranger became an integral part of my soul]


Rishab kissed Madhu's hand with utmost love


Rishab: Badi shidat se mohabbat karta hoon usse par ye darr tha k kahi main usse kho na du kyunki main toh ek saadaran sa insaan tha aur wo meri kismat ki sabse pakki dor jiske bagair main adhura hoon, phir uski kayi baat mujhe yaad aayi ke kuch haasil karne k liye kuch khona zaruri hai aur phir dil mein phattar rakhar apni zindagi se kuch dino tak dur rehne ka faisla maine le liya taaki jis din main lautar aau uss din pure haq se usse apni dulhan banakar apni dhadkano mein sametkar le ja saku [I love her wholeheartedly but I had a fear what if I lose her forever? I was an ordinary man and she is my destiny and I can't even dream of leading my life without her, I recollected her statement that u need to sacrifice something to touch ur dreams. With a heavy heart I decided to bear the pangs of separation with my life for some days so that I could work on the path to win her love and claim her permanently by making her my bride and keep her close to my heart forever]


Madhu had tears in her eyes, Rishab kissed the entire length of her cheeks and requested her not to shed these magical pearls any more


Rishab: Madhu iss ek saal mein maine  ek naam haasil kiya, daulat ruthba aur izzat haasil ki who sabkuch paaya jisse ke humari zindagi khushiyon se beet sake, jaanti ho iss ek saal mein aisa ek pal nahi tha jismein mujhe tumahri yaad nahi aayi par phir bhi apne dil ko samjhaya maine kyunki main chahta tha jis din tumhara naam puri duniya k same mere saath jude wo sirf aur sirf meri ardhangini ke roop mein ho, meri dost ya girlfriend k roop mein nahi aur issi liye maine  iss din ka intezaar kiya, aaj wahi din hai jab hum ek saal pehle mile the aur aaj main apni zindagi ki sabse badi daulat tumse maangne ki gustaki karne ja raha hoon [Madhu I got name, respect, money in this one year I earned everything that would ensure a happy future for both of us, I remembered u in every second of my life but I stopped myself to meet u since I wanted the day your name is connected with mine it should be in the form of my beloved wife and not as my friend or my girlfriend. I waited for this special day to arrive, Madhu last year we met each other on this same day and today I want to ask u to gift me with my most precious treasure]


Rishab: Meri zindagi ko apne pyar ki coffee se mehkadoh Madhu? Kya humari iss anhoki prem kahani ko uski kamiyaabi ki bulandiyon tak pauchane mein meri madat karogi Madhu? Kya mera haath thamkar mujhe iss kaiynaat ka sabse khushkismat insaan banaoogi Madhu? Apne batkismat dost ki kismat bankar kya uski zindagi mein pravesh karna pasand karogi Madhu? Kya main wo khushnaseeb hoon jisse tumhara umr bhar ka saath milega? Kya  tum meri humsafar bankar meri adhure zindagi ki dastan ko pura karogi? [Spread the fragrance of your love filled coffee in my life Madhu. Will u help me to take our unexpressed love to the heights of success? Will u hold my hands and make me the luckiest person of this universe? Will u be the lucky charm of ur friend and enter his life as his destiny? Can I be the lucky man to be by your side throughout my life? Will u be my soulmate and complete my incomplete life with your love?]


Madhu was rendered speechless in front of Rishab's confession


Today she had realized that if her love was unconditional then Rishab's love was divine


He had proved one thing that she believed in "If ur love wants to go let him go, if he is yours he will come back or else u should understand that he was never yours"


Her Rishab was back in her life, yes he was her man, her love, her soulmate, she wanted to say so many things but she was not getting the correct words to express her emotions


She captured his lips inside the territory of her love and allowed her heart to do the talking


The kiss expressed her loneliness and his sacrifice thus making their first kiss a blissful act as both of them entered the region which was more beautiful than a dream


Rishab kissed every inch of her sweet petals as Madhu pulled him closer and in a matter of seconds their kiss entered the territory of passion and desire


He bit her lower lip gently and took permission to taste her sweet nector; Madhu parted her lips and gave him the permission


Madhu's mouth had the taste of bitter coffee in it but this was the most relishing taste for both of them as their love story was written with coffee beans, a cup of coffee which had changed their entire life making them soulmates from total strangers


They submitted their existence to one another through this one kiss'a kiss which had the taste of coffee in it...


Cupid was showering its blessings on this magical couple as finally the arrows that it had released during their first meeting had successfully captured them into the magical folds of love making them soulmates for a lifetime

 

THE END

 

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Link to my other Maaneet FFs

 
Dil mil Gaye thread 1
 
Tujhko jo Paaya thread 1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1926300

Jaane tu ya Jaane na Thread 1
 
 
 
Bus Aapke Hum ho Gaye Thread 1
 
 
Ek main hoon aur ek tu Thread 1
 

Maaneet OS : Hothe Hothe Pyar Ho Gaya (completed)
 

Maaneet OS : Forever Yours (completed)

 
Maaneet OS: Ikraar by Chance
 
 
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow...that was awesome!!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

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nice! totally awesome! loved the way the story shaped up... the flow of the story was nothing but sweet! a simple and yet a wonderful story! thank you for the wonderful OS and also the PM!
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superb os...

loved it...

thank u very much fr such lovely os n also fr d pm...


  

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Awsome os loved it
madhubala nd rk..finally one
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firstly i read in maaneet version os nw dis version still i ll stick to my earlier command i.e., its beautifully presented os but sorry i lik more in maaneet version unki baath hi kuch aur hai๐Ÿ˜‰ Edited by mounacuty - 11 years ago
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woww..that is awesome..๐Ÿ‘                                                                              looking forward to your more topics.
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such a cute and romantic os
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Congrast Piya for new one
wowww!! simply Amazing...superb
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Awesome os
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