What kind of separation is this? Arhi OS

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What kind of separation is this?

This is a sad luv story.Plz dont b angry with me.I hop it'll touch ur heart.plz giv me a detailed comment

What kind of separation is this?

Arnav and Khushi were travelling by car.Suddenly he stopped the car.
K:Why did you stop the car?
He smiled:To ask you something.
K:What?
A:Now a days i am not able to sleep.But i dream a lot about you.Am i in love with you?Tell me Khushi.
She was surprised.She blushed.
He opened the door and got out of the car.He jumped with joy.
He sang as he was over excited.
'kyun aajkal neend kum khwaab zyada hai
lagta khuda ka koi nek iraada hain
kal tha fakir aaj dil shehzada hain
lagta khuda ka koi nek iraada hain
kya mujhe pyar hain aah
kaisa khumaar hain aah
kya mujhe pyar hain aah
kaisa khumaar hain aah
o o o o o ...'(Woh lamhe).
She was smiling like a flower.She appeared to him like a colourful butterfly.He held her hand and danced.
He took out a gold ring which had a ruby stone on it from his pocket.He kneeled down before her.
A:Khushi,will you marry me?
She blushed nodding her head.
He slipped the ring on her finger.They both smiled.
Suddenly they heard a voice from behind.
"Gold?Give us gold".
They turned back.They saw some scary men.They had an evil smile on their faces.Suddenly they surrounded them.
Arnav and Khushi got scared.
1 guy:Give us that gold ring.
K:No.I won't.Just because this is my lover's love.If it was some other costly ring i would have sacrificed it.
They slapped her.Arnav roared like an animal.He raised his hand to beat them.But before that they hit him.His face got injured.Arnav fell down.
Khushi cried loudly.
K:Nooo!
She ran towards him.She held him tightly.She looked at his wounds.She touched his wounds.He felt pain.She took his hand and made him touch the blood on his face and kept his fingers on her forehead.Now her forehead had a red mark which looked like vermillion.She looked like a married lady.
Arnav held her close to him:Khushi,why did you do this?

Khushi held him even more closer to her:I am happy that now you married me.I am your wife now.

A:Khushi...i can't understand anything.
K:What if we won't be able to get married?So i decided to conduct our wedding now.
A:Khushi...what are you saying?I know that we are in danger now.But nothing will happen to our lives.

Khushi's tears rolled down her cheeks.
They came towards them.
One guy:Are you guys having romance?You both can't excape from us.
Arnav and Khushi looked at them with fear.

They stood up.
One guy:You people refused to obey us by giving your gold.So we can't forgive you both.
One of them hit Khushi's head with a stick.
She screamed:Arnav!

Arnav was shocked:Khushi!
Khushi was about to fall down.Arnav held her and sat down keeping her head on his lap.
A:Khushi...my love...
K:I have no worries.In fact I am happy as we are married.I would have been sad if i had died before becoming your wife.
Arnav's tears fell on her face.She closed her eyes.Arnav cried loudly:Khushiii!
His heart cried out of pain.His heart was bleeding...
A:What kind of a separation was this Khushi?
He became numb.


(http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aZG307cqbfM) (Listen to this song while reading)

Kaisi ye judai hai, aankh bhar meri aayi hai
Mera dil doob raha, ise bas ab doobne do
Ye pehli bar hua, ye kyu ehsaas hua
Mera dil ab toot raha, ise bas ab tootne do….

He felt that he was in a dark room.He was extremely weak.He was surprised to see Khushi in front of him.He could not believe his eyes.He was too weak to utter her name.His eyes were blinking due to extreme tiresome.He kept his arm on her shoulder.His hand was shivering.His lips shivered:Khushi!

She wiped the blood stain on his face with her shawl.He closed his eyes.
A:I feel better now Khushi.
Then he opened his eyes slowly.He looked at her deeply.
K:Why are you looking at me like this?
A:Khushi,you had gone away from me forever.Right?You are a dream now.You left me forever.
He cried.
K:Arnav!
A:Please Khushi...please let me cry.
Mujhe bas ab rone do,is gam ko behne do
Ye sath jo toot raha, ise aaj bas chhootne do
Kaisi ye judai hai.. aankh bhar meri aayi hai
Mera dil doob raha ise bas ab doobne do

K:Please don't cry Arnav.I am here.
Arnav looked at her with surprise.He touched her face.



Suddenly she disappeared.
He was shattered.
He hought of Khushi's smiling face.Then he remembered her death scene.He cried loudly.
Ek bat satati hai, jab teri yaad aati hai
Kyu mujhse rooth gaya, jaane kyu door gaya
Ye pehli bar hua, ye kyu ehsas hua
Jane anjane kyuu…mujhe tumse pyar hua
Hanste hanste rota hu, rote rote hansta hun
Phir khud se kehta hun…jo hona tha…hoo hi gayaa...(Jannat2).

The thieves hit him.They tore his shirt.
One of them pointed the gun at him.
He was least bothered about it as his heart was sunk completely in thoughts about Khushi .
He did'nt make any attempt to escape from them as he wanted to go near Khushi.That man shot him.Arnav fell down dead.
Those thieves brought Khushi's dead boy and put it near Arnav's dead body.One of them removed the gold ring from her finger.The thieves laughed.

The end...



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Akorshi thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

oh dear such a cute n touchy sad story...

really whn he proposed her ...she accept n all happy but suddenly dark came...to separate them...on this separation they united forever as before khushi die she was wife of arnav...n arnav being a hubby tried to protected her..but failed and he embrace the death..to reach khushi...

wow! awesome...OS... 

Edited by Akorshi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
so sad
nice work
awesome song
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was very sad
Nice os
thanks for pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sad but great!! They died but are still together!! It was a really touching story. I can't believe someone will kill someone for a gold ring but it's possible. I guess there are people like that's out there. 😊 By the way is it this a long enough detailed comment for you!! Lol I'm just joking!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
so they both died 😭
stupid thieves 😡
amazing yet sad os
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Posted: 11 years ago
no no no no no no no no no no no no...pls edit it yaaar!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome and amazing work yar.it was very touchy.i had tears in my eyes.i want to dedicate a song to them,

na hai ye pana,na khona hi hai,tera na hona jane,kyun hona hi h,shor me khamoshi,thodi si madhoshi hai,tum se hi.(jab we met)
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Posted: 11 years ago
omgg...
such a touchy. hearty OS...
really...awesome job
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg Jazmine that was such a touchy SS...
I felt tears pricking my eyes as I read it...
And those b*******...They killed two innocent people just for a ring...and even laughed over their dead bodies!!!!
Anyways it was beautifully written and thanx for the PM dear...