Violin from Goa Last Part Gurmeet Drashti SS

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Violin from Goa Part 1
 
Thanks a lot Ratna for making this beautiful Siggy
 
u all will be angry 4 not naming Gurti's characters Maan & Geet.But here Drashti s an anglo indian.Then how can her name b Geet?4 a change i named Gurmet Ajy.plz don't lose interest & read & comment on my SS...

Ajay got inside the train.The train moved slowly.He got bored.Suddenly he saw a girl's curly hair blowing.It was the hair of the girl who was reading the news paper.She was sitting on the opposite side.

He longed to see her face.She folded the newspaper.

Now he could view her face clearly.He was bowled over by her beautiful face. She tried to manage the blowing hair strands which were falling on her face.Ajay got disturbed.

A:Let the hair be free.Let your hair touch your face.

She stared at him.He go embarrassed.

A:I am sorry.Actually before seeing your face I saw your hair.I really liked it.So I felt sad when you troubled your hair.

She:What?Are you crazy?

A:I was getting bored.So I was looking at your hair.Just a time pass.

She:You were observing my hair for time pass?Strange.

A:I am sorry.By the way I am Ajay Mehra.I am from Mumbai itself.Your good name please?

Without any interest: Violin Golsavio.

A:Wow!Sweet name.

She smiled:Thank you.

A:At last you smiled.

She smiled.

A:Why did your parents name you Violin?

V:Why?Any problem?

A:No.It's a rare name.That's why.

V:My father loves Violin.That's why.

A:O!What about you?You like violin?

V:Yes.

A:That means you love music.Then you will like me.You father will also accept me.

V:What?

A:Nothing.Where are you staying?

V:We were in Kerala.A few years back we shifted to Goa.So we are hf keralites ao.I was in Mumbai for studies.Now my course got over.So I am going back to my place.Goa.

A:Wow!I am also going to Goa to stay with my friend Prateek Chopra.He took a house for rent. He is going o direct a film.He chose the beautiful Go to write he script.He hopes he will get a thread if he stays there. I am going to compose songs for the film.Both lyrics and music.

V:Wow!We all love music.

Ajay was flown away by her beautiful smile.She was stylish as well as innocent which was a rare combination.Her blowing hair' fragrance was making him blind.

A:Actually seeing you automatically a song got composed in my mind.

V:Again you are mad.

A:No.True.

He started singing '

'Dil Hote Jo Mere Seene Mein Do
Doosra Dil Bhi Main
Tumhe Deta Todne Ko

Hosanna..Hosanna..Hosanna
Ho..Sannna...Hosanna..Ho..

Dilkash Thi Woh Shaam Pehle Pehal
Jab Ke Tumse Mili Thi Nazar
Aisa Chakraya Ki Ab Ye Na Jaanu
Ke Jaaun Tto Jaaun Kidhar
Hosanna Tum Samne Thi Pal
Hosanna Agle Hi Pal Thi Ojhal''{Ek deewana tha}.

While singing he dreamt of romancing Violin.

Violin was surprised listening to him sing.

V:How was it possible?You are a genius.That's why you could compose a song within some moments.


Ajay smiled:That's because of you Violin.You inspired me to create this beautiful song.


Their eyes got stuck up to each other.

Slowly Violin turned off her face.They were silent for some time.

Ajay broke the silence.

A:In your family are you the only one who has curly hair?

V:No.My sister Grace also has curly hair.We got our grand mother's hair.

A:Which shampoo do you use?Your hair has sweet smell.

She got irritated:You are sick.No doubt.

He burst into laughter.Seeing him laugh automatically she also laughed.

The train reached Goa.

They go out of the train.

A:It was nice talking to you Violin.I had a nice time with you.You made my train journey interesting.

She smiled:You were also interesting.I enjoyed your naughty talk.

They both giggled.

V:Bye.

A:Bye.

They both went opposite ways.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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An amazing start!!! you should continue!!!!!! would love to read it!!!!!!!
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Really loved it!Please do carry on would love to lnow how they have their next encounter.By the way Violin is a really unusual name,but I like it!😊.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thats superb story
great start
thanks for pm
cont. soon
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hiii
congrats on da new ff
awesome update
loved it
interesting concept
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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jab jinko milna hota hai woh mil hi jate hai...same as violin n ajay...

interesting concept n starting...

loved it...

thank u very much fr such lovely story n also fr d pm...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesme start
waitng to knw their next encounter
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superb... interesting👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow its interesting...
nice start... loved it...
hahaha ajay irritated violin to the core and nice song...
continue soon...
waiting for next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice .. though i dont like the change in names
 
but i found it really sweet when he asked for the name of the shampoo