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Wow! Its a pity I came across this story NOW almost 2 months after you finished it..but thank god I did. It is in one word BRILLIANT. I personally don't understand politics at all, I tried to in your story. What captivated me was the depth of the characters and their unconventional relationships.

I think your ending here on IF was perfect for your story. But I am a sucker for sappy, happy endings..wanting to believe everything becomes okay at the end, so I'm going to read the epilogue now.

It was wonderful reading this story! It will be in memory as one of the best stories I have read.

I ll tell you my story with your story from the beg. When I read the first few chapters I was a bit uncomfortable with shayam and khushi and arnav letting them be. But then I read more abd I got really hooked. Liked tour take on characters. And you were right the ending on your blog is too sweet!fir me it ended before the epilogue
You ate a very good writer. Really really enjoyed it. X

I finished this one faster.. Lol!

I m not too much into politics but I could understand this. It reaked of how politics is dirty even behind a nice politician. It sucks big time. While I was a lil disgusted with Arnav in te beginning, I think I was utterly turned off by him towards the end. He surely had no spine and allowing khushi to use herself was sickening!

Payal turned out a smart ass.. Have to give it to her. Her check mate to aakash was brilliant and grin worthy. NK remained a loyal friend to the end which is rare yet present. Sad that shashi could not see the pain her daughter was going thru.

Felt for Anjali and the conversation in the restroom was a lil suspicious of her knowledge. Am glad she made the smart choice.

Shyam... No comments..
But the whole story was like a chess game.. Calculated movements and checkmates! Brilliant!

Aman and La were too cute!

Oh my my.

Brilliant piece of writing! I wish that a day will come when we are shown something like this on Indian TV. But I might have great grandkids by then :/ The last time I watched something that was this gripping was Rann. IDK if you ve watched the movie, but to me it was Amitabh Bacchan's best movie ever. I d strongly recommend it.

P.S. Just read the epilogue and came back. I LOVE happy endings. I dont care that they re unreal and it doesnt happen in real life. actually that's precisely the point. Because it doesnt happen in real life, it should happen SOMEWHERE . A big thank you to your friend Liya, thanks to her , I 'll not drown in my tears tonight.
PPS - When I first read the part about Payal going back to Akaash, I was like WTH woman, even if he's hot what are you doing? By the time she reached Arnav's I had a whole new respect for her. Damn. That's what elder sisters are supposed to be like. Not the waterwork factories that we see in the show 👏 Good job!!

Hey i just found out ur ff and was reading it till i got nothing but preview on IF...you mentioned to go to wordpress but i guess i need you to permit me to access you blog...or may be not...i'm not good at all this but i really wanna read this ff...😔

Thanks for the update and the link... :)

...thorughly intoxicated I am after reading this..

Hey came to know abt ur FF through some recommendation list...

hun i m nt able to access ur blog...hlp plz...