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reflorated thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
reserved. will comment after reading the entire thing.
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Posted: 12 years ago
My stomachs are jalebi paste LOL after the epilogue...BUT I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You're so talented :P do keep writing!

-Abi ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Alright,Rafa, first off- I liked the IF epilogue more. Like way more. Now- take a bow for coming up with a concept as brilliant as this one. WOW! Beautifully flawed characters! Can I just say that I LOVE Khushi! Something about self-sacrifising damsel's always gets my sympathy up... like really.
Aman- WOW!! Whatta man, honey. WHATTA MAN <3 I Loouubbb hhiiimm... He is the best Aman's I have come across so far on the forum.
Akash/Shyam- Mother f**king SOBs!!!! I hated them! Like... 🤢
Payal- I loved her too.
And last, but certainly not the least... Anjali- GOD I love that woman. Like How I love her!!! It isn't even funny... WOW!!!
Dude. This is SOME story. I just can't speak. bloody brilliant this was, like seriously. I LOVED IT!!! just like you thought I would.
And yeah, I like Yamir too. He is like me. through and through like me.
-V
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Posted: 12 years ago
A wonderful ff...I loved it...excellent story and the way the story is carved is just too good :)
Edited by debby_11 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
After reading the first 2 chapters m so confused ……they completely blew my mind n I had to comment ill get back to reading now :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
An emotional roller coaster loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi rafa, I just read ur FF intoxicated all in one go! I must say it was splendid. I don't have the link to ur blog. Pls could u pm Tht for me do Tht I could read the epilogue which u think is ideal for this story even though I love happy endings!!!! Thnks.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I just read this entire ff in one go...brilliant!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
What an intriguing exciting covert operation that has romance and true love. Thrilling throughly enjoyed it. I like the way it ended but will read the epilogue too. This was one heck of a joy ride. Thank you
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dropping a comment here to read later :)
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