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just found this, looks brilliant

man this was an awesome ff... wat an ending it's too good to b true... i am too glad to have read this

rafa, that story was just brilliant!
loved how you wove yamir's emotions in a garb of hilarity and later despair..

i love how you left it open ended.

thank you for a great read!

Would like to read this one after reading the starting. .
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Brilliant ending Rafa!

WHAT WAS THAT?!

A great ending loved it ...dont know about arnav but kushi did the right thing...keep on writting

wonderful...any other ending wouldn't have justified it. Absolutely loved the last line esp. when I juxtapose it with the last line of one of the previous chapters-"I just don't love you enough"
one thing i didnt find quite believable was that Yamir, being the smart boy that he is, never ever Googled his mother till he was 16. but thats ok, poetic license and liberties are ok in a story.
it was a superb FF and i really loved reading it. keep it up. looking forward to more mindblowing stories like this. bye for now:)

Hey, I just caught up with this story again, chapter 6 to the end. Brilliant writing, as always.. Loved the open ending. Each chapter was really well written, and the last few chapters, from the sacrifice onwards were all really powerful.. I loved Khushi's strength and loved how Yamir turned out. Great story. :)

I love this story , it was just great the all the parts too bad it had to end