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whitesnow

@whitesnow

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Posted: 12 years ago

read it all.
didn't write any thing b4 b/c m nt good wid words.
its really good piece of work dear.
but something missing?????
really don't no what and why .
Do something great wid YAMIR.
something amazing yet unexpected.

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meghnas

@meghnas

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Totally loved the entire story!! Liked how you left the ending open-ended. I am imagining that Arnav uses all the power he has as chief minister to have Khushi and their son back into his life, as well as win the election coz of all the good he has done till now!

Loved the beginning and the 'ramblerouser' that Yamir is 😆😆 Yamir-Arnav's first meeting - very well written, and Arnav-Khushi was awww!

you've written it in a fab way, and will definitely miss reading more of this one!

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#773

Awesome ending loved Khushi's ultimatium and Yamir really was a great kid loved his confrontation with Arnav and my heart went out for him when he found out the truth.

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