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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

Love the storyline and charcterization. Eager to see where it goes.

Update soon!!😃

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beccky

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

Amazing storyline awsm... politics and arhii.. loved it... so different...!!!

Do you know how amazingly you wrote this one... speechless no words yaar!!! your imagination rock! :P ;)

still so many secrets to uncover i guess.. m confused but yes.. in this one i got some answers.. and would like to know more...!!

glued to it too...!!! do continue soon!!

thanks for the PM!!!

beccky

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tammana.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

Amazing update !!!!!🤗

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Madhurya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

wow Wat a update... i am in love with Khushi's strong will n personality... u are doing a great work with this...

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neverbefore

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

So so glad that Khushi's even more of a class act in your FF. Love the background story...especially NK. He manages to retain the 'aawww' factor wherever he is!! I'm hoping Payal's going to do something for Khushi at some point.

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Blue Rose

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

Arisai...

sigh what do i tell...well only that i was silly to have read your updates so late...you remind me of another movie i just loved ...Rajneeti...the poltics the games played behind in it and how love is all about agreement...

ah!!!!! you are brilliant and i just loved your tale and I am kicking myself mentally for not reading the updates immediately...just got caught up in work and forgot that i got love by reading wonderful tales like this!!!!!

*Takes a bow*

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PinkPari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

I know I'm late to the story but this is brilliant!

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Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#238

Loved the story.

It's different and quite bold. Khushi has been sleeping around with two guys at the same time! Awww how is that possible! I think anything is possible to get the power and money. the politicians don't have any norms and values.

Payal's character is almost same like the show. i hope she talks to Khushi.

Nice update and thanks for the PM.

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Mira

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Posted: 12 years ago

#239

I just caught up with all the part in the ff...
amazingg...i love the mystery..
and the politics..wowww..
i feel bad for khushi she is always misunderstood...
but she is strong
cant wait to read more
:)

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