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Posted: 12 years ago
AWWW! The NK and Khushi camaraderie was sweet and funny but it was Payal's relationship with Khushi that stole my heart away. That was really really touching! And the fact that Arnav gave her a gift...AWWW! Amazing. Absolutely AMAZING update!

-Abi ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update khushi sacrificing to keep her family safe even do she got their hate instead payal pov was so emotional and touching asr bought he a gift loved it and nk and khushi that was so cute loved it well written perfectly done thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the PM.
Just read this story and its amazing.
Very different, really interesting.
I was shocked at first when i found it was Khushi and Shyam having an affair and i have to say even more shocked to know that Arnav knew about it, not really got my head around that yet but i guess why its called dirty politics.
Like the Khushi/NK friendship and it was hilarious that she took advantage of him 😆
I'm still trying to work out the characters but i guess we will eventually understand as you continue writing.
Great job so far, AS USUAL.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I had just time to catch up! thanks for the pm!
what can i say this story is just wow unbelievable just 4updates and i'm already addicted to it!😊
the opening chapter was marvelous!
I just found it sad for khushi that arnav let her sleep with shyam 😵
but arnav was so cute while he was giving khushi the gift😍
and i like this feisty, intelligent and tough khushi!
hehe and amen is a hell of a guy😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved this chapter...we got to meet more characters ...aman!!! am intrigued to learn what is gonna happen next!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Totally great update loved the background on Khushi's life!!!
Poor girl always thinking about her family & they misinterpreting her as an act of selfishness!!!!!
Awesome update & thanks for PM 😊 😊 😊 x x
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE IM HOOK ON UR STORY N EACH ONE OF THE CHARACTERS LOVED IT WORDS CANT DESCRIBE UR UPDATES LOVE THEM CANT WAIT TO READ MORE THANKS FOR THE PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
Having read all four updates I have to say your story is dark yet fascinating. Well done. 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
what a riveting tale!! great job!! cant wait to read more! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love the storyline!! 😃 eager to see where it is going..
update soon.
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