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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update , luks like everyone is using khushi for their selfish needs
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow..pretty awsm!! thnx for d pm:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
The update was brilliant
Can't wait to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yes rafa you updated :D
stalking had its perks!
So i love the whole nk khushi friendship
her and him had it off and she took advantage of him LOL!
aman needs to get laid so lavanyas there
arnav was so sweet buying her something
im liking how your unfolding the mystery im loving it
i feel sorry for payal i really hope she talks to khushi :(
Edited by -Chinnu- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb... I am absolutely hooked on these characters...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Whoa! Whoa!

She lost her Virginity to NK. LOL! Her friendship with NK is cute, I like how he is there for her.

Hmmm So family hasn't forgiven her yet and they don't take to her?

Damn Arnav you're so hot and fit! He really does love her. But I guess politics will make this all more twisted...

Sleeping with Shyam Bleurghh!

Well I don't know what to make out of Payal's character? She wants to talk to Khushi? I hope she does I kinda feel sorry for her!

Amazing update as usual!

Can't wait for me you defo have me hooked!
Edited by Aveiro - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
You ,My friend are a brilliant storyteller.
I am hooked with each and every character in your story :-)
Very well written .
Keep up the good work.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yayyy please do continue to update everyday, I LOVE THIS. And Khushi. She is a brilliant, independent and strong woman. I love that. What she did for her family was beautiful to read about and I'm so glad that she has an ally in Payal even if it is secretly. I have a feeling that this Akash Singh is playing Payal, awww I hope not!
Hahaha when Khushi tells Aman that he needs to get laid hahah. I love Aman. He's fascinating. And the way that he's so suave and collected is fabulous.
The characters are all so interesting, I constantly want to know more about them! And the more twisted the better so don't hesitate on that front!
Thank you so much, you're doing an awesome job! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
really glad the way you've shown Arnav and Khushi's realtionship. Loved Nk and Khushi's bonding. I had my fingers crossed for that one...and yes They are perfect...
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was fantastic
The way u showed Khushi's character frm Payal's point was awesum
Aman n Khushi hahahahahaha
Bechara Aman
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