SS : Control Vs. Chaos Part 8 (Conclusion) - Page 42

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waiting for sequel

Interesting end. Liked it.
Waiting for the sequel. I won't be able to comment or read for the next month, but plz don't stop PMing me. Thank uEdited by afghangrl21 - 11 years ago

WOW!! I m gonna die

  Edited by saishasingh - 11 years ago

interesting, loved the story, waiting for the sequel, and also please update your very recent ss which is only prologue updated, waiting to read that also. 

pretty hot

woah hawwwttt...

da nw sequel sounds scary...

Nice end.. Khusi trusting Arnav completely ..
Waiting for the sequel...

D temperature around me suddnly seems to hv increased..*fans herslf* *gulps down a glass of cold water*
Sarah, u r indulging us so much wid such wonderful explicit descriptions of lovemaking..our husbands will suffer..cz our xpectations level is getting higher n higher..
n d most beautiful part of d scenes was dat love nvr left d two of them..it was evident in evry gesture n word..
m so eagerly waiting for d sequel nw..

Nice waiting for the sequel happy writing:):):)))

wow beautiful ending. at first when arnav tied her, i was like uhh W*F!? but then i realized the purpose behind it, and wow, it brought out a great realization in khushi. you beautifully tied the ending back to the title. and holy shiznits, the little snippet of the sequel seems AMAZING!!!!!! Seems like it could be anjali,but who knows, since you always have zarbardst twists! cant waittt!!!!! :)