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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: PunyaS

Amby,


thanks for updating a beautiful post even when you are not feeling well. I know how annoying it is to battle pain and trying to think straight, simultaneously. So a big applause for that! πŸ‘

Coming to the update - It was marvelous!!!! Loved the way you showed the growing up time and that 'dadadada' was so cute. These li'l moments which you describe beautifully and effortlessly make the read much more enjoyable.

Love you for these lovely updates! πŸ€—

P.S. - think you are coming back from the FBs in the next post. Eager to know what happened to Nih and co.


Thanks Punya!

haha im glad you liked it.. I figured these milestones were a big thing and there's no way they're ever going to show any of them in the show.. But it's a part of real life and RaYa should ahve the chance to experience that happiness too 😊. You know choti choti baaton mein badi badi khushiyan in the midst of being apart so much. These little moments will stay with them forever.

Abey, Nih and co ko goli maaro LOL.. I'll bring them back in one more update to settle the problem and that's it. This is about RaYa and their life hahaa. I don't have patience to write Nih, Mama and Sid scenes.. I even eliminated Sharmas for now LOL..

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ChitaRK

Amby

superb as usual. Nice depiction of Ram's emotions and Priya's teasing. Now waiting to come back to present scenario. U promised me something. Remember?πŸ˜‰


Thanks Chitra Di

Oh yes, it's coming in the next update lol.

Sorry, might not be what u expect cuz there's some pretty hot stuff out there right now and I am still a shy writer..You know with age and embarrassment and weak theory and practicals and all hahaha...And i like romance more..πŸ˜‰ ..Tried my best LOL. Let's see how it turns out.. Will post it later! Hang tight!
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
Amby Bambi - you did it again. Fabulous chapters girl.

Loved Prem's first word.. and Priya teasing Ram. Very sweet moments between Ram and Prem.. N Priya watching for far way :)

Loving your version of Season 2 - Ram and Priya as parents.

Looking forward to next one already... :)
Hopefully, we will get to hear Prem say Mamma ... ha ha ha


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Posted: 12 years ago
ambar...beautiful update.. and thnx for that fast fwd..coz we cant see raya apart..dis ff always gets me goosebumps and teary eyed..:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amby
That was a cute and emotional update girl. Loved the milestones and the way you expressed their sadness of parting everytime. Thank you!!
Fabulous and loved it!
Take care and get well soon..πŸ€—
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys!

Thank you so much for all your comments!!
I have the next part ready! Actually I've had it ready for a while now but had to finish up with the flashbacks and stuff because I promised myself I would try and cover all the stuff they wouldn't show in the show and take this FF really slow so it can go on for a really long time lol.

So, first of all, CONGRATULATIONS! You have all made it through the flashback phase and we are now back to the most awaited present! And I don't know if you guys remember where it ended so i'll post the next part in a few minutes with a short precap. Hope you guys like it!! Don't forget to like/comment! And for this part, all criticism is welcome LOL πŸ˜‰

Hugs to you all! πŸ€—
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Posted: 12 years ago

Warning: Reader discretion is advised... πŸ˜‰

This post is dedicated to Amy, Angie, Mittal, Punya, Nandini, Anu, Chitra Di, Gita Di, Priyanka, Lalita Di, and all those who waited eagerly for me to come out of flashback mode. Hope I live up to your expectations guys!!

Recap:

Ram and Priya both nod and leave. They both go to Prem's room. Ram carefully puts Prem down on his bed and puts the comforter over him. He sits there and caresses his head lightly, ensuring that Prem is fast asleep. He watches Prem intently while he is sleeping peacefully. Priya comes and places a hand on Ram's shoulder, both of them watching Prem sleep, and remembering the events that led to this beautiful miracle in their life'


Part 16

*Back to the Present*


Priya wiped her own tears and then held Ram's face to her waist tightly. She caressed his hair as she felt his tears through her saree.

Those memories were way harder on Ram than they were on her. He had faced almost losing both of them. It had shaken him to the core at the time. After that he had been reluctant to leave them at all. He was ready to give everything up and stay back with them forever. Priya had been the one who had encouraged him to go on with it. Why should Niharika get away with everything she had done in the last 25 years? Why should she get what she wants and win? Why should his father's company go down because of her? Priya was determined to make her pay. Make her pay for hurting her Ram so badly. They would finish what they had started.

Priya made Ram look up at her. She wiped his tears and shook her head. She sat down on the bed next to him and caressed Prem's head a bit. Ram stood up.

Ram: Mujhe Vikram ko phone karna hai. Kuch zaruri baat hai jo usse batana bhool gaya. Tum yahan Prem ke paas betho thodi der ke liye, phir kamre mein aajao. Main phone karke wahi aajaunga.

Priya smiles a little at him and nods. She stretches out next to Prem, her head propped on one arm. She was watching him sleep, snore slightly with his mouth open. She ran her fingers through his hair ever so gently. He was just like Ram. When Ram wasn't with her, she felt like he was there. She leaned down and kissed him on the forehead, and then stood up. She looked at back him, gave him a flying kiss. She turned off the lights and closed the door quietly.

She turned the hall and headed to her own room. She opened the door, closed it behind her and locked it, assuming Ram was already in the room. When she turned around, the sight in front of her shocked her. The room was dark, and there were candles everywhere. On the table there was a cake, with a candle in it and a knife next to it. She looked up to see Ram's shadow standing by the table. He was holding a candle, and the light from the candle lit up his face. He put the candle down and walked over to her. He extended his hand, asking for hers and she gladly gave her hand to him. He led her to the table where the cake was. He made her stand facing the cake and stood behind her. He slid his arms around her waist and nuzzled her neck. He made his way up to her ear. She closed her eyes. His touch was sending an electric current through her body.

Ram, whispering: Happy Birthday Priya.

Not being able to take it anymore, she spun around and threw her arms around his neck. She rubbed her cheek against his and ran her hand up and down the back of his neck, her fingers brushing gently through his hair.

Priya, whispering: Thank you. Aapko yaad tha? Main bhool gayi thi.

Ram separated her from himself and looked down at her. He narrowed his eyes a little and then raised his eyebrow.

Ram: Are, yeh kaisa sawaal hai? Main tumhara janam din kaise bhool sakta hu?

Priya blushed and lowered her eyes, her arms still wrapped around his neck. She played with the hair on the back of his head. Ram tightened his grip around her waist and pulled her closer. She lowered her head as he bent down and gently kissed her forehead.

She looked up into his dreamy dark chocolate brown eyes, and instantly got lost in his warmth and love. The tiny specs of sadness had disappeared. He smiled down at her.

Ram: Cake kaate?

She nodded, smiling dreamily, but didn't move. She was still lost in his eyes. Ram smiled seeing his wife in that state. He loved it when she lost herself in him.

Ram: Priya?

Priya, still lost in his eyes: Hmmm?

Ram: Cake kaatne ke liye, tumhe mujhe chodna padega. Cake wahan hai, table pe.

Priya snapped out of her daze and immediately let him go. But he tightened his grip around her waist even more. She looked at him questioningly.

Ram: Lekin agar tum chaho, toh hum cake ko bhula kar, woh subah wala adhoora kam poora kar sakte hai.

He winked at her. She blushed and lowered her eyes, trying to release herself.

Priya, shyly: Nahin, mujhe cake kaatna hai.

Ram, naughtily: Pakka? Are you sure?

She looks at him, seeing the naughty smile on his face. She repeated herself, more firmly this time.

Priya: Pakka, mujhe cake kaatna hai.

He smiled again, and let her go. He turned her around and stood behind her, arms around her waist. He rested his chin on her shoulder.

Ram: Candle blow karne se pehle ek wish karna.

Priya closed her eyes and made her wish. She wished for all this to end soon so that they can be a proper family. She wanted Ram to be with her always, and for Prem to have his father around him all the time. She wanted the three of them to be proper family, always together.

She opened her eyes and turned her face slightly towards Ram.

Ram: Wish maangli?

Priya nodded.

Ram: Kya maanga?

Priya: Agar main bata dun toh phir poori nahi hogi.

Ram tightened his grip around her waist.

Ram: Hogi, zarur hogi kyun ki main poori karunga tumhari wish. Waise main jaanta hu ke tumne kya maanga. Woh wish bahut jald poori hogi Priya.

Priya smiled. Ram handed her the knife. She took it and he put his hand over hers, cutting the cake with her.

Ram: Happy birthday to you. Happy birthday to you, Happy Birthday Dear Priya, Happy Birthday To You.

She cut a piece and held it up to his mouth. He took it from her and fed it to her, getting icing all over her mouth. She took the remainder from him and fed it to him. She put the cake down and picked up a napkin to wipe her hands. After she wiped her hands, she turned to go change. Ram caught her wrist and turned her around. He held her firmly by the waist with one hand. He looked deeply into her eyes. Then he lowered his gaze to her lips, where there was icing around the corners. Seeing the flash of desire in his eyes, Priya closed her eyes. He traced the corner of her mouth slightly with his finger and then stopped. He pulled her closer by the waist. Then he brought his face really close. Priya could feel his warm breath on her lips. Her heart was pounding and she was breathing heavy. She clutched his shirt tightly. Ram could feel her heart pounding against his. He gently kissed the corner of her mouth, licking off the remainder of the icing. Then he moved to the other side and kissed the other corner, again licking off the remainder of the icing. He pulled her even closer. And then he gently pressed his lips onto hers.

The sound of the thunder and the lightening startled them both. Priya looked towards the window and saw it starting to rain. She looked at Ram excitedly and ran towards the balcony. Ram stood there, watching Priya getting soaked in the rain. She spun around with her arms spread out, looking at the sky, catching the raindrops on her face. It was the most beautiful sight. He had never seen anything like it before. Her wet saree clung to her body, exposing all her curves. He slowly walked towards the balcony and joined her.

Bheegi Bheegi Raaton Mein... Phir Tum Aao Na

Bheegi Bheegi Raaton Mein... Phir Tum Aao Na

Aisi Barsaaton Mein, Aao Na...

Priya was spinning in the rain. She was smiling while looking up at the sky. He grabbed one of her hands and tugged it gently. She twirled right into his arms and landed on his chest. Her one hand was around his shoulder on his back, and her other was on his chest, clutching his shirt. He moved his warm hand to her bare waist. She looked up at him, her wet hair plastered all over her face, and raindrops sliding down. He was drenched already. His hair was soaked and the raindrops were falling down his face, his nose, and his lips. Her face was inches away from his.

Bheegi Bheegi Raaton Mein... Phir Tum Aao Na

Bheegi Bheegi Raaton Mein... Phir Tum Aao Na

Aisi Barsaaton Mein, Aao Na...

Aisi Barsaaton Mein, Aao Na...

She looked deep into his eyes, full of intense fiery passion and desire. He slowly moved her hair off her face, as it was disturbing his view. She turned her face slightly with his movement. He raised her chin and made her look up at him again. He pierced her with his intense passionate gaze. She arched her head back, looking up at the sky again, more rain falling on her face. Ram kissed her chin, and then moved his lips down the front of her neck, planting kisses along the way.

Dhadkanon Mein, Aagaya Hai, Ek Nagma, Tera Pyaar Ka

Jaise Koi, Soor Mila Ho, Dil Ki Taar Se, Dil Ki Taar Ka

Priya felt herself losing control. She closed her eyes as he kissed her collarbone and then went up the side of her neck. She slightly tilted her head in the opposite direction, allowing him to continue with ease. Her hand on his back went up the back of his neck and dug into his wet hair. She pressed her body against him, while he planted numerous kisses up and down her neck and collarbone. He kissed his way up her neck again, and then down her jawline. She turned her face, with his movements, making it easier for him. He lowered her chin, making her look at him.

Pal ki hasine, yuhi dillagi mein, yeh dil gaya

Hume kya mila hai, tumhe toh mera dil, bhi mil gaya

He tightened his grip and pulled her closer, their noses almost touching.

Leke pyaar aankhon mein, leke pyaar aankhon mein' aao na

They stood in an eye-lock, lost in each others eyes. The rain was dripping from every corner of their faces, down their noses and lips.

Bheegi Bheegi Raaton Mein... Phir Tum Aao Na

Bheegi Bheegi Raaton Mein... Phir Tum Aao Na

Aisi Barsaaton Mein, Aao Na...

Aisi Barsaaton Mein, Aao Na...

Priya closed her eyes again as Ram gently but firmly sealed her cold, shivering, trembling lips with his, starting an intense passionate kiss full of desire. He slid his hand up her bare back and into her soaking wet hair, angling her head. He held her by the waist firmly with his other hand, pulling her closer, trying to taste and savour every bit of her sweetness. He moved his hand in her hair to hold her face. He caressed her jaw with his thumb, further deepening the kiss. Priya had one arm wrapped around his neck, her fingers brushing through and clutching handfuls of his wet hair. Her other hand was clutching his shirt tightly. She was unknowingly pulling him closer, her own passion and desire completely taking over her senses.

Aarahi hai, teri yaadein, dil mera phir bekarar hai...

Tum milogi, ha milogi, dil ko mere aitbaar hai...

Khuli hai yeh bahein, dekhe yeh nigahe, raasta tera...

Zara muskurake, phirse dikhade, wohi ada...

They had kissed many times but never in the rain before. It was a different feeling. A deeper, more sensuous feeling. They could both feel the depth and intensity of their love in that moment.

Ram broke the kiss when he felt Priya's need for air. They had been drowning themselves, losing themselves completely in each other. He held her face in both his hands, his forehead resting on hers, her lips millimeters away. He could almost feel the raindrops sliding down her lips.

Ya toh meri yaadon mein, ya toh meri yaadon mein, aao na.

Bheegi Bheegi Raaton Mein, Phir Tum Aao Na

Bheegi Bheegi Raaton Mein, Phir Tum Aao Na

Aisi Barsaaton Mein, Aao Na

Aisi Barsaaton Mein, Aao Na

Ram, in a husky voice: I love you Priya.

The rain started to die down. He turned her slightly, and lifted her in his arms. She looked deep into his eyes, with her arms wrapped around his neck. He looked into her eyes as he carried her back into the room.

Bheegi Bheegi Raaton Mein, Phir Tum Aao Na

Bheegi Bheegi Raaton Mein, Phir Tum Aao Na

Aisi Barsaaton Mein, Aao Na

Aisi Barsaaton Mein, Aao Na

He put her down in the middle of the room, that was still lit with candles. He came close to her, and held her by the waist, still looking deep into her eyes.

Saanson ko Saanson, Mein Dhalne Do Zara..

Dheemi si Dhadkan, Ko Badne Do Zara..

Lamhon Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh, Paas Aajaaye..

Hum...Hum Tum... Tum... Hum Tum...

Their eyes locked onto each other, she started slowly unbuttoning his dripping wet shirt, one button at a time. She came close and placed a kiss on his wet bare chest. He let go of her as she slid her hands up his chest and over his arms. The shirt fell to the ground behind Ram. He held her by the waist again, tightly, so she didn't escape. He raised her chin to make her look into his eyes again. Priya instantly got lost in them.

Aankhon Mein Hum Ko, Utarne Do Zara..

Baahon Mein Hum Ko, Pighalne Do Zara..

Lamhon Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh, Paas Aajaaye..

Hum.. Hum Tum... Tum... Hum Tum...

In one swift movement, he spun her around, her back facing him now. He moved all her hair to one side. He kissed the water droplets up on her shoulder, making his way up to her neck again. Priya felt herself losing her senses again. She in no way wanted to stop him. She just wanted to lose herself in his love. He nuzzled her neck and skimmed his nose up the sensitive part behind her ear while he unpinned her pallu. She could feel his hot breath on her neck and ear as he nibbled her earlobe. The pallu was wet and clung to her body. It didn't just fall to the ground. He surely couldn't take her to bed with a wet saree. He had to unravel the saree off her body. He continued kissing the nape of her neck, down her back. Priya stiffened. His every kiss was teasing her senses. Her heart was pounding and she was breathing heavy.

Saanson ko Saanson, Mein Dhalne Do Zara'

Salvatein Kahin, Karwatein Kahin..

Phel Jaaye Kaajal Bhi Tera...

Nazron Mein Ho, Guzar Tha Hua...

Khwabon Ka Koi Kafila...

Then while holding the pallu, still on her shoulder, he spun her around again, this time harder so she did a full turn. Priya felt the pallu off her body. She closed her eyes tight and clutched the sides of her saree. Ram came in front of her, while still holding the pallu. Priya's bare stomach was exposed to him now. He planted kisses down her neckline, down her cleavage, down her belly button line, all the way to where her pleats started. Priya automatically held his head, with both her hands, guiding him, again running her fingers in his hair. His warm kisses and warm touch was making her cold wet body, shiver like a leaf. He gently touched the scar on her stomach and then softly kissed it. He felt her uneven breathing patterns on her stomach.

Aanchal, Ko Seene, Se Dhalne Do Zara

Shabnam Ki Boondein, Phisalne Do Zara

Lamhon Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh, Paas Aa Jaaye..

Hum' Hum Tum' Tum'Hum Tum'

He then stood up. With the rest of the saree spread out on the ground, Ram held her firmly around the waist with one hand, and ran his hand over her bare stomach and the pleats, untucking them from the skirt. The weight of the wet material made the remainder of the saree fall to the ground. All that was left was the skirt and her blouse. He raised her chin to make her look at him. She slowly opened her eyes. His intense gaze told her what he wanted. She gazed back at him with the same mirrored intensity. He kissed her forehead, and then each cheek. His one hand sank into her wet hair as he kissed the crook of her neck again. He made his way up her neck while she dug her hands into his back. He angled her head with the hand buried in her hair, and moved the other up her back, circling around the hook of her blouse. He unhooked it with one hand. Then he kissed her jawline again down to her chin. Then he put her hands down and cupped her face with his hands. He made her look into his eyes again. She closed her eyes as the wet blouse slid down her arms and fell to the ground. He kissed her forehead again, then her eyes and then her cheeks. Then he brought his lips down to meet hers. He softly pressed his lips against hers. His hand found her bare waist again as he pulled her closer to deepen the kiss. While still kissing her, he gently tugged the string of the skirt, making it fall to the ground as well.

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dhalne Do Zara..

Chhoo Lo Badan, Magar Iss Tarah...

Jaise Surila Saaz Ho'

Andheri Chupe, Teri Zulf Mein...

Kholo Ke Raat Azaad Ho...

He broke the kiss when he felt Priya shiver. He turned her slightly and lifted her up in his arms again. He put her down gently on the bed. He slowly made her lie down and she instantly rolled over. He explored the curves and indents of her back with his index finger until she turned herself around, flat on her back, not being able to take it anymore. He bent over her, removed her earrings one by one. He slowly took off her anklets, and then her bangles. He reached for her mangalsutra, but she held his hand and shook her head.

She then slowly pulled him on top of her. His warmth melting her. Their bodies fit together like 2 pieces of a puzzle. Her fingers dug into his back as he bent his head, kissing her cheek. He kissed his way up to her ear and paused, letting his hot breath in her ear tease her senses even more. Priya's hands made their way up his back to his neck, pulling his head down. He nibbled her earlobe a little and then kissed his way down her neck. She tilted her head to the other side, exposing her neck for him. He came down, kissing her neckline and to the other side. He kissed his way up the other side of her neck, which she exposed by tilting her head to the other side this time. He made his way up to her ear and paused again, teasing her further with his hot breath. He felt her tug at his hair and pull his head even closer. Then he made his way down to her cheek. He lifted his head and looked at her. She slowly opened her eyes. Her hands dug into his back as she raised herself a little bit, kissed his shoulder and made her way to his neck. She skimmed up his neck with her lips and made her way to his cheek. Then she kissed his cheek and gently brushed her lips against his as she went to kiss his other cheek. He laid her back down and ran his hand down her leg as moved down her body, starting from her chest, planting a trail of kisses down to her stomach. He kissed her stomach passionately, feeling her muscles tighten from her uneven breathing patterns. He traced the scar on her stomach again gently with his fingers, remembering the events that had led to that scar.

Jismon Ko Ruhon, Ko Jalne Do Zara

Sharmo, Haya Ko, Machalne Do Zara..

Lamhon Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh, Paas Aa Jaaye

Hum'. Hum Tum' Tum'. Hum Tum..

Priya held his shoulders and pulled him back up. He looked into her pleading eyes, matching his passion and desire. He brought his lips down to meet hers in another passionate kiss while he slowly joined her to make them one and travel to that special land where only the two of them existed with their passion, love and desires. His warm hard body pressed against her cold soft body and they moved in sync to ignite a hot passionate fire. The only sounds heard in the room were their racing heartbeats, gasps and moans.

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dhalne Do Zara'

Baahon Mein Humko, Pighalne Do Zara'

Lamhon Ki Guzaarish Hai Yeh, Paas Aa Jaaye'

Hum'Hum Tum'. Tum' Hum Tum'

Hours later, most of the candles had burned out. There were still a couple that were giving a faint light to the room. Ram laid next to her, flat on his back, while Priya laid on her stomach, with her face facing him. She couldn't help but think about how 5 years later, even after they had a child together, Ram could still make her feel like she was young. How he romanced her all night while making love to her. How his every touch, his every kiss made her colour change. How his soft and gentle touches strengthened her desires even more, teasing her senses, and how she responded wildly to them. How amazing he was. How this was the best birthday she'd ever had and how this was the best night she'd ever had, after their first night together.

She caught him looking at her. She climbed onto him, pressing her bare body onto his. She laid on her stomach on his chest. She placed a gentle kiss on his chest and looked up at him. He looked down at her, wrapping his arms around her waist to prevent her from falling over.

Ram: Yeh'

She put her fingers on his mouth, silencing him.

Priya: Thank you for the best birthday ever. I love you.

Before he could say anything, she reached up and kissed his chin, then she reached up more and gently locked her lips onto his, showing him just how much she loved him.

On impulse, he rolled over, landing on top of her.

Priya: Ramm'

Ram: Abhi toh birthday shuru hua hai' I love you too.

She gave him that dreamy gaze when she was lost in his eyes. He winked at her and took control of the kiss that she had started. He made love to her again, slowly but passionately, taking her away from reality and back into their dreamland. She dug her hands into his back, losing herself completely in his love.

Half an hour later, he laid on his back. Priya laid her head on his chest with her arm sprawld across his waist. She closed her eyes as she focused on the rhythm of his heartbeat. His one arm wrapped around her bare waist and the other around her bare shoulders. He kissed her on the head and they both fell asleep in each other's arms.


So guys, that was my first attempt to writing a scene like that.. So please feel free to leave your comments and feedback LOL. The two songs I used were "Bheegi Bheegi Raaton Mein" by Adnan Sami and of course "Saanson ko Saanson" from Hum Tum. I swapped the order of some of the lyrics of the Hum Tum song to make it fit better πŸ˜‰. Really great songs, so check them out!!

Here are the links:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O8gM8leO9cI

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uiGPSMJ-kWk&feature=related

Edited by azk92 - 12 years ago
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☺️ Awesome romantic update...I now understand why you warned me before reading...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...the songs chosen were just out of this world...πŸ‘πŸ‘...perfect selection of songs...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜Š...rain romance is always sensuous...😳😳...am gonna copy it to my PC...πŸ˜†πŸ˜›...the emotions and the passion you brought out in both of them was outstanding...thanks a lot for a gem of an update😳😳
Edited by TVserialfreak - 12 years ago
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AMBS - There isn't any emoticon out there to describe the Hotness of your update girl. Sooo Romantic. 😍
FINALLY saw Rain in BALH - WOOT WOOT... and What a rain romance.. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Surly, this is the Birthday Priya is not going to forget. πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

I am glad there is no censor board on IF .. ha ha ha.


C night promo? what is that? pffttt... that was NOTHING compared to your update girl.

For anyone who wants to compare your FF to the promo.. here's da link. I am sure ALL will agree with my comments. LOL

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P9gSX44dpvc[/YOUTUBE]


P.S. Thank you for the dedication of this chapter to the gang. You did not disappoint us.. at least me.. HE HE

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