FF-Sarhad paar ki ek kahani {part-4,pg-28) plz read

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Hello Guys... this is kajal... writing for the first time on Geet Page... I hope you will like it my story ...Guys I am a die heart fan of Indian defense.😊😊
So i decided to write something on that topic ...I have been reading a lots of Fan Fic of Maaneet... So i want to portray maan in army and geet in some different shade...
i will update on Tuesday.. i hope u guys will like my concept because it is different...I know you guys will provide me support and love like u always give to others writers...

thanks!!!

enjoy πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š

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             πŸ˜ŠSARHAD PAAR KI EK KAHAN😊

                                       Prologue


Many of soldiers were marching , some practice their shots...He was sitting in his tent and writing something and smiles

"desh mey hi paida huey. desh pe hi mar jaaynegey,
  marte martey desh ko jinda zarur kar jaayengey
  humhey pisega falk apni chakki mey kab tak,
  khak bankar uski aankho mey basar jaayengey"




She listen bullet noise and becomes restless in her sleep and opens her eyes slowly. She sees her brother picture and tears rolls down from her eyes.

"ya allah sab humhey chodh kar kyu chale jaatey hai?? kya humhey pyar karney waala koi nahi...kya hum hamesha aisey hi akeley rahengey.. kya hum kisi ko apna nahi kahengey...humari yeh khwaish kya adhuri reh jaayegi"



"what happen when a twist of fate makes them both meet"

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                       CHARACTER SKETCH



Maan Singh Khurana: Smart, intelligent and dam hot lives each moment of life. He can make every girl drool over him. But he is waiting for the perfect girl who will change his life.His dedication towards serving his country makes his family, friends proud on him. He loves his family a lot but when its a time of choosing.. He will choose his country over family. He is from one of the richest family of New Delhi. He loves his country more then anything. He hates dishonesty and disloyalty.



Gazal khan: A young girl who is 18 years old doesn't know much about the ways of life and had been always been shielded fro the evil of the outsider world by her abu {father} and her bhai jaan {brother}. Her carefree and jovial personality makes her lovable to all. Her simplicity, her gorgeous smile and her perfect figure desires the attention of every men. She is innocent as a flower, never been touched.

Khurana Family:



Rishab Khurana: Father of Maan singh khurana high profiled person but very down to earth. Loves his family specially his mother savtri khurana.. He loves his elder son Maan .. He feels great that his son is serving his country unless like his other son who is very naughty but lovable.



Aradhya khurana: She loves her family but somewhere orthodox towards religion..She loves his smaller son a lot.. Maan is always have special place in her heart... No one can take that place... Maan and Aradhya share their bond as a friend more then mother and son...



Savtri khurana: All members loved her.. but she is very strict and disciplined and want his family to know the value of their culture. She wants her family to be in limits not to go out of it.

Khan family:



Jahangir khan: Gazal father hate Hindu and Indian army to the core as there is a reason behind it.. Will reveal in the story... He is die heart Muslim and wants their children stick to their religion...

"I will introduce other charcters as story moves on"

Two people will be together... they dont know each other... they are not same... they are different.. their status, thinking ,culture, religion totally different... one can give his life for love and one doesn't know about love...




                                                                     Index
                                     Part-1, Pg-7
                                     Part-2, Pg-14
                                     Part-3, Pg-24











                                                   








          



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Okhh SO ME FINALLY READ IT 
ALREADY READ IT ACTUALLY 
GHAZAL KHAN AND MAAN SINGH KHURANA 
DAMN PROMISING AND HAPPEINING STORY KAJU 
LOVED IT...
THE EDITED PIC OF GEET IS TOO CUTE 
AND YEAH I HATE HER FATHER 
ARGHH AND GEETS FATHER TOO 
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Edited by Angelic_analyst - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
sounds great 

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Posted: 12 years ago
REALLY A DIFFERENT CONCEPT..BUT IT REMINDED ME OF SUNNY DEOL S FILM...I'M EAGERLY WAITING FOR UR UPDATE...
UR WAY OF WRITING DOESNT SEEM LIKE THIS IS UR FIRST ATTEMPT...WELL POTRAYED..KEEP IT UP...
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Posted: 12 years ago
 congrates dear😊
it seems to be different concept
looking forward to read it
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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting...
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow kajal ur first ff... brilliant yaar
concept s looking so different... looking forward to see it...
maan in army grt... right he can make any girl drool over him
omg geet muslim... grt grt
update sson sweety


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Posted: 12 years ago
nice concept... i loved the banner
i like the poem u written " love has no boundaries" great yaar
may be its like veer -zaara movie that my fav movie
i hope ur ff gonna rock...
all the best

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Posted: 12 years ago
Sounds interesting.
Continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
first kajal where were you?
i was waiting for you from past two days... you didn't came ol...
now concept is amazing..
i also loved army service...
maan is in defense and he is hindu,
geet is muslim...
now looking forward, how they met and fall in love?
love you dear.. sending u buddy req.. accept that...