O re piya! O beloved! Maaneet OS

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O re piya! O beloved!

He is the man of dance.He is born to dance.He made others dance.He taught the value of dance to others.
He stood before his God's idol.It was a well lit area.
After that he put music to make others sway.They were deeply immersed in the beautiful instrumental music while dancing.There he saw his beloved coming.
His eyes glew.
He:You?
She:Yes.I left everything to come to you.To dance with you.Do you have the courage to accept me against the rules and regulations.
He nodded his head:Yes.Though i never went against the customs and traditions, for you my beloved i can break the conventions.I don't from where i got the courage,but when i see you my crazy soul begins to dance.
She blushed.
'o re piya.. haaye o re piya..
o re piya.. aahaaye.. o re piya..

o re piya.. haaye.. o re piya..
udne laga kyun..
man baawla re..
aaya kahaan se..
ye hausla re..

o re piya.. aa.. o re piya .. haaye..'

Slowly their eyes met others who were dancing.

'tana bana tana bana
bunti hawa haaye
bunti hawa..
bole bhi to aaye nahin
baaz yahaan..
saazish mein saamil sara jahaan hai
har zarre zarre ki ye iltija hai..
o re piya.. o re piyaa aa haaye
o re piya...'

Her hair moved with the breeze.It struck his eyes.He felt that her hair was dancing.
She tried to control her naughty hair.
She:This breeze is teasing me.It is playing havoc with me.Because of that see the condition of my hair.
He smiled:Leave your hair free.It looks nice as it is.Breeze is the music and your hair is dancing to the music.It is arousing my interest.
She was again blushing knowing that her hair is also having impact on him.

'ni re re re ga ga ga ma ma ma pa pa ma ga re sa sa re re sa ga ga re ma ma
ga pa pa ma dha dha pa ni ni sa sa pa pa sa ma pa dha ni sa ni re ni sa sa sa...'

Hearing the notes in the classical music she could'nt stop herself from dancing.He also joined in dancing with her.They both were very close to each other at the end.
They looked at each other's eyes.


'Nazrein bolen duniya bole
dil ki zaban haaye dil ki zubaan
Ishq maange ishq chahe koi toofan

Chalna aahiste ishq naya hai
Pehla yeh vada humne kiya hai

O re piya haaye
O re piya
Piyaaa...'

He:Your glances are telling the story of my heart.We both will be together in the world of romantic dance forever.This is the first promise we gave.
She smiled.
Suddenly she got scared of the storm.She rested her head on his skin.He carassed her.
He:Love wishes for a hurricane;a viloent storm.Never bother as i am with you.
She raised her eyebrows and looked at his eyes.

'nange pairon pe angaron chalti rahi
lagta hai ki gairon mein main palti rahi
haaye
le chal wahaan jo mulq tera hai
jaahil zamaana dushman mera hai..'

He saw a wound in her leg.He touched her wound softly.She felt the pleasure of pain when he touched her.
She said in her mind:The moment you touched my wound it got healed.
He:You walked barefoot to reach me fast?You danced with this wounded foot for me?
She fell into his arms:Take me to your world.This cruel world is my enemy.
He touched the tiny droplet of tears of her eyes.

'o re piya.. haaye o re piya aa haaye
o re piya. ..'

He:Anything for you my beloved.
She smiled emotionally.
They both swayed together to music.

The end

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome n cute OS dear
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lovely OS...

but very short...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely OS
Thank You So Much For The PM
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thnx 4 pm 


short bt sweet :)


lovely 


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awesome very beautiful and well done loved how the world fade away when they are in each other arm thanks for the pm
Posted: 12 years ago
#7
Awesooome.
Fab.
Superb.
Loved d upd.
Thanx for d pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely os dear...ur song selection is nice n its perfectly match with the situation...loved it...thanks 4 pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome n beautiful os...

its really amazing...d best jodi dancing with each other d romantic dance...

thank u sooo much fr such a lovely os n also fr d pm...

really loved it...

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nice OS...

love this song...