MANEET FF - MAAN KI GEET - GHSP continued...

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                                                           MAAN KI GEET (GHSP continued...)

 

             I always wanted GHSP to go on for atleast 5 yrs. with the story unfolding something like this.I thought MANEET jodi was unique bcoz of their bonding in a unique situation.(Geet already pregnant) Maan accepted Geet along with her baby.So I wanted Geet to successfully give birth to her child for whom she fought against all odds for that matter Maan too.

            Let us go back in time when Maneet went for their HM to simla.Remember Geet & Maan travelling on hay in a truck.How romantic that was.Ab aage...

 Geet sleeping on Maan's lap.slowly the sun rises & the rays wake Maan who admires his mishty sleeping like a baby doll.He tries to prevent the rays from waking her up with his jacket.Geet wakes up with a cute smile,

 

Geet : gud morning Maan!

Maan:morning Geet.muje toh laga aaise truck pe tumme neend nahi aayegi,lekin tum toh kumbakarni nikli

Geet: (shows fake anger)Maan mujhe chodiye aap toh kumbakarn ke baap nikle.mojhe laga Mr.Maan Singh Khurana aaise waise jagah pe sothe nahi honge lekin aap toh

Maan:(fingers on Geet's lips)chup bilkul chup.meri mishty mere saath ho toh mein kahin bhi chain se so saktha Geet.Geet tum meri zindagi mein aayi toh mein kya se kaya hogaya.apne hi ghar mein kitne raat jagthe rehtha tha.aaj toh mein iss truck mein bhi bahut kushi se so paya.tumne toh mere kali zindagi mein rang bardi Geet

Geet :bas bas ab zyzdz hogaya apka Geetayan

Maan: kya? kya kaha  tumne?

Geet: jaise ramayan hota waise Geetayan - Geet ki story

Maan : toh tumme ye kahaani lagti hai Geet(Maan angry)

Geet:mein bhi na kiske samne joke marthi.sorry baba.yeh sab chodiye muje toh zor se bhuk lagi hai.

Maan:tum kitna kathi ho.ab yahan iss jungle mein khane ko kya milege?

tabhi truck ek dhabe main rukti

Maa helps Geet get off the truck

they get into the dhaba

Geet:Maan pata hai jab hum pehle bar dhabe mein gaye toh aap kitne mirchi kayethe

Maan:haan Geet waise mirchi toh hai Geet dhabe ka khana bahut teeka hota hai Geet tum ye nahi ka sakthi

Geet :par Maan mujhe toh yahi pasand hai

Maan:meine kaha tum nahi ka sakthi toh nahi kha sakthi,samji tum

Geet:he babaji yeh kya musibat hai subba subba mujhe iss Dust Danav se kaun bajhayega?

Maan toh phir mera Bhuke pet ko kya hoga?mujhe toh abhi kuch khana hai

Maan:tum thodi dher yahan rukho mein abi aata hoon

Geet fresh hone jathi

Maan dhabe ke andhar jaatha aur wahan uske malik ko paise dekhe kitche mein jaatha,wahan woh apne hathoon se apni mishty ke liye fried rice banatha

woh rice ko cover karke Geet ke samne latha

aur kehta hai ki MSK ne apne mishty ke liye apne hathoon se breakfast banaya hai

Geet ko mushroom omlette yaad aathi

Geet:(in a low voice)babaji yeh kya muzibat hai.ghar mein toh chupke meine woh omlette pekhdi yahan toh unke samne mein kya karungi?

babaji aaphi kuch kijiye

Maan:Geet ab subhaa subha babaji se mere coplaint karna shuru kardi kya?

Geet: nahi toh.mein toh apne subha ka prarthana kar rahi thi.babaji mujhe inke khane se bachao

Maan:kya kaha tumne?

Geet:babaji Maan ko bhi aashirvaad dijiye

Geet slowly opens the lid & rice ko dekhkar kush hoti

Geet tastes the rice & is very happy ki woh bahut accha hai

Geet toh ek minute mein sara khana katam karthi Maan dekhthe reh jaatha hai

 

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Maan: Geet sambalke.mujhe pata nahi ki tum kumkarn ki tarah sothe hi nahi par kathe bhi ho

Geet:apko chahiye toh ap bhi khalo.nazar nahi lagao.pet mein dard hogi

Maan:aaise kaogi toh zaroor pet mein dard hoga

Geet: ap kyun nahi kathe?

Maan:mere liye bacha bhi kya hai kali plate!

Geet:Maan  apko KC chodke ek restaurant kholni chahiye.itna acha khana toh banate ho!

Maan:acha ab toh mein tumme cook lagtha hoon kya?

Geet:nahi ji,ap toh hamesha mere DD hi ho

Maan: Geet...

truck driver aatha hai aur kehtha hai ki woh ab dusre rashte pe jaa raha hai toh unko simla nahi chod saktha

Maan:ab kya karein Geet?

Geet:pehle aap karlo.bhaiya inko garma garam aalo ki parathe dahi ke saath dena

Maan yahan toh yehi milega aaj toh isse hi kaam chalana hoga

Maan: jo hukkum Mrs.MSK ji

Geet:Maan mazak mat kijiye,warna bhuke reh jaoke

Maan:haan Geet ab toh roti kya mujhe koi bhi khana chalega.itna bhuk lagti hai ki poocho mat

Geet happy to see Maan enjoying roti.

Maan:Geet tum thoda aaram karo,maine hotel manager se baat ki woh hammare liye taxi bej denke

Geet:Maan mein teek hoon,aayiye hum ek walk pe jaathe hai

Maan:acha Geet,hum rashte pe hi jaathe taxi aathi toh hum chal sakthe hai

Maneet set out for a long walk enjoying each others company,mahi...

     

   At the hotel they take some rest & Geet gets ready for dinner.Maan arranges for a surprise poolside dinner just for Geet.

They have a romantic moonlight dinner.Geet ki pasand ki sare khana wahan hoti & there is a big cake welcoming the new one

suddenly lots of children come from nowhere & Geet bahut kush hojathi.Geet unke saath cake cut karthi aur koob khelthi.Maan

toh bas apni mishty ko dekhke rehjatha.those kids are from a nearby children's home & Maan unko huge donations detha

 

Geet:Maan,aap kitne acche ho!kahi baar mujhe lagthe tha ki jab mera bacha iss duniya mein aayega toh woh akela hoga,lekin ab

toh lagtha hai hai ki puri duniya uske saath hai

Maan:Geet lekin meri duniya toh sirf tum ho Geet.Maneet passionate hug followea by Maan's GN kiss.Mahi...

 

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Posted: 12 years ago
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                    Next morning Geet jaldi jaldi utthi aur tayyar hojathi.Maan surprised to see Geet getting ready so early.Geet orders

black coffee & chay for them.

Maan:gud morning Geet.tum hamesha itni active kaise rehthi.ab toh tumme rest karna hai bhool gayi doctor ne kya kaha

Geet:Maan ap toh yahan aake lazy ho gaye ho.aaj toh humme simla dekhna hai.aap jaldi tayyar ho jayiye

Maan gets ready & adi ka phone call...

Adi:Maan sir,Gud morning

Geet:gud morning Adi sir,Maan toh washroom mein hai.kya baat hai?

Adi:Geet,woh Maan sir keh rahe the ki kal ki tickets book karna hai,mujhe ppochna hai ki woh morning flight ki ya

evening flight ki?

Geet:Adi sir aap ek kaam kijiye friday morning flight book kijiye.

Adi:lekin Geet Maan sir ki Meetig parsoon hai

Geet:meeting ko bhi postpone kijiye

Maan:Geet ye tum kisse baat kar rahi ho?

Geet:Acha Adi sir, bye.

Maan:Adi ka phone tha?mujhe Adi se baat karna hai

Geet:Nahi ab aap mere saath chaliye,friday tak aap ka phone bandh

Maan:Geet,ye kya bachpana hai.wednesday Mr.Sharma ke saath meri meeting hai

Geet:mujhe kuch nahi sunna,meeting postpone ho gaya,aap ab chalein toh sahi

Maan:Geet tum toh bahut shararthi ho gayi ho

Geet:shuts his mouth with her fingers,chuo bilkul chup

both of them go out & have a rocking time together,Mahi...

 

They go to a park & some boys come there,they look at Geet & pass some comments

Maan:Geet, humme ab chalna chahiye

Geet:kyun aapko jalan ho rahi hai kya?

Maan:Geet ye mazak karne ka waqt nahi,chalo mere saath

Geet:Maan aap kyun baar baar bachchon ki tarah zidd karte ho?mujhe yahan bahut accha lagtha hai.she goes & sits

on a bench.

Maan:geet toh tum nahi aaoge.achcha mein car mein wait kartha hoon.Maan leaves

After a while those boys come towards Geet & start teasing her.

Ab hammara angry young man wahan aatha & unki dulayi kartha

Maan:Geet meine pehle hi kaha mere saath aao,agar mein nahi hota toh kya hota?

apne bare mein nahi toh kam se kam baby ke bare mein toh socho Geet

Geet:mujhe pata hai MSK apni mishty ko akala chodke kabi nahi jayenge,mein toh aaj MSK ka jalwa dikana chahthi thi

Maan:toh ye sab tummara plan tha inko sabak sekane ka

Geet:haan,aapko fight karthe hue dekhne mein kitna maza aatha hai,haina girls...wink..wink...

 

 

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey its brilliant story please cont. 
loving it
ahh miss maaneet geet so much 
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Next day.

Maan:Gd Mor Geet

Geet:mor Maan.

Maan:toh kahiye madam ji aaj apka kya program hai?,mujhe aaj kya hukkum hai?

Geet:aaj toh mere mann shoping karne ka hai

Maan:Geet,aaj toh thoda aaram karlo,baby ko thoda rest do

Geet:aap mere saath aarahe hai ya nahi?

Maan:ab toh tumme kaun rok saktha?mujhe pata hai ki tum toh hamesha mere kehne ka ulta hi karthi ho,

ek minute rukho mein change karke aatha hoon.

after shoping Geet comes back & tries the new dresse as we have already seen

Maan sone ka drama kartaha aur chup chup ke Geet ko dekhtha hai

Geet realises this & pretends to struggle tying her choli's knot

Geet:Maan ab aap chup chup ke dekhte rahoge ya mere help karoge

Maan comes near her,he comes very close & whispers in her ears

Maan:Geet yeh toh pehle hi knoted hai,ab tum kya chahthi ho mein tie karon ya khol doon?

Geet slowly turns & rests on his shoulders.donna ankhen band karthe hai aur they freeze,Mahi...

tabhi room bell rings

Maan:Room service hoga,Geet tum change karlo mein dektha hoon kaun hai

They enjoy their dinner.

Geet:aaj toh bahut maza aaya,mujhe toh simla chodke jaane ka mann hi nahi kartha

Maan:Geet kal toh koi bahana nahi chalega,ab acche bache ki tarah aaram karo,kal subha jaldi nilkalna hai

Dadi ka phone...

Dadi:Maan bete aap log kaise hai

Maan:dadi hum toh ache hai

Dadi:Geet kya kar rahi hai

Maan:woh kya karegi hamesha ki tarah mere saath jagda kar rahi hai

Dadi:kya kehrahe hai aap?Geet se baat karwadijiye

Geet:Dadi,hum toh yahan bahut enjoy kar rahe hai.aaj meine koobsari shoping ki,aapko aur annie ko bi gifts kareedi

Dadi:aap log kab Delhi wapas aarahe hai bete?

Geet:Dadima hum kal subha ki flight se aarahe hai

Dadi:acha bete Gud Night,apna khyal rakna

Geet:GN dadi


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PART  - 5

 

Back in Delhi...

Early morning Adi ka phone aata hai ki kissi factory mein labour problem hai aur Maan wahan chale jaatha hai.Geet pareshan

hai aur Maan ke phone answer karthe karthe sofo pe takrathi aur sofa par ghir jaathi..

Doctor aathe hai aur Geet ko hospital shift ho jaane ko kehthi hai.Maan rushes home aur is very tensed

Maan dadi se kehthe hai ki usko Geet ko akele chodkar nahi jaana tha,aur ab delivery tak Geet ke saath hi rahega

At th hospital...

Geet taking rest.Adi,Pinky,Romeo,Pandeyji & Manesha Geet ko dekhne aathe hai.

Adi:Geet ab tum kaise ho?

Geet:mein teek hoon Pinky,Uncle kaise hai?

Pinky:Papa toh koi kaam se bahar gaye hain aur tummere bare mein sunkar bahut pareshan hai

Geet:Pinky tum Uncle ko kaho mein teek hoon

Pinky:acha Geet

Adi:Geet aaise halat mein tumme apne khyal rakne chahiye,Maan sir ki chintha choda hum hain na

maan stares Adi.

Adi's trademark laughter with a scary look

Maan un sabko bahar bulatha hai aur kehtha hai woh ab KC kuch dinno ke liye nahi aa saktha

& asks them to take care of the office work in his absence,they al  take leave after taking Maan's advise

Dadi comes with the breakfast

Dadi:GM Geet bete,ab kaise hai aap?

Geet:mein teek hoon Dadi.

Maan comes in Geet tries to get off the bad

Maan rushes towards her & holds her in his arms

Maan:Geet ab tum kya karne jaa rahi ho?

Geet:mein toh handwash karne jaa rahi thi

Maan:uski koi zaroorat nahi,ab tum bed se hilna bi mat,Maan serves the food & feeds her

Dadi:Maan teek kehrahe hai Geet,ab toh apko apna khyal rakni chahiye,ab aap ek nahi do do hai samji aap

bas ap do char din ki hi baat hai,ab toh aap pura aaram karenge aur doctor ki kehne par hi sab kuch karenge

Geet feels uncomfortable staying in the bed allday,Maan tries to keep her engaged reading out stories & playing some songs

Geet getting restless & the doctor comes.

Doctor:ab aap kaise hai Mrs.Khurana

Geet:teek hoon doctor,bas pure din bed mein rehthe acha nahi lagtha,kya mein bahar kuch dher walk kar sakthi hoon?

Maan:nahi nahi tum kahi nahi jaa rahi ho

Doctor:aap thode dher walk kar sakthe hain lekhi sambalkar,waise Mr.khurana haina aapke saath

aaise kissi ko apne wife ke paas sara din rehthe hue pehle baar dekh rahi hoon you are very lucky Mrs.khurana

Geet ki aankhon mein khusi ki aasoo woh maan ko pyar se dekhthi

Doctor leaves

Geet:Maan ab hum chalein?

Maan helps her to get off the bed & takes her for a walk

Geet resting on Maan's shoulder & slowly waiks around the hospital in bright Moonlight

Maan:Geet dard ho raha hai kya?Maan asks her in worry

Geet:Nahi Maan,Mr.MSK mere paas ho toh gunde kya dard bi mere paas aane se dartha hai

Maneet magical moment Mahi...

They come back & Maan puts her to sleep & he also falls asleep by her side


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Next morning Dadima & Annie come

Annie:Geet Gud morng

Geet:mor annie

Dadi:Maan bete aap tak gaye honge app ghar jaake thoda aaram kijiye hum Geet ke paas rukhenge

Maan leaves

after a while Geet gets labour pain & Dadi calls Maan

Maan comes & he can't see Geet in pain

Dadi & Annie console him

Dadi:Maan bete sambaliye apne aapko

Geet is taken to the theatre & Maan waits out in tension

Dadi:babaji hummare Geet ke saath dena aur unki raksha karna

Nurse comes out & conveys the birth of nanni Geet

Nurse:congrats Mr.khurana aapko ladki hui hai

Maan relieved a little

Maan:sister Geet kaisi hai?

Nurse:woh ab behosh hai,thodi complications ho gayio hai,par woh katre se bahar hai

Maan pareshan hota hai aur Dadi tries to Cheer him up

Dadi:Maan bete kabrayiye mat babaji hai na sab teek ho jayega

Doctor comes out & says Geet is safe but she is very weak & needs complete bedrest for the next few months

Maan happy to hear it

Doctor:Mr.khura now you can go & see the baby

Maan goes in Geet still Unconcious,Maan takes a look at the little princess & also his mishty

Geet:Maan

Maan goes near her & holds her hand

Geet:Maan baby kaise hai

Maan:bhilkul tummare tarah Geet bahut cute hai hummari Princess

Geet:Maan mujhe laga master MSK hoga

Maan:par Geet mujhe toh hamesha nanni Geet hi chahiye thi

Maan brings the baby to Geet

Geet happy to see her baby

happy happy family...
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Dadi:Maan bete aaj toh Geet ghar aane wali hai na?

Maan:haan Dadi,meine toh ab usse lenehi jaraha hoon

Dadi:Maan bete aap Annie ko apne saath lejayiye hum yahan apni nanni mehman ki swagat ka intrezam karenge

Maan brings Geet home,Geet arrives with the baby.Dadi welcomes them with aarthi,surprise...yeh kya Geet ki mom...

Geet ki mom aarthi utharthi,Geet surprised & looks at Maan,Maan nods his head with a smile

Maan:andhar chalo Geet

Maan has called Geet's family to welcome the baby...

Darji:Geet aao puttar apne pothi ko hummare paas lao

Geet gets darji's ashirwaad

Darji blessses her

Teeto & rajji also there

Geet happy to see her family

papa bhi hai

everyone after the baby

Maan takes Geet to her room

Geet:Maan aap toh mere bole se pehle hi mere mann ki baatein kaise pad sakthe?

Maan:kya kehrahi ho?

Geet:woh mere parivaar ko apne hi bulaya haina?

Maan:haan Geet mujhe pata tha ki aaise halat mein tumme tummari parivar ki zaroorat ahi

Geet:par mere parivar toh yahi hai Maan,aur apke hothe hue mujhe toh koi kammi nahi hai

Maan:Geet mujhe pata hai tu kuch nahi kehthi toh iska matlab ye nahi ki tum unko bhool gayi

Geet:Maan

goes towards him & a passionate hug,Mahi...

Next day Geet's family returns & her mom stays back to help her on Dadi's request

Adi & party comes to greet Geet

Adi:congrats Geet!

Geet:thanks Adi sir

Pinky:Geet baby toh bilkul tummari jaisi hi hai

Romeo:isliye toh Maan sir baby ko ek minute bi chodke nahi jaathe

Maan stares romeo

Geet:KC mein kya chal raha hai?mei toh apne office ko bohut miaa karthi hoon

adi:aur KC Maan sir ko bohut Miss kartha hai

Maan stares him too & they all leave after wishing Geet

Geet:Maan Adi sir teek kehthe hai,aapko ab kC lautna chahiye,mein toh ab bilkul teek ho gayi hoon

Maan:Geet tumme pata nahi doctor ne kya kaha tumme full rest ki zarooart hai,toh baby ko akele jaise handle karogi?

mein toh yahi rahoonga

Geet:Maan ye aap bhol rahe ho?!!!!!!!mujhe toh yakeon hi nahi hota,office ko ghay pe lanewale MSK aaj KC ko bhool gaye?

Maan:Geet tum toh mere mazaq udarahi ho

Geet:nahi mein toh yahi kehrahi hoon ki mujhe apni maa se Koob sari batein karni hai,toh aap aaj Kc kyun nahi jaathe?

Maan gets angry & walks away

Geet:hare babaji ab mein kya karoon?...



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