SS : The Gunshot updated (finale)

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Posted: 12 years ago

The Gunshot





Part 1



Arnav.

 

Speechless.

 

HOW could he choose!

 

There was NO WAY to choose!

 

"So...Saale Saab...make your choice...OR I'LL MAKE IT FOR YOU..."

 

Evil laughter filled the air...

 

"what you don't seem to understand...Saale Saab...is that YOU have no control here...you either pick your sister...or Khushi..."

 

Arnav's gaze went from Anjali to Khushi...they both were being held at gun point by Shyam...

 

Arnav had tried to run to them numerous times but only to stop dead in his tracks at the sound of clicking from the gun...

 

"Come any closer and you won't have to make a choice..."

 

"Shyam how DARE you! LET THEM GO!!! Do you really think Khushi will love you after this!?"

 

Shyam's evil grin turned to one of hatred..."that's not the right question to ask...you should wonder how Khushi will love YOU after this! She never loved me! YOU assumed the worst of her...so I let you believe it!"

 

Khushi, who had remained silent...just stared at her husband in sorrow...

 

"what...you...you let me ...believe..." Arnav's emotions were in a frenzy...He looked at Khushi...his eyes held disbelief, pain and agony..."Khushi...I...I'm so sorry..."

 

Khushi just looked sadly into his eyes as her tears pounded against the hard ground...

 

"MAKE YOUR CHOICE!" Shyam yelled furiously!

 

Arnav literally couldn't NOT choose..."I...I can't...tell me what you want!? Money!? I can give you any amount! Just let them GO!"

 

Anjali whispered..."Chote...choose the woman you love...i know you love me...but you need your life...choose Khushiji...she's been through enough..."

 

Arnav's eyes were as sharp as lasers...his rage burning forth like a furnace...

 

Then Khushi spoke..."Arnavji...you didn't trust me before...will you trust me now?"

 

His heart constricted..." I DID trust you...my heart always trusted you..."

 

Khushi smiled slightly and winked at him like she always did when she had a "plan"...

 

Arnav didn't know whether to smile or attack her himself...

 

"Damn it Khushi, this isn't a bloody game!"

 

"walk to Anjaliji..." Khushi said with all the calmness she could muster...

 

"Khushiji?" Anjali whispered confused...

 

Khushi just smiled reassuringly at her sister in law...

 

Arnav's soul felt like it was suffocating...he didn't know what she had in mind...but for all the times he never trusted her...he was going to trust her now...

 

He started walking to Anjali...

 

Shyam started to yell..."What is going on!? "

 

"Shyamji? Let him go to his sister..." Khushi's eyes pleaded...

 

Arnav's eyes were on Khushi as he approached his Di...

 

She looked at him earnestly...her tears burning her cheeks...

 

As soon as Arnav was standing directly in front of Anjali, Khushi cried out... "I love you both...take care of each other..." and with one last look...she  lunged at Shyam, taking him by surprise...

 

Arnav and Anjali screamed horrifically...

 

The sound of a Gunshot rang through the air...

 

 


Part 2  https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2892059?pn=10

Part 3  https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2892059?pn=22

Part 4  https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2892059?pn=32

Part 5  https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2892059?pn=47 (ending)

Part 5  https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2892059?pn=48 (not the ending)

Finale  https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2892059?pn=69


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Posted: 12 years ago
That was beautiful! Amazing! You made me tear up 😭 But great job!! Loved it
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Cliff hanger!!!!! Oh dear ... I know even if Khushi is hurt she won't die... At least I hope so 😉 do pm me when u update...Edited by JennyAvni - 12 years ago
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Heart Breaking OS!😭 Poor Khushi
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oh no!!! that was sooo sad!! ðŸ˜­
Posted: 12 years ago

Omg! i knw she was going to do that!!
Why khushi!!
Hope shyams dead!
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Posted: 12 years ago
:O

Noo!! Khushi cannot die!! :'(
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Posted: 12 years ago
Let's just hope that Shyam was the one who got shot and Khushi is fine buh if it happens to be Khushi i just hope shes fine

Cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey what the...😡 u made khushi die...
now u hv to continue...u must must must must must must write da nxt update. plz plz plz atleast turn this update into SS...plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh wow, I have always wanted to write something where Shyam makes Arnav choose btw Khushi and Anjali, but gosh, I love what you made Khushi do, make him trust her one last time, before sacrificing her life for him...

Beautiful storyline

do continue soon !