dil se rey:kriyaansh ff(ch 19-pg 117)6th apr - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
every scene were awesome i loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
awesome update...loved it very much
so basically its because of some misunderstanding that kriyansh broke up and rey hates kria aweee hope so misunderstanding get clear soon

and the mystery boy in the flight who is he ...i think so he must be swayam...just a guess
flash back was awesome...superb...loved it very much

continue soon waiting eagerly for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73

CHAPTER 4

Nani had kept dinner 4 her n she ws already w8ng 4 her!she had made her fav chocolate cake as dessert .

N:mano!guess wot hav I made 4 u??

K:nani!ummm...lemme thnk!muffins??

N:no mano!open the fridge

K:opens n shouts CHOCOLATE CAKE!!yummy!!

FLASHBACK

R:hey mano!guess wot I brought 4 u 2day??

K:wot teddy??

R:nani s own handmade chocolate cake

K:CHOCOLATE CAKE!!YAY!!

R:bt I ll feed u as she made it 4 me..open ur mouth.

Kriya opened her mouth

N:mano!wot r u dng??y u standing infront ov the open fridge wid ur mouth open??pick out ur cake n go eat it

K:sorry nani!she staraightened herself n took out the cake n eat it hiding a tear 4m nani

tat escaped her eyes!

N:u cryng mano??

K:no nani!actually I became over excited

2 weeks later

Kriya ws packing up her bags.she had promised her friends 2 take on a hiking trip 2 simla (so here we go guys ;)

N:mano!u gng so early?

K:ya nani!i had promised ma frnds 2 go 2 hiking n rock climbing wid them 2 simla

N:beta,keep cmng!i ll miss u a lot

K:I ll miss u 2 nani!n y all come aftr 4 months in ma next vacations

(here em assuming tat aft every term they get 1 month vacations)

There Vicky has gone 2 switzerland wid his frnds 4 hanging out.

Sharon went 2 kashmir wid her frnds 4 hang out

S:its such a beautiful place..em msemurized wid its beauty!!

N:its called heaven

Suddenly rain started..nailesh,bharat hav gone smwhr else n Sharon n neha were left alone so she started dancing in the rain..she called neha

Hey neha!cmon lets dance!

N:no Sharon,u dance thr.em ok here...

S:ok

Captian swayam ws passing nearby.he saw her n ws mseumerized by her beauty.the world seemed 2 stop.he felt a sudden urge 2 take her in his arms.she ws unlike his other love affairs n grlfrnds..

He went close 2 her n hed her by her waist..she ws dumbstuck

Sh:wot r u dng??

Swayam ws numb.he cud feel nothng othr than her deep sea eyes.he ws drowned in their depth..

The eye lock'

Suddenly sm1 stuck him

Capt veer:swayam swayam wot r u looking at??

Swayam came out ov his trance n look at veer

Sw:hey veer!u here?

Veer:I ve been here 4 past 10 mins looking at ur weird moves n constant stare at the girl..ahem ahem

Sw:oh cmon veer!its nt like tat

Veer:oho!!capt swayam in love

Sw:dude!em lyk tat everyday

V:ok lets go!its time 2 report bck..

Sw:ok lets go dude!!

N he left 4m thr leaving his love story on the edge..sharon saw

him gng.she ws impressed by his muscular back n uniform(lyk all grls die 4 uniformed guys,at least many)

N:come bck Sharon.u ve had enuff!!

(ok 1 thng I ll mention here.she ws standing in open n neha n swayam were in shade ov the place whr they went 4 outing.neha saw swayam n veer..bt as they wr nt so close so she cudnt hear them)

Kriya landed at simla airport

(sorry frnds em extremely sorry abt sme mistakes as this is technically ma 1st ff,I wrote another ff b4 bt just 4 or 5 episodes of it due 2 some probs..n I ve nvr been 2 india so I hav literally no idea abt the places,airports etc..just watch tv..wen I wrote ma 1st ff I ws totally unaware of hindi n learnt it later)

PRECAP:

As u all knw its meant xclusively 4 kriyaansh..❤️

Ok nw em done finally..all set 4 the 1 ov the most hot n happening epi of this ff!!N I ll reveal the MU n clear it only wen I ll hav 150 cmnts on this thread n tat ll b in maha update n it wud b long n ll reveal all the hiding mysteries,the telephone man,y MU developed,who created it n all!n then u ll also b getting kriyaansh n other character s interview whr u cn knw abt their lives,likes n everything u wanna knw xcpt the then upcoming mysteries..n I ve got a detective in ma ff 2.he ll b revealed soon...😳

So b patient n if u cnt,then make lots ov big big cmnts...n u ll get wot u want...simple😆

Abt pms,I ll send the pms 4 the double update wid links'as I ve already said I ll nt pm this update alone as it doesn't hav kriyaansh s 1st meeting.so pms may b 2moro or wen em done.4 those who read b4 tat plx cmnt cx u ve 2 mk it 150 4 ur most awaited special epi n interviews

PART 5(direct link)

Edited by tinatartari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
it was awesome part...loved it very much
and the choclate cake scenes were really very cute and touching
finally kria has landed to simla very near to rey aweee cant wait for there first meeting
and swaron scenes were awesome
captain swayam drools upon sharon and his imagination it was awesome, superb

waiting eagerly for the maha update cant wait for it
continue soon waiting eagerly for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Ah...its like a romantic thriller...suspence n romance both r der n dis is my one of fav ffs i have read so far on kriyaansh...i am just desperate to read ur nxt update as it an exclusive kriyaansh and i am missing kriyaansh lyk hell...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
wonderful update. Plz update next part soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
just read part 3 n 4...
det wer awesome, wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!
awww luved the kriyansh flashback...
update the next part soon eagerly waiting for kriyaansh meet

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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
loved the last 2 updates i read it and they are amazing loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
thanks for the pm and chapter 3+4 are amaZAYN
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
completed chapter 5..nw em reviewing it whethr its the best or nt...ll post it here soon...
my update comprised lyk 12 pages of wrd in normal writing...n my hands were literally numb typing evrythng...kept awake 2 write it till late at night cx i had many ideas in mind till tat tym..
so wud b needing tat much cmnts also...😭
n nobody told me abt ur xpctations n fav scenes u wanna add 4 the kriyaansh 1st meeting..em writing all on ma own so plx dnt blame me if it doesnt come outta b wot u wnted cx u dint tell me...😳
Edited by tinatartari - 12 years ago
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