dil se rey:kriyaansh ff(ch 19-pg 117)6th apr - Page 16

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snigdha_arsha asmaju thnks thnks a lot guys 4 liking ma ff n spamming..lolx...i like it dude!!!
n thnks 2 all othrs 2!ok guys em nt discontinuing it n as promised i ll b giving the special epi soon whr u ll b getting 2 knw abt MU!n the mystery man!
cnt clear the MU tat soon as i ve planned sme dramatic scenes 4 tat bt if u guys wnt i cn clear MU in 1 epi bt tat wont b so much fun then..so need ur suggestions
option A)clear MU in 1 epi wid no added drama
option B)only tell abt MU in special epi n clear it in subsequent epis wid lots n lots of drama!!
Edited by tinatartari - 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 7

Swayam ws so mseumerized by Sharon tat he cud nt concentrate..all day he kept thnkng who she ws n whr 2 find her?he ws astonished at himself tat a Casanova cn b so srs abt sm grl..wen he went off in the evening 2 his room in the mess,his grlfrnd calld..

Gf:baby!r u ok??y u dint call me the whole day?

Sw:oh!i ws bzzy babes!sorry bout tat

Gf:so wots the plan baby??

Sw:sorry em bzzy ryt nw..c u later.bye

Gf:baby listen'

Bt he cut the call n went into Sharon s dreamland again..

It ws rather astonishing 4 all his frnds as he ws nt taking any interest in their evening billiard game.he ws missing shots unlike evr b4!he ws changing 4 her!

Next day swayam ws jogging in the morning before his duty wen he saw her sitting on a bench.he ws mseumerized n his heartbeats accelerated.he ran 2 her n said

Sw:hii!!em captian swayam!

Sh:capt swayam??i thnk I heard this name b4!em Sharon ghai!!

Sw:sharon ghai?r u kriya s sister??

Sh:ya!hw do u knw her??

Sw:remember we used 2 b neighbours in childhood

Sh:oh!swayam'nyc 2 meet u dude(she hugged him n he ws lost in the trance ov her magical touch)

Then she broke the hug..swayam ws still mseumerized..

Sh:capt!i ve come 2 ur place n u dint gimme a party or smthng..tats nt fair.we wr childhood frnds n u dint show me around

Sw:oh yea!sorrry bout tat!ok cmon lets show u around!

Sh:ma pleasure.bt dnt u hav sme work 2 do?or z it ur day off??

Sw:oh!i 4got.i need 2 go 2 ma office n ll c u in the evening

Sh:ok tats ma num.call me wen u r free..

Swayam ws happy go lucky..

Sw:ok c ya!!tc

Sh:tc.bye

He went 2 his office bt cudnt concentrate..then in the evening as soon as he got free,he calld sharon

Sw:hi Sharon

Sh:hi capt!wazzup??

Sw:just got free.lemme show u around..

Sh:sure.pick me up 4m ___

Sw:ok.em cmng..

He reached thr in 5 mins thou the journey ws ov 15 mins bt he drove fast.he ws getting crazy 4 her.

Sw:hi Sharon

Sh:hi swayam..

Lets go!!she sat in the car n he drove away..

He showed her all the places around.they reached the river.it ws beautiful.sharon started playing wid the water..she threw some on him.n they started a water fight.he ws getting amused ov her every action.he felt on the 7th sky..suddenly he foot slipped n she tripped.he got hold ov her waist n pulled her 2wards him.she crashed into his chest.her touch burnt the fire of passion n desire in him..both ov them were in a trance wen Sharon came bck 2 her sense n pulled her apart.he helped her stand on her feet'

Then darkness sets in..

He took her 2 a five star restaurant wich he had already booked 4 her..thou it wsnt a formal date bt still he made 1 2 impress her.he wnted the best 4 her..

Wen she entered the hotel,there were candles n ballons n beautiful soft music..she ws impressed..then the waitor came up wid a cake n she ws so happy(aftr all swayam baba knws hw 2 impress grls :D )

She cut the cake n swayam clapped.then she fed him the cake n he fed her'

Sh:y z it 4 capt?its nt ma birthday 2day?

Sw:tats hw we welcome our childhood frnds(n winked)

Sharon smiledwhole heartedly n he kept on watching her smile..his gaze n her smile were broken by the waitor who asked 4 the order'swayam signaled him 2 ask Sharon'

She gave the order.he said bring evrythng 4 me same as the lady wants..

This made her more flattered..they had a really gud tym n a tasty candle light dinner..then they moved 2wards the car

Sw:hey w8!lemme ask u 1 thng!

Sh:ya sure ask!

Sw:hw ws 2day s trip??

Sh:it ws awesome..i really felt like a princess.thnks a lot swayam 4 making ma tym so special.u r such a darling n she hugged him again'

Then they drove off 2 her hostel.he left her thr n came bck still lost in her thots..

Veer:swayam u r getting 2 much involved in this grl,I must tell u

Sw:dude!she z different,different 4m othrs n u knw wot?she z ma childhood frnd s sister n ma childhood neighbor

Veer:gr8 swayam!phr to tere setting pakki

Sw:lolx..

N he went 2 bed.lights off!!

So guys!hw ws this epi??plx gimme ur feedback!!

Precap:

Vicky s jalway!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

bt b4 tat as i ve promised,thr z a special epi cmng up!!😊 so bear wid me😊

SPECIAL EPISODE

Edited by tinatartari - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tinatartari

snigdha_arsha asmaju thnks thnks a lot guys 4 liking ma ff n spamming..lolx...i like it dude!!!

n thnks 2 all othrs 2!ok guys em nt discontinuing it n as promised i ll b giving the special epi soon whr u ll b getting 2 knw abt MU!n the mystery man!
cnt clear the MU tat soon as i ve planned sme dramatic scenes 4 tat bt if u guys wnt i cn clear MU in 1 epi bt tat wont b so much fun then..so need ur suggestions
option A)clear MU in 1 epi wid no added drama
option B)only tell abt MU in special epi n clear it in subsequent epis wid lots n lots of drama!!


No problem even if d MU r der but r waiting for a full on romantic updates..
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It was really gud but no kriyaansh..😭
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Cute updt...swayam in Sharon's dreamland...aww cho cute...
Sharon impressed by swayam...
Thnx fr d pm...
Waitin fr d special updt...I don't mind if mu r thr u may clear it in d upcoming updts wid lots of drama...
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