AR/ARSH OS#21:Chahyee Hai Tanhai-pg143/New Thrd link- pg148 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
ummm aftr reading ur os i am listening to the song...and i came back just to say that LOVELY TITLE!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
That was a very cute story😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
you've done a wonderful job turning a very simple concept into a beautiful OS!!!!!!!!!!
loved the way you showed arman's love for riddhima.
looking forward to read more.
so please do write soon.
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
both the OS were splendid...loved them:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
wonderful...
awww armaan is so sweet..
luved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Awsm part buddy.
Luvd it.
Superb os.
Very very cute and romantic part.
Do update more.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
beautiful OS...
very cute,,😳
pls do pm me .. if u write any...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
looking forward to read :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
such a beautiful OS! simple nd sweet!
thnx 4 pm
nd do write more

take care
Sunita:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50

YES I read the two OS :D

 
I Think iv read some of your fics earlier... :D
The 1st OS was soo cuteee...i love how you actually started off on writing when they were kids and how they grow up..that was much needed i think..so we could actually know the depth of their relationship <3
And the more amazing to see Armaan cmng bck as a successful business...and its hard to imagining the Greek God as a Geek initially😆 
and i soo expected thre was gonna be a twist in the story when he was cmng back :( but i thought tht maybe Shilpa moved on in life and no longer love him but thank God it wasnt the case :P but it was heartbreaking to see that she was engaging someone else...i really felt bad...
Heartwrenching moment of the whole OS has to be Armaan-Shashank convo..OMGG I felt sooo much the pain of both of them...i lovee how the whole family love him..and he also...awww!! so well done..am glad that they in the end it was a happy ending :D
LOVE READING IT :D
 
2nd OS
 
Wow wow wow...i think it was very different...type!!
The thing tht i loved was whn KSG was out waiting for muskaan at the mall...and he was in suit😍i was left imagining it..LOL ;P OMG and the whole progression of the story was soo cuteee...Armaan's feeling for Riddhima..and the texting thing...soo cuteee man :D :D i loveee it :D
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