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Posted: 12 years ago
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Manvi, "sharat!!!!! "

Sapna, "han manjoor ho to batyo"??

Manvi, "theek hai apne bhai pe h gayi hai she said last words slowly but sapna overheared it"

Sapna, "to bhai v sharat rakthe hai again teasing manvi"

Manvi, "sapnaaa"

Sapna, "theek hai aur nahi, acha shrat yeh hai k tum mujhe btayogi tum bahi se kaise mili aur yeh sab kab kahan kaise satrt huya u know whole story full detail...she was dancing"

Only then virat entered her room sapna...next was he was like mouth open eyes widened looking at manvi in that sexy black dress.he was dumbstruk looking at scene infront of him, he thought how someone can look so attractive, she was nodoubt looking hot sexy, her perfect figure, her glowing face, her beautiful eyes, her lips like rose petals, she was busy in his admiring session whihch was disturbed by only sapna.

Sapna, "ahem ahem ahem..."bhaiii manvi ko ghoorna band karoge aaaj dinner ka koi plan hai kya???

Virat and manvi were again embarssed by sapna.

Manvi,"self thought yeh virat v na aise ghoor raha tha aur yeh sapna kaisi dress d di mujhe"

Virat, "ek to sapna ne is manvi ko yeh pehna diya aur abhi dekhne v rok hai meri girlfrnd hai main nahi dekhunga to kaun dekhge ga ise, kaun kambhakta khana khana chahta hai agar yeh samne ho"

Sapna, "bhai khiyalon se bahr aayie khana aa gaya hai" {they were served dinner in room only as they it was late night so virat asked his mom to have their dinner in room as all others have done with dinner}.

They did dinner toghther virat occassionly looked at manvi taking care sapna didn't catch him again. After dinner virat unwillingly moved to his room and both sapna manvi chatted whole night sapna forced her to tell whole virman lovestory. Sapna in turn telling manvi about virat's childhood memories. Both slept while talking.

Next morning, manvi got up dressed herself into her suit, did breakfast along with whole family.

After that Mr. And mrs. Vadera talked to manvi she by her charming smile and innocence made a place in their heart.mrs.vadera talked manvi about her childhood, she was sad knowing she is an orphan and happy that this girl is still able to put smile on others face inspite of staying deprived from evrything in her life. Virat was happy as his parents seems to like manvi and he was about to talk about her as his lifepartner.

Mrs.vadera, "virat, tumhari dost bhut achi hai hume achi lagi aur han hume aise h bahu chaiye umeed hai tum apni life partner k liye v aisi h ladki dhundge giving virat a hint that they liked manvi as virat's wife."

Virat was out of this world today. He looked at manvi who was busy with sapna, sometimes with his mom making arrangements for tomorrow's party, sometimes in kitchen, sometimes to hall directing workers to arrange flowers ta proper place like she was doing her own work. As manvi was moving from one corner to other he pulled her while she was going to other work and took her to his room, and put his arms around her waist.

"abhi se vadera house k kaam krne lag gayi ho"

Manvi, "virat chodo mujhe jana hai woh hall mein..."

Virat, "itne sare log hai hall mein"

Manvi, "virat phir v mujhe dekhana hai sab theek hai na"

Virat, "sab k liye time hai bas mere liey h nahi"

Manvi, "virat chodo yeh sab koi aa jayega"

Virat, "aane do mera ghar hai mera room hai"

Manvi, "tumhar ghar hai, tumhara room lekin aise mujhe pakda huya hai chodooo"

Virat, "to kya ???apni girlfrnd ko pakda huya hai jo bahut jald mrs.vadera bangi "

Manvi, "virattt lekin aunty uncle..."

Viart, "mom ne h to ahn ki hai indirect way mein h sahi but they liked you aur sapna use se tumhari khoob pat rahi hai"

Manvi, "sach mein aunty uncle ko main achi lagi"

Virat, "hannn baba" chalo aab to ek kiss banta ahi official ho gaye hai hum and winked her"

Manvi, "hit his chest and ran away... tere haath na ayungiii "

Virat, "yeh manvi ki jawani to mere haath ayegi ...dekh lunga aaj tujhe raat ko"

In vadera family all youngsters {like virat's all frnds all cousins, sapna's frnds} all used to party toghther at club and all parents chitchat at home.

Sapna's room:

Both girls getting ready to go to club manvi was scares as she was never before to any club. Sapna was excited. Manvi came out wearing a suit. Sapna, "mannu ready ho ja"

Manvi, "ho to gyi"

Sapna, "yeh kya pehna hai hume club jana hai mandir nahi janeman"

Manvi, "matlab??"

Sapna, "tumh kabhi club nhi gayi "

Manvi, "made a sad face"

Sapna, "chill yar to kya huya sabka kabhi na kabhi pehla var hota hai, tum mera dress pehn lo"

Manvi's eyes got widned she knew agar iska night dress woh black tha to club dress ..."

Manvi, "rehne do sapna tum log jayo main gahr p h theek hun"

Sapna, "neverrr"

sapna, "aaj tumhe sapna ready karegi aur dekhan phir kamal sab ladke tumhe h dekhnge"

Manvi,"sapna main aise dresses nhi pehnti"

Sapna ," i know i have one perfct for you dear and you know bhai brought that for you"

Sapna took a pink gown and made her wear that.she made her hairs curly.

imagine her in this 😆

virat, "sapnaaa kitna time kagayugi sab log aa gaye honge"
next i am posting now
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sapna, "bhai ek minute" chalein mannu manvi was checking herself again again sapna yeh theek to hai na aunty uncle kya sochnge "

Sapna, "mannu chill main v pehnti hun they never say anything yar we have to dress like the place and its not bad untill you are pure ta heart and you are pure like ganga"

Sapna and manvi came downstaris, virat looked at manvi and was lost in her, she was looking notless than an angel in pink, simplest gown till her knees, her new hairstyle, she was having minimal makeup, pink lipstick making her rosy delicate lips more pink virat wanted to kiss her right there, he smiled at his own thougt he thought she is all yours virat vadera.

Here manvi was amused by virat's looks he was looking smoking hot in his black jeans with black shirt half open,

Manvi," uski ankhoin mein nahi dekhna beta manvi varna sab ke samne teri izzat ka band baj jayega as tu khud ko rok nahi payegi dhubne se but manana padega virat is looking hott"

Mrs.vadera, "virat beta use aapke h saath jana to wahan jee bahr k dekh lena"

Virat, "mom aap v na"

Mrs.vadera, "to manvi beta bht pyari lag rahi ho ksiki nazar na lage enjoy urself"

Three of them moved outside

Sapna," bhaii kaisa laaga sapna ka kamal signalg to manvi"

Virat, "well manvi hai hi itni khoobsurat

Sapna, "bhaiii thoda credit to de dete yar"

Virat, "hey dream u made her look out of this world thanks varna main manvi ka yeh roop kabhi nahi dekh pata"

Virat them moved to manvi and took seat along with her at back seat.

{virat knows how much he wanted to talk to her alone but thanks to the driver and sapna, he was not able to even compliment her, here manvi was getting impatient to know his reaction, obviousely she has made all efforts for him only, she wants to know how she looks from him, evryoone praised her}

Virat, "aaj mujhe marne k irade s aayi ho kya"

Manvi,"kyaaa???"

Virat, "u look stunning,"

This was only virat said while gettng out from car.

All were waiting for them, virat introduced all his friends to manvi, they did causual handshake.sapna was happy introducing manvi to all her friends also. She knew all her friends are jealous seeing manvi with virat as they are tryng their luck on this hot hunk, virat vadera but never succeded, but she was impatiently waiting for someone...

Virat, "chale.."

All, "han yar bas yeh mohit aur maya pata nahi kahan reh gaye"

Sapna, "han yar yeh maya pat anhi aaj abhi tak nahi aayi, yes she was waiting for maya {maya aggrewal daughter of aggrwals, vadera's family friend, she always wanted to be with virat but virat didnt liked her as she is much about his money and she was showing off type, she sometimes used to attract virat physically they had affair for sometime but as soon as virat came to know about her he broke up with her"}

Sapna, "selfthought maya ko jalte huye dekhna hai basss aj to"

All said in one lo aa gayi maya

Maya in her skinny short red dress with high heels was looking sexy, nodoubt she is bautiful but only outside, all boys were like flat on her except virat and she is latto on virat "

Maya, "hello evryone srry for delay"

All. "hieee maya"

Maya," hello virat and moved to him "

Virat, "knew her intensions, he causually did handshake as he was baout ot hug him, "

Sapna, "mayaaa aaj tumhe kisi se milwana hai" see this is manvi manvi chaudhary virat bhai ki friend unke saath h hai"

That made maya face turned to shock and she was all burning inside and manvi she was feeling like she owned virat no one introduced her in this way before,virat hold her by putting hands aroung his shoulders

Virat, "she is my bestest friend, she is spcial friend, i have never seen a girl like her, she is different"

Manvi, " was feeling happy and was continously blusing she never felt so special before "

Maya, "hiee manvi myself maya virat's childhoos friend, special one she said stressing last words"

All did handshake with mohit, maya's friend may be her new bf. {sneha hume mohit se kya}

Virat, "aab ander chalein"

AT club:

Loud music was playing,vj was some hindi some english songs occassionly, mostly peoples were as couples, some were enjoying drinks, some enjoying softdrinks, some hard, some were dancing, some were busy in thier romance at corners.

All made their way to their favrte table as they all used to come here so all knew them here. They took the last table at corner big one from whre they can see all club,

Now time for order, all made theirs at once now it was manvi's turn. She didn't knew.

Manvi, "i don't drink"

Maya, "like got a chance to embarce her whattt ???really u dn't atleast order some soft one,"
Manvi, "was all blank or before she could say

Maya, "it seems like u have never been to any club before??? Don't ur family visit club??don't u people party or just do party at caffetaria only ???" and laughed loud"

That was enough for virat,

Stop it maya how dare you???? I told you na she is not like you who drink everywhere she is different, she is special, and keep in mind she is with virat virat vadera "mind your toungue before saying the next word about her. He made order for her.

Maya felt like virat slapped her infront of evryone and said to herself virat virat vadera kal k party mein tumhe mere saath na huye to mera nam v maya nahi.

Virat assured manvi.


All were chatting, enjoying drinks and start dancing. Everyone forced virat and manvi to dance as the slow music starts palying on vj, lights got dim all couples start dancing getting in the mood.

Finally virat got a chance to be with his bandriya ...he asked hr like a gentleman for dance giving his hand getting over his knees " may i have a pleasure to dance with the most beautiful lady here plz"

Manvi gave her hand in how can she refuse she was dying to be with him, in his arms, he is the only man she wants to be with.

All clapped and strts dancing with the music.

Virat, " bandriya"

Manvi," hmmm"

Virat," u r looking gorgeous today"

Manvi, "thnku"

Virat, "kyaaa???" that thanku was quite formal and from manvi too she used to reply like pehle achi nahi lagti thi, or he was expecting kyun mere suit tumhe itne bure lagte hain types reply"

Manvi, "thanks virat sab ke samne mujhe support kil liye ... woh maya and a tear drop down her eyes, she was hurt by that cmmnts"

Virat, knew it she was hurt but to this extent she took her words he never knew, how could he see a tear in her eyes that bcz of maya neverrr"

He hugged manvi ,manvi tum mere saath ho, aur maya k baateon k bare mein nahi sochna , tum socho aaj hume ek saath mauka mila hai yaahn aur mom dad v khush hai to tum kyun aise logon k tensn leti ho" mujhe pe bharosa nahi hai kya"

Manvi, "tum p h to bahrosa hai khud se v jayda, virat kabhi mera bharosa mat todna main jee nahi apyungi mar jaungi"

Virat , "shhh aise baatein kyun karr rahi ho main tumhre saath hun aur hamesha rahunga always ever forever" and took her into his strong arms protecting her from this cruel world.he kissed her.

They were dancing like lost in eachother. Maya was looking from distance and was yelling in anger how could she, she is such a gawar look at her dress , she is nt a pefct match for hotiie virat"

Mohit, "but maya he is with her evryone can see"

Maya, "jo maya chahti hai use pa h leti hai tum dekhte jana bas tum kaise kar ke yeh drink us manvi k dress p dal do"

Mohit di the same, next was all according to maya's plan, manvi got to washroom along with sapna to clean up her dress and here maya gave money to one of waitor to offer virat with the heavy drink with drugs in it. She knew virat can't hold that one and will loose himself.

Manvi and sapna cleaned her dress, here virat got the drink. When manvi came back she saw drunken virat, she has never seen him like that before, sapna was also mad at her bro. Why the hell he drunk today, sapna said lets go from here.

Maya also joined them, maya ," sapna u shoul stay here only all guests are here manvi will go with virat" sapna agrred maya said she'll go with them and will come back they soon reached vadera house.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 9

Maya," manvi u dnt know me much but see if virat goes like this at home, aunty uncle will feel embarssed infront of all, its a big day for them let me drop virat at outhouse you both go inside.

Manvi "main virat k saath chalti hun"

Virat, "in his unconsciuos hannn hann manvi chalo mere saath hum saath rukenge dher sari baatein karenge"

Maya," agar uncle aunty ko pata chala tum dono akele mein aisi haalta mein outhouse mein ho unhe kaisa lagega u go in i'll leave him at outhouse and will go back to party"

Manvi halfheartly agrred she was not feeling to let virat go with maya , she dont know why but she was feeling something bad at heart.

Virat in his unconsciuosness took maya as manvi

Virat, "i love you manvi" i love you very much

Maya, "virat aaab tum mera hone se koi nahi rok sakta"

Maya took him to outhouse she slept with him. He was thinking maya as manvi.

Next morning

Whole night was a whole year for manvi, she wanted to see virat just once"

Here in outhouse, virat woke up with heavy head, when he opened eyes he was hell shocked to see maya beside him under blanket. He was in his shorts only. Maya was crying,

Virat, "what the hell r you doing here"

Maya, "sobbing aaab tum aisa h akhoge kal raat jab mere saath...she was crying main kahin mooh dikhane layek nahi rahi"

Virat, "closed his eyes in guilt and anger, look maya i know main kal kuch jayda h pee li thi but m sure i haven't done anything dont make a issue"

Maya, "han tumhe to issue h lagega, main bahar kya kahungi tumne meri dosti ka najayaz faida uthya hai"

Virat, "shittt up maya i know you"

Maya, "but you know me...no girl will say this kal raat tumne mere saath..."

Virat, "clinched his fist in anger and puch on the wall"

Maya, "theek hai mat mano main tumhari zingdi se chali jayungi jaise 4 saal pehle cahli gayi thi jab tumne mujhse breakup kiya tha aur kal raat to...main tumhare payr aur kal raat k yaadoin k sahre apni zindgi gujar lungi "

Virat, "look maya"

He was numb to see manvi on the door, manvi was hell shocked all heart broken, she was in tears, "

Virat, "mannu..."

Manvi, "away from there"

Manvi was all in tears came running to vadera house, seeing her crying like this all went to outhouse and all were hell shocked seeing virat with maya.

maya told everyone they are in relationship. Virat didn't cared to answer anyone he just wants to talk to one person that was manvi

manvi was feeling betryaled

manvi was lying on bed in sapna's room she was crying like mad, she was feeling she has lost everything, she is no more, she was feeling all heartbroken at ths time, only one thing was before her eyes maya saying "jaise 4 saal pehle breakup k vad chli gyi thi aab v chali jayungi tumre pyar aur kal raat k yaadein le ke"

manvi can never expct virat to do all this he did spent nght with her and was sayiong her yo leave him and here he is making promises to be with her.

Virat, "who came running to manvi after werang his tracks and shirt"

Manvi listen to me , jaisa tum soch rahi ho..."

Manvi, "kyun virat kyun kiya tumne aisa mere saath maine tumpe kitna bharosa kiya ur tumne yeh sila diya mere pyar ka"

She was sobbing badly , there was no way to get her tears stop, she hold his shirt and why virat why????

Kya kami thi mere pyar mein???? Maine to tumhe hamesha pyar kiya tha na phir kyun tumne mujhe dhokha diya, ek var keh dete bas ek var sab kuch chod k chali jati lekin kal raat jo tumne maya...

Arre mujh ek var keh k to dekhte tumhe sirf yehi chaiye tha she closed her eyes in disgust main tumhe apna sab kuch de deti agar tumhra pyar sirf yehi thi..."

Virat kyun kyun mere pyar ka katal kiya tumen kyun

Virat u killed me,

Virat,"manvi meri baat to suno"

Manvi, "abhi kya reh gaya hai sunane k liye jo dekhna tha maine dekh liya and she collapsed not bearing so much pain fell down on the bed"

Virat, "manviii"

Whole family came there sapna pushed virat away from her and took her to the bed and doctor came there to check manvi, doctor prescribed medicine and advised to keep her wawy from stress and take rest.

All moved from room virat was going to enter room

Sapna, "mr. Virat vadera you are not allowed to look her"

Virat, "dream.."

Sapna, "don't you dare call me that"

Virat, "ek var janne do"

Sapna, "kya dekhna chahte ho mar gayi ya jinda hai woh"

Virat, "plzz sapna stop it i love her, she is my life"

Sapna, " to tab life kahan gayi thi ajb us maya k saath...tumhe apna bhais kehte v sharm aa rahi hai" plz virat go i am not going to let you detriorate my frndz health"

Virat was all heartbroken after getting blame from his love and his sis. He was feeling guilty to cheat manvi, he wants to tell her how much he loves her but she was not ready to listen. He was feeling guilty to betrayed her trust, he was feeling himself at fault to have tears in her eyes, those eyes in which he never wanted tears are today red bcz of him. He was dying millions of death for that.

Manvi got conscious, sapna drooped her back to hostel, sapna said sorry to manvi for what her brother did.

Here virat and maya got engaged on the same day he was supposed to announce manvi as his life partner.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ye6gy_MWnHg play the song

Hum bewafa hargiz na the

Par hum wafa kar naa sake

Humko mili uski sazaa

Hum jo khata kar naa sake

Hum bewafa hargiz na the

Par hum wafa kar naa sake

Virat was all lost sitting on floor next to his bed in his room, looking at manvi's pics in his phone rembering old days and memories of their togtherness, he was crying his heart out.

Kitni akeli thi woh rahen hum jinpeAb tak akele chalte rahen
Tujhse bichhad ke bhi o bekhabar
Tere hi gham mein jalte rahen
Tune kiya jo shiwa
Hum woh gila kar naa sake
Hum bewafa hargiz na the
Par hum wafa kar naa sake
Virat was standing at front door of his house rembering how he brought her there happily, how she left from here all in tears, he can't bear her tears, he puch hard on wall, hurting himself.
Tumne jo dekha suna sach tha magar
Itna tha sach yeh kisko pataa
He rembered the time when manvi was looking at him and maya togther in that room he wa sthere only
Jaane tumhe maine koi dhokha diya
Jaane tumhe koi dhokha hua
He put his hands on the place she was standing and he broke down into sobbs there remebering how fate played a game with their live, he loved her from heart still loves her only, he know she loves him and only him
Is pyaar mein sach jhooth kaa
Tum faisla kar naa sake
Hum bewafa hargiz na the
Par hum wafa kar naa sake
Edited by snehamaanvirman - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 10

Here jeevika came back to hostel after a phone call from sapna who got her number from mannu's cell as she knew only jeevika can hel her at this point.

Jeevika came back as soon as possible after call,

Here manvi was in her room crying sitting in a corner,

Mujhse Hui Bas Yeh Khata
Maine Tujhe Chaha Sanam
Chup Chup Ke Roothi Rahi
Tune Diye Kaise Yeh Ghum
O Bekhabar Beraham
Karle Chaahe Jitne Sitam
Na Chaahat Kabhi Hogi Kam
Mujhe In Aasoon Ki Kasam
Maine Kiya Hai Tujhse Sachcha Pyaar'(2)

Jeevika came back, she cried seeing her mannu, no this was not her mannu, her manu was full of life, always smiling, runnning, searching thinhs to eat, now she was spending her time sitting in corner hugging her teddy, not smiling, not eating, nothing just a lifeless statue.manvi used to spent nights looking at moon, rembering her happy days with virat. Now she used to listen sad songs. She used to hug jeevika and burst out whenevr she was unavle to control, all she could do is just crying, she never go out, she never palyed with kids now she is lost manvi was lost. Manvi bacame a jinda lassh after that incident spoked jeevika to sapna who was still in touch with jeevika to know abt her condition.

Here virat wants to know about manvi but there was no source, he tried a lot of times to call to viren and jeevika but he dared not, he know he is at fault, he cheated manvi, he was feeling so low, he thinks how can he face viren and jeevika, he can't face anyone , manvi he always used to think about manvi...he tried a couple of times to know from sapna, she told him that manvi is dying daily because of him that made him feel more guilty. He thought living with maya is his punishment but why manvi is getting punishment.

then only jeevika realised they are too late to return back to hostel as tomorrow these 25 days vacations chnaged ther lives expecially virat and manvi all are feared to join tomorrow manvi, virat are not reday at their respective places and jeevika is worried about mannu...
so friends i think this is maha episode se v maha update thi 😆
and yeh mera bday return gift tha thnks to all frnds for ur wishes
i hope you all like it plzzz gve me biggg cmmnts
Edited by snehamaanvirman - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nicely written dear! Loved it.
Edited by Coolioqueen - 12 years ago
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Super Jumbo update... Loved it... awww that is y maanvi is sad now... waiting to see how things move on...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
wow
u r doing great job
awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this was a supa long update . And it was beautifully writen and amazingly explained . I loved it and update soon really excited to read further about how things will get better. Well u bought a surprising twist in the story which we didn't expect so update soon
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OMG Gish this was awesome you did a huge favour by updating like this and I feel really bad for VIRMAN and I loved it please PM me when you update...
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hey...have no words to describe it...just loved it...it was long and amazing...so plz continue soon...
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