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OMG sneha, I just finished reading all the parts at once. It was so lovely, you really shocked me with the accident scene. Really love the SS to the core, please keep updating and PM me whenever you update
thks dearOriginally posted by: Sonika1988
That was really cute. And u better update soon . K???
loved it
Thnksss yar it really means a lot to me
thnksss dearOriginally posted by: daminipatel12
Awesome! Please pm me and thanks for the pm.😊
@hoor dear i knw its too shortHun im warning u after this adorable update i want an LONGER update SOON... This update is too too short i want a maha episode type update never ending...this was so cute and sweet i loved it thanx but...
Update soon and it should be long infact it definately will be long or else...
*assume ur plight* LOL
thnkuu u read it all one and likeOMG sneha, I just finished reading all the parts at once. It was so lovely, you really shocked me with the accident scene. Really love the SS to the core, please keep updating and PM me whenever you update
Virat came close to her looking into her eyes lovingly
Tumhein Pata To Hoga
Tum Hi Pe Main Fida Hoon
took paint roller from her hand kept away, took her in his arms and moved round round in whole room taking her in his strong arms, manvi was trying to down but he lovingly hugged her back
Tumhein Hai Jab Se Chaha
Hawaon Mein Udta Hoon
Tum Hi Mere har Pal Mein
Tum Aaj Mein Tum Kal Mein
Hey Shona Hey Shona
Hey Shona Hey Shona
they broke the hug manvi came infront of him put her arms aroud him looked into his eyes confessing her love once again
Tumhein Pata To Hoga
Ke Mere Dil Mein Kya Hai
Chalo Kahe Deti Hoon
Kabhi Nahin Jo Kaha Hai
Tum Hi Mere Har Pal Mein
Tum Aaj Mein Tum Kal Mein
Hey Shona Hey Shona
Hey Shona Hey Shona
They completed room arranged evrthing , they were enjoying eachother company to the core with eachother, manvi agree for virat's stay at her hostel , they used to spend whole day toghther listening songs, playing games like chess virat looses sometimes manvi, they do fight for this manvi ka roothna virat ka manaana was usual. He used to shower all his love on his lady love , he never let her do anything he used to cook sometimes otherwse manvi bring meal from outside sometimes virat did from backdoor. They used to sleep while talking infact virat always made her sleep first they never mind looking at clock to check time for their routine to sleep and waking up they do it in their own way. Virat placed a packet under her pillow and a note to get ready for date she wore beautiful royalblue suit, he was lost looking at his manvi looking so adorable in that gown, they were sitting in resturent, a hot girl passed their table virat smiled to her and waved her, manvi got angry nd moved from there
virat runned back to her placed his hand on her chin
Tum Jo Gussa Bhi Karo
To Mujhe Pyaar Lagta Hai, Jaane Kyun
Manvi moving his hand away twisted her lips and moved
Main To Jo Bhi Kahoon
Tumhein Ikraar Lagta Hai, Jaane Kyun
Virat hold her wrist as she was about to move and pulled her by wrist making her fall in his arms
Chhodo Bhi Yeh Ada
Paas Aake Zara
Baat Dil Ki Koi, Keh Do Na
Hey Shona Hey Shona
Hey Shona Hey Shona
they used to watch movies sometimes manvi laughed loud, she used to cry at emotional scenes, virat gave her tissue to wipe her tears or shoulder to cry, he silently smiled and admired his angel. She hugged him whenever at end couple met and written lived happily everafter.It was almost 11 in evening one of other day, they were roaming at roads she saw a ice cream parlour virat looked at her face, the way her expressions changed into a biggg smile looking at that, she turned to made a demand but virat was standing with her favourte in his hands ans a big hypnotising smile on his face and offered her, she felt blessed having him in his life.
Saari Duniya Ko Chhod Ke Maine Chaaha Hai, Ik Tumhein
Maine Zindagi Se Maanga Hai To Sirf Maanga Hai, Ik Tumhein
she put her arms in his, placed her head on his chest and both were moving holding eachother making a teddybear hug.
Ab Isi Chah Mein
Ab Isi Raah Mein
Zindagi Bhar Mere, Tum Ho Na
Hey Shona Hey Shona
Hey Shona Hey Shona
As usual they were sitting toghther in her room, when his phone rang he took the call
Virat, "ohh GOD"
Shit man shittt
Aab main kya karun
But yar main aise kaise aaa jyun abhi
Hmmm
Ya its gr8 idea
And hangeed up.
Virat looked at her happily and said, "get ready miss chaudhriyan to take first step to become mrs. Vadera"
Manvi, "kya huya"
Virat, "rolled up her in his arms" bandriya bandriya ...
Manvi, "kuch bolege v kya???"
Virat, " hume ghar jana hai "
Manvi, "not getting him what he was saying" kya????
Virat, "kal mom dad k anniversary party hai mujhe jana padega aur meri bhen sapna ka phone tha she said tumhe v le ayun aur is se better time kya hoga tumhe unse milwane ka"
Manvi, "little scared lekin virat???"
Virat, "lekin bekin kuch nahi... com on jaan"
Manvi, "unhe kaisa lagega"
Virat, "main hoon na jaan and kissed her forehead" ab ready ho jayo aur han dress hum jate waqt le lenge kuch kapde mat lena"
Before she questioned him further or say anything He pushed her to washrrom to get ready gave her the same white dress he liked the most.
updating part 7 soon
part 7 {in two parts}
Virat, "manvi uthoo ghar aa gaya jaan"
Manvi, "thoda sone do na yaar"
Virat, "theek hai soti raho main apne mom dad ko yahani bula lun"
Manvi, "ohhh shitt hum to chandigarh aa gaye"
Viart, "ohhh thank god aapko yaad aa gaya madam teasing her "
Manvi, "hit his arms pehle nahi jaga sakte thy "
Virat, "yeh dekho bhalyai ka jaman h nahi hai"
Manvi, "yahin p rukne ka irada hai ya ander v jaynge and moved out from taxi"
Virat payed the bill and came to her. She was nervous, it was obvious from her gestures she was continousely pulling her suit and making her hairs again again. Virat looked at her and placed his hand on her shoulder.
Chill manvi, kuch nahi hoga tumara exam nahi hai mom dad h hain ander aur unhe pata hai mere saath meri frnd hai.
Manvi," yeh to exam se v jayda dar lag raha hai"
They entered vadera house, it was a big house like a royal palace, whole anterior was well designed, furniture was beautiful, she was looking all around, she knew he is rich but never knew his house would be like this. He disturbed her saying so would be mrs. Vadera kaisa laga aapko apna ghar
Manvi, "virat yeh to kitna bda hai litterly ignoring his last words would be mrs.vadera as she was busy in making whole things in hermind how someone would clean this.
Manvi, "virat ise saaf karne mein kitne din lagte hoge na, aur agar paint karna ho to...baba main to thak jayungi mujhse to ek hafte mein v nahi hoga making a sad face
Virat, "unable to control his laughter and looking at her innocency manvi jaan tumhe ise saaf nahi karna padega, holding her from shoulder making her face him, yahan pe bht sare nauker hain tumhe bas order karna hoga samji tum.
Manvi, "virat phir v"
Virat, "put his finger on his lips, shhh...bas kuch nahi"
They were disturbed by his younger sister sapna
Virat, "dream kaisi haiii"
Both hugged virat used to call her dream he loves her sis a lottt like evry brother.
Sapna, "looking at manvi then at virat to yeh hai apki khas dost jiske liye aap apne dream s door rahe ghar nahi aaye manvi"
Virat, "sapnaaa..."\
Sapna, "bhaii let me introduce myself to her aap to milwayoge nahi"
Sapna to manvi main sapna virat k choti bhen doing fashion desginig in mumbai mom dad k anniversary k liye aayi hun.
Manvi, "main manvi" before she could say anythng
Sapna, " manvi manvi chaudhary, orphan main rahi ho bachpan se she was sad saying this bht intelligent ho, fun loving ho, apni zingdi ka har pal jeeti ho, hasti ho dusro ko hasati ho sab k help kartii ho,mere bhai ki class mein ho aur jeevika di se bhtt pyar karti ho aur mere bhai virat se v bht pyar karti ho na...she said last word by hitting her by her arm,
Both virat and manvi were blushing listening to this. Manvi was all red
Virat, "sapna jayda mat bolo"
Sapna, "kyun kuch galt bola kya"
Meanwhile virat's parents came down stairs they were dressed well, mr.vadera in black suit showing his personality, mrs.vadera in beautifull blue saree yet looking a descent lady.
Virat, "namste dad and touched his father's feet, namstey mom and hugged her"
Mom, "hugged him aa gaya mera bachha"
Virat, "mom dad yeh meri friend hai manvi"
Manvi, "folded both hands namstey uncle namstey aunty"
They {parents} happy heartly welcomed manvi.
Mom , "manvi, beta upar ja ke fresh ho jyo main dinner lagwa deti hun phir dinner karke hum baatein karenge"
Manvi, "g aunty"
Virat was about to move with manvi sapna interuptted him, "bhai main hoon na inhein room dikhane k liye aap kyun itna parehshan ho rahe ho aap v to thake honge na aap apne rrom mein jayo"
Sapna took manvi to her room itself, virat unwillingly moved to his room.
Sapna," aap bht payri ho"
Manvi, "tum mujhe aap kyun keh rahi ho tum bulayo na"
Sapna, "tum theek hai and smiled" yeh lo towel and fresh ho jayo sapna gave manvi her night suit.
Manvi, "self thought aab main yeh pehnu kya??"
Sapna gave manvi her nightsuit obviously that was a black dree above her knees, manvi was used to wear only trousers. She came outside wearing that pulling her dress down down but all her efforts in vain obviously dress is not going to get long by her pulling efforts.
manvi wore this 😃
Manvi," nahi wohh woh main maine kabhi yeh sab... and made a pleading face.
Sapna, "got that and hold her chill manvi, yeh socho bhai tumhe is mein dekhnge to flat ho jayenge and winked her"
Manvi, loooked down and starts blusing\
Sapna," hayeee kitna shrmati ho tum tabhi mera bhai marta hai tumpe"
Manvi, "sapna plzz stop it"
Sapna, "ek sharat pe"
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