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Posted: 12 years ago
hello guys sneha here i think most of you must have forgotten all about this and lost hope that its gonna update anyday 😆
well what to do i myslef lost the track and got busy in much stuff...its hoor, kusam and coolioqueen who made me realise i do have started an ss which i have to update ...
thank you girls and biggg sorry for much delay in update well this part is for my sweeties
hope you guys like it
ohh i think i should stop bla bla now and make it an update
don't forget to leave your comment😃

Everyone in vadera mension was happy to have their son's happiness and day after tomorrow is virat's engagement on his b'day. They all were planning for the shopping and all engagement prepartions. That night no one left vadera house mr. khanna family was also there. All kids were together manvi, sapna, jeevika were discussing about manvi's engagement dress, jewellary and all stuff. viren and virat were just adoring their girls.

Mrs. Vadera came, "Beta sapna u guys should sleep now, you have lots of thing to do tomorrow and manvi beta u and jeevika sleep in sapna's room and viren and virat will settle in virat's room.

All settled in respective rooms.

Virat kissed manvi on her forehead and said her good night.

Next morning:

All left for shopping firstly they entered a Dressing shop to select a saree for manvi's engagement and virat's sherwani. Manvi was astonished to see such a big shop, manvi was wrong its not a shop it was a designer showroom.

Manvi, "virat khisk gayi hai tumhari itni badi shop main le aaye pagal ho yahan kitna costly hoga sab"

Virat, "hold her and looked into her eyes, "anything for my partner" that was so intense manvi was all lost in his deep brown eyes.

Jeevika, "aab chalein andar"

They went inside and starts selecting dress in girls section manvi was hell confused with so many sarees around her. She tried one red and looked herself in mirror then from back virat came and said no with eyes.

Manvi tried anotherblue one that was beautiful saree with some net work, sapna and jeevika said yes but manvi looked in mirror to get his response he said ok ok waving his hand in air left to right . manvi again changed like this she changed many sarees and virat refuse one by one saying no. now manvi got irritated and throwed all sarees to one corner and sat on one side making a sad face.

SApna, " no worries bhabhi we'll get one"

Manvi, "tomorrow is engagement and when will get a dress after engagement ?"

Then virat came and said , "no my jaan you'll get it today itself"

Manvi, "fuming in anger on virat for rejecting all sarees 'OO really like the way you reject all dress I think I'll get my dress till my grandkids marriage and what will I do then with that dress."

All brust into laughter but virat hold her from shoulder and turned towards him said, " partner why are u upset I want my mannu to look best on our engagement"

Sapna , jeevika and viren left to other corner to get their dree leaving love birds some private moments.

Manvi, "virattt'.buttt'''I haven't got anything yet L"

Virat, " handed her a packet and said try this one "

Manvi, "I am not gonna try anything you will again say no"

Virat, "please one last for me giving his trademark killing smile"

How could manvi just say no to his plead she took packet and opened it. She was amused at his choice in girl's dress. It was an elegent marron half off white saree, half net, half jacquard,with some designer work on border with white and off white blowse . when manvi came wearing the saree virat got lost in her.

Virat, "coming forward looking directly into her eyes{eyelock}

Manvi starts moving back unknowingly she got stuck with wall behind her, virat came dangerously close to her and whispered in his husky voice, "manvi mujhse door jane ki koshish kar rahi ho'''ja payogi mujhse door,"

Manvi, "was still she was looking down not able to meet his gaze" he took her chin and let her eyes meet his , "mujhse shaddi karne ka irada hai ya nahi"

Manvi was shocked and confused on his comment, "he smiled and saidwhile holding her from both sholders agar aaj h itna khoobsurat lagogi main to mar jaunga na phir shaddi kis se karogi"

Manvi, "hit him with his fist virat tum v na ''''aur han aise nahi marne dungi tujhe yaad rakhna khud se pehle to kabhi nahi tumhri maut ko apne gale laga lungi"

Virat, covered her mouth signaling her not to say this and hugged her tightly. The mere thought of getting apart made both like they will loose everything.

The beautiful moment of lovebirds was again disturbed by dear sapna {hoor u gonna kill me for this lolz kya karun mujhe idea h aisa aata hai }

Sapna, 'who was confused for her dress came having a pile of dresses in his hand bhabhi kaunsi lun she spoke without realisng the situation infront of her.

When she looked virman hugging she just dropped all dress, "ohhh hooo koi yahan v romance kar raha hai"

Virman get all embarrsed agin being caught by her

Virat, "not again cursed his sis. For ruining his love moment with manuu{just like hoor curse sneha :P}

Sapna, "bhai maine sun liya aap mujhe kosna band karo aur bhabhi mujhe help karo na dress select karne mein"

And virat left from there but not to forget saying there is surprise you for partner in her ear as whisper which made manvi blush and sapna got a chance to tease her would be bhabhi"

Latter the day was quie hectic for all they all did shopping for jewellary, makeup apointments for parlour and all together. Virman in between got some moments for them.

Virat in between went from there as he has to arrange his surprise for her hero and that should be perfect like her. Manvi missed him, is one sight was enough for her to smile.

After shopping virat took manvi to guest house making her blindfold to show her his surprise.

Manvi was curious as usual to know thing at first

Manvi, "virat kholo na please"

Virat, "manvi wait a second yar"

Manvi, "nahi hota partner u know na"

Virat took her very carefully to the site and he said now m opening your fold open your eyes she nodded happily like a small kid but to her smile soon turned into a complaining face seeing all dark in front of her and she turned but not found virat there. She become anxious and start looking around for him forgetting surprise how could she bear his absence from her sight. She moved little forward and got hit by something infact say someone but who is sitting in dark as she lowered down herself to know she found its virat

Manvi, "virattt wht r u doing here u are here to sit in this dark that too alone in this bhoot bangla type place ''chep pagal ho gaye ho kya"

Virat, "finally got something and said yesss''..and then there was light all over the place."

Manvi was amazed seeing the sight infront of her eyes she blinked three times to realize she is not dreaming all the back side of outhouse was decorated with her favorite red white roses and lights'''on one side there was a table decorated with red and white and in front of her was a huge heart made by roses and written on one side with roses "will you marry me partner?"

Manvi was capturing the moment, she got overwhelmed with joy having virat in her life she in no seconds said yes I'll I'll marry you chep" and hugged him. her eyes become wet with such a cute proposal.

Virat, "yar manna thoda plan gadbad ho gaya lights were supposed to light by itself by your next step on switch don't know what happened wire looses cnnction but rone wali baat to nahi hai na manvi '.he teased her while hugging.

Manvi, "you can never change"

Virat, "do you want me to change"

Manvi, "putting her arms around his shoulder never ever my heroine I never want you to change I just love you this way and want you be with me forever in same way teasing me loving me caring for me.

Virat took her to the table he made her sit like a real gentleman pulling chair for her. There were all roses on the table nothing else manvi questioned him with eyes he made some flowers move by blowing some roses to other side signaling her to do the same. She did it enjoyed and both starts doing it looking into eachother eyes lost. Finally with last blow from manvi something shined from below manvi was her eyes wide open she was right it was a ring a beautiful diamond ring with a small diamond in centre simple yet beautiful, priceless just like manvi simple and pure he took the ring and movd on his knees, "may I have the pleasure to dance with the prettiest girl on this earth who agreed to marry me just few min. ago"

How on this earth could reject such a romantic dance proposal from hottest guy who is madly in love with this girl. She forwarded her hand, he softly carefully made her wear ring and took her hand in his for a dance. She asked for music with her expressions and he stars singing for her.

Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye

Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye

Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

Na koi hai na koi tha zindage mein tumhaare sivaTum dena saath mera o humnawaazTum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

He took one of her hand in his and make her other hand placed on is shoulder, he pull her towards himself placing his other hand on his waist and starts moving slowly for and back.

Ho chaandni jab tak raat deta hai har koi saathTum magar andheron mein na chhodna mera haathHo chaandni jab tak raat deta hai har koi saathTum magar andheron mein na chhodna mera haath Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaayeTum dena saath mera o humnawaazNa koi hai na koi tha zindage mein tumhaare sivaTum dena saath mera o humnaw

He twrilled her in air making her around and again took her in his strong arms.

He left her and moved to took drink for them but stopped listening to her beautiful voice which is the most sweetest for him. she came forward to him and put her arms around his and starts singing wafa darri ki yo'..

Wafadaari ki vo rasmein nibhayenge hum tum kasmeinEk bhi saans zindagi ki jab tak ho apne bas meinWafadaari ki vo rasmein nibhayenge hum tum kasmeinEk bhi saans zindagi ki jab tak ho apne bas mein Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaayeTum dena saath mera o humnawaazNa koi hai na koi tha zindage mein tumhaare sivaTum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

He then took her to other side of where there was a huge heart for her he made her sit in that heart and pulled a screen down and played it. It was a slideshow of all there picsfrom colleage some of only her pics he took secretly and some together and both sat there reliving the moments they spent together witnessing there love to grow all over again.

Dil ko mere hua yakeen hum pehle bhi mile kahinSilsila ye sadiyon ka koi aaj ki baat nahinDil ko mere hua yakeen hum pehle bhi mile kahinSilsila ye sadiyon ka koi aaj ki baat nahin Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaayeTum dena saath mera o humnawaazJab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaayeTum dena saath mera o humnawaazNa koi hai na koi tha zindage mein tumhaare sivaTum dena saath mera o humnawaazTum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

They lay down there in the heart manvi keeping her head on his chest and virat embrassed her in his hug she felt his arms to be the safest place on this earth and both were looking on sky and stars who were witness of these two and their love.


Epilouge

virman got married after 7months of their enagement on manvi's b'day making her b'day more special. virat and manvi completed their study and both are working togther in business they go office togther and all the time virman spent togther. after 2years of their marriage the couple was blessed with twins one girl baby just like her Dad having hazel eyes and a son just like her mom naughty and sweet. virman named baby girl mannat{this i took from tvc} and boy nishal. Virika also got married in between and jeevika gave birth to a sweet and cute daughter just like both of her parents.

Today was5th birthday of their sweet naughty kida mannat and nishal.

Virat, "manvi mere bachoin ka b'day aaj hai to main party mein aaj jana chahta hun"

Tum kabhi time se ready nahi ho sakti kuch v ho jaye"

Manvi came from dressing room dressed herself in peach net saree looking stunningly beautiful and sexy amking virat loose in him"

Manvi, "snapped in front of his face'kya kaha tumne mere bache ,,,,,,huuummm bolo phir se meer bachee mere bache hain who samjhe tum mere manvi vadera ke"

Virat, "knowing how much she got irritated calling kids my kids he again mere bache virat vadera ke bache"

Manvi , "put her fingers on his chest and pulled him back ek baat samjh lo who mere bache hain phir se galti mat karna samjhe warning him"

Virat, "mere bache"

Manvi, "mere bache"

Both continued their nokjhok on mere bache unaware of the fact two cute angels were looking at them both nishal and mannat were looking at their parents fighting for kids like small kids fight for candies no no small kida ven don't fight so much as their loving parents do"

Both kids looked at eachother shook their heads in disbelief like they know its daily routine of their parents and how much they love eachother they shared a smile and mannat shook virat's paint similarly nishal manvi's saree

Mannat, "papa hum muma se baad mein jhgda kal sakte hain na cake kat le pehle mehman bole ho jayenge ya hum unko bolde mele mumypapa busy hai dab{jab} decdeee{decide} ho jayega phil cake katenge"

Virman got shocked by their kids and laughed virat sat down on his knees to came down to level of his small angel, "mela shona aapka b'day ho papa na aaye aisa ho sakta hai manvi gave a angry look to virat for saing papauff forgetting to say mumma too"

Han han mumy papa dono aayenge"

Aap logo chalo hum aate hain

Nishal, "momma aap log phir se mat suru ho jana nahi to hum aise h cake kat lenge"

And he ran

Manvi, "badmash bilkul apne papa pe gaye ho chep kahin ke"

Virat, "kahin ka nahi madam aapka chep"

Virman hugged and manvi made his tie at position he never did this he love the way she made it at final moment.

And virman lived happily ever after with their nishal and mannat and their sweet nok jhok and true love.

don't kill me for ending the ss it was meant to be an os but turned into ss with your love and inspiration thanks to all who pressed like and commented.

i promise will come up with new ideas.

thanks for ur love

leave your precious comments whether neagtive or positive

love sneha

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zazur6UkAmc virman vm i made tere dil ka mere dil se ristha purana hai

Edited by snehamaanvirman - 12 years ago
Coolioqueen thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Its a really nice update dear! I liked it...
Superb epilouge.
Keep writing like dis!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww loved it dear.. superb ending.. happy and sweet ending.. i love their jok johk... it was awesome.. now waiting for some other ss or os of yours...
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Posted: 12 years ago
dis wz sucha a super sweet romantic update ...
luvd viratz surprise n mostly the saree trial romance☺️
n awww...such a beautiful ending... virmaan, mannat n nishal...n a happily evraftr...😳😍
luvd the kidz name...mannat n nishal...(bth onscreen offscreen ...huh...nice)😃
thnku 4 givin us such a virmanilicious treat 2 read🤗
dis wz n wil alwayz b one in ma list of fav virman fantasies...
wud luv 2 read more from ya...
so plz do cum up wid more such awsum works n pm me wenev u pendwn...😍
n thnx a loot 4 the pms sofar... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it... 1 of the best ss...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww!!!!!!!!!!
i just read the entire thing!!!
absolutely loved it!!!!
amazin atart nd mre amazin endin!!!!
loveeed it!!!!👏
thnk u fr such a cute s on virman😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww sneha di fabulous
"manvi mujhse door jane ki koshish kar rahi ho'''ja payogi mujhse door,"
Amazing dialogue
Im sad it ended but the ending was mindblowing
And i was guna kill u on the part when sapna interfered between VirMan Romancing but after the cutest,romantic proposal of virat i thought thoda rehem kar doon iss liye maaf kardiya...
The epilogue was so sweet an the twins aww nishal and mannat beautiful and typical VirMan arguing over 'Mere Bache'
Lol ... And the sareer part was amazing when Manvi was choosing sarees and virat kept on rejecting them and right at the end he gifted her one aww totally filmy jus my type...
Amazing SS and damn looking forward to u writing more os/ff/ss'
Saw your signature pic aww so sweet u mentioned my name truly our unique dosti thanksz for the suprise and dont ever say that i will be cursing u cuz ur too good to be cursed at
Luv u Di
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update!! Thanks so much for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Coolioqueen

Its a really nice update dear! I liked it...
Superb epilouge.
Keep writing like dis!

thnkuu so much dear it really means a lot
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Originally posted by: preethis

awww loved it dear.. superb ending.. happy and sweet ending.. i love their jok johk... it was awesome.. now waiting for some other ss or os of yours...

thnkuuu

ya sure i'll come with a new
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