~MAHSOOS~ THREAD 8 (not pg 153)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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congo for new thread
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Armaan looked at anny with curious, moving little close...
"do you mind if I ask you something..."
"ha puco..."
Geet looked at both with curiosity.

Armaan plus his hand up, holding 5 finger... "how many finger I am holding..."
Geet instantly gave armaan a glare.
"4 finger and 1 thumb!"

Anny couldn't stop laughing, as armaan made one of the most unwanted noise. Geet couldn't help her self to, seeing armaans face.

"how did you do that?"

Geet took maans tea and left from the table. Leaving anny with armaan.

...
Kripa stood by the door, wearing a white dress. A line of black mark was flowing its way down her. Cheek.

Avantika wanted to comfort, but just wasn't sure how to.

...

Geet gives maan his morning tea. He sat on the sofa, listening to the news. Nothing he really fancy, but sometime some odd news always fascinates him.

It was the first time geet ever seen him listening to news.

"I never knew you listen to news." she came by and say next to maan.

"yes, now and then, but rare..."
"I hate news. Never a good news!"
Maan smiled, as he sipped his tea.
"news is information, not a story!"
"ha! Ha... Pata hi. It's information, but how can anyone remember information?"
"do you really want to remember or do you want to understand?"
Geet roles her eyes. Can't he ever stop asking such silly question! Uff...
"like I want to know!" she mumbled under her breath.
"I hard armaan is here?"
Maan questions.
"ha... He was worried about us with kripa being here and all that.. He knows I can't tolerate her." geet twisted her lips. Thinking should she have told there friendly conversation!
Maan couldn't control him self laugh little louder. It had to be geet and her friends who can't control there childish brain.
"geet... I have told you, there are nothing to worry!"
"ha! Ha... I know you tell not to think about nonsense... Per maan toh ek hi na... I don't want to share my husband!" geet twisted her lips again, glaring at maans cheeky face. "au..."
"acca... Just one maan?"
"I- oh-"
"aur?"
Maan gently moved the tea from his lap, leaving it on the coffee table an then cuddled geet on his lap...
Geet slides her hand slowly along his shoulder. Gently suppressing her wet lips on his cheek. "and only I want to kiss him"..
"that's not done..." he whispered. "you need to find better sentence..."
Geet with pink face looked down. "I can't think anything..."
"how come, when it comes to complain, you can complain ever so nicely... Why not when we are in bedroom, alone.. Close door..."

Geet roles her eyes... "Bari aye room parne..." she mumbled...
"shall I read it for you..."
"paro..."

Maan stroked his nose against her cheek, but before they could go anywhere a loud knock parted them. It's anny...

"au... Armaan is leaving..." she barely thought something was going on!
Geet looked at maan then anny, who barely looked embarrassed, while poor geet couldn't even met her own eyes.
"oh... Umm... I- au- Ab- hm- you-"
Anny stared at the darkness blankly with geets confusing words. Was she trying to say something?
"geet- I am not sure if I am understanding what you trying to express..."

Any stood there little more extra confused then walked out.

Geet. Closed her eyes, taking deep breath. Maan confusingly faced geet...
"what happen?"
Hi? Geet couldn't control her self to give maan a disappoint look. Her heart rate was sky high and here this man wondering what happen?- romance with open door, only one person won't be able to see them but other can na.
"chado..." geet irritatingly stood up and walked out.

Armaan stood in middle of the hall. Very impressed by how anny behaved with him. Although he had to admit she is very beautiful.
"I like your sister in law. She is so cool man.."
Geet only just stepped in. Armaan did not give her time to breath either before he started to express him self childishly.
"armaan- what-are- you-talking-about?"
"au anny..."
"whatever, isn't final is in months time, go..."
"gosh! You freq- I am going!" armaan complained and walked off.

Geet tool her chance to leave for her bedroom to, but the whole sharma family on the breakfast table caught geets attention. She gradually, walked up towards them. Servant were serving while avantika worriedly was talking to some other family member. Geet slowly enters the conversation. Curious to know what's happening. "it's everything alright mama?"
"ha beta, you don't worry. Where is maan? Au breakfast ready hy..."
Geet pelightly nodes and smiles, before looking back at kripa. She was lost, staring at nothing.

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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrtsss for d new thrd dear...
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great part dear... plzz continue soon...
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Congrats and super part waiting for te next one. Quick :)
And congrats
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congratz dear 👏 Edited by Rupanzal - 12 years ago
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congrats for the new thread dr,
lovely update as always,
hope kripa won't creat any probleme in maaneet life,
don't know why but can't trust her.
do continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the.updaye 😳
Fab 👏