CINDRELLLA STORY (rajat tokas mugdha chapekar)RTMC FF PT22 updating-73 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
nice one dear😊...but it was too short & full of suspense...

so there is a plan to save ananya which is related to veer😍...hmm...i hope he agrees to this... i am waiting for their first meeting...

veer loves piyu a lot...so sweet...dieing to know their story...

plz plz update soon...

Edited by ananyashera - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22

amazing part..

waiting to see wats gonna happen now..

im guessing they asking for veer to get married to anu..

continue soon..

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
thanx for quick update n pm
love this part
mr. rai will surely find way to save charu
its so nice of mr. gupta to help mr. rai as frnd
and what is their plan?
mrs. singh also agreed abt it
but not veer?
and wht role ajay going to play?
egar for story proceed
waiting for next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Nice character sketch and concept.
Loved the update.
thanx for PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
🤗lovly ud...
i loved it ...

veer ready to work as coolie shows dat he is very much commited,,,,,,,,,,,,,

waitin for their first meeting,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

ud soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
hi pranita...
thnx for another RT-MC FF🥳it makes our never-ending a bit easy...😊
so our cinderella ananya is gonna be rescued😃but how is this related to our prince charming  veer...🤔...wait is it about veer-anu marriage??😲
and veer finds it worse than working as coolie indeed😆he loves his daughter way too much😳...
pranita...one confusion here😕 if piyu is 5 and veer is 23 does that mean he fathered his daughter at the age of 18😕...it loosely reminds me of that nightmare called tere liye...
except this part i love this ff...😊
waiting for the next update...😊thnx 4 the pm dear...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: prahelika

hi pranita...

thnx for another RT-MC FF🥳it makes our never-ending a bit easy...😊
so our cinderella ananya is gonna be rescued😃but how is this related to our prince charming  veer...🤔...wait is it about veer-anu marriage??😲
and veer finds it worse than working as coolie indeed😆he loves his daughter way too much😳...
pranita...one confusion here😕 if piyu is 5 and veer is 23 does that mean he fathered his daughter at the age of 18😕...it loosely reminds me of that nightmare called tere liye...
except this part i love this ff...😊
waiting for the next update...😊thnx 4 the pm dear...



guys wait n watch.
n thanks 4 the comments it really means a lot 2 me
Edited by pranita1202 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Nice start pranita...Lovely part👍🏼...Keep writing
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
nice part dear...
plz continue soon...
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30

a small gift for u from my side..

if u like...can use it as ur FF banner...