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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: manasie

So here's the update as i had promised... I hope its long enough... Enjoy... Joker.. Nish.. Ishu.. Thnks for the spam...

PART 13:

sharon rushed to the parking but to her dismay she found herself the only one in the parking lot... her face fell...

sh to herself: aakhir yeh insaan hai koun aur chahta kya kya hai... ???

suddenly she notices a note stuck on the window pane of her car...


It read:

milna toh muje bhi hai tumse... na ab sataunga na ab tarsaunga... me vahi tumhara intezaar kar eaha hoon jaha royi ho tum apna dil kholke...

aana zaroor me tumhara intezaar karunga.. meri poori zidagi...

sh: ABANDONED CORRIDOR WALI STAIRCASE!!!! lekin koi muje vaha kyu bulayega... aarrrgghh me kahi nai jaa rahi...

saying this she walked back into the college but could not stop herself from going towards the abandoned corridor...

she opened the door in anger... it was dark over there she could not see anything accept that someone was standing there leaning his back against the wall...

sh: kaun...? kaun hai vaha pe...

as it was dark she missed a step a.step and was about to fall... but suddenly she felt two strong arms holding her stomach that tightly... that hand leaves me ill be gone forever... he pulled me up... n lighted a lighter... i could see his face soo clearly... his innocent eyes... look-look hawa-hawa ... *pehla nasha bg* for the longest moment we both just stared into each others eyes... suddenly both came out of the trance...

sh: tum yaha...?? vo sab tumne...??

sw: haaan vo sab mene kia tha...

sharon's happiness knew no boundaries... but she could not umderstand... why was she feeling this.way...

sh: tumne ye sab mere li...

sw: nice idea na?? we can nil to try that on simmi na... usse pehle i wanted to try the plan out so i sent them to u...

sh: ooohhh to yeh san sim ke liye...

sw: haa. kyu kisi aur ke liye karna tha...

while saying this... he went closer to her ears... n all this had a big grin on his face..

sh: nai aur kisi ke kyu... nice idea...anyways simmi is gonna love it...

swayam had already noticed her smile vanish... n her face fall...

sw: ab jab tumne mere clues crack karne ki itni mehnat kar hi li hai... toh..

she removes a orchid from behind his shirt *just like the hariprasad wala scene* and along with that a diary milk... big one...suddenly her face lit up... she never understood the reason behind her sudden change in reaction...

sh: thank you...

she said looking down... swayam just kept looking at her n kept smiling... and she left from there...

suddenly swayam's phone rang...

sw: hello haan bol kaam ho gaya..?

ni: haan yaar tera idea kamal tha.. finally she is happy now thanks alot...

sw: tu mera dost hai yaar... anytime nil... chal thik hum baad me baat karte hai... bye.. enjpy ur date...

ni: thnks yaar chal byee... bad me milta hu..

and he disconnects the phone...


In the girl's locker room:

si: rinni.. rinni... rinni... m so happy finally nil asked me out for our first date and that too in such a romantic way...

just then sharon entered the locker room...

she saw kria neha and vishakha talking about something in one corner and rinni and simmi near simmi's locker... he gave a quick to the weaklings team and walked towards simmi and rinni...

sh: simmi my dear you look so happy what happened??

ri: nil just asked out simmi for their date in such a romantic way...

sh: ya i know i know...

si: shar how do u know that nil slipped in Note in my locker along with a pretty dress...??

sh: *confused* seriously he did that but swayam ne toh kuch aur plan... she mumbled...

si: shaking sharon.. sharon.. sharon kaha kho gayi...

sh: kuch nai...

On the way back home dono alag alag jaa rahe the...

sh to herself: swayam ne toh muje kuch aur pla. hi bataya tha aur ab yeh... toh vo sab kiske liye tha... hoga uski kisi gf ke... why do i even care...

sw to himself: vo sab sirf tumhare liye tha sharon... me tumse sirf tumse pyaar karta hu... u rule my heart... kash me yeh tumhe bata pata but its not the rite time yet...

suddenly swayams phone rang...

sw: hello...??

ni: hello ke bacche tu kaha hai be...

sw: me... me toh bas abhi ghar pocha... kyu???

ni: tu abhi issi waqt four seasons aa...

sw: lekin hua kya??? aaj toh teri simmi ke saath date hai na...

ni: dekh tu tp band kar... aur jaldi hai... mere paseene chuth rahe hai...

sw: hahahaha...

ni: kameene yaha meri lagi hui hai aur tu hase jaa raha hai...

sw: aacha aacha me half an hour me aata hu...

meanwhile...

simmi calls up sharon...

si: hello shar can u please cum to four seasons now...

sh: yaa sure sim lekin hua kya aaj tumhari date hai na...

si: shar m damn nervous n scared please cum fast..

sh: ok ill be der in half an hour k...

si: ok bye come soon...

and disconnects the phone...




So this is it... Kindly hit the like button and leave ur valuable comments... Next update only on page no.67...


wow awesome yr
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Posted: 12 years ago
hayee, lou it, 4 seasons, kab aayega next update ?!?!?!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Tat was osm mannu...n swayam is so chalu...the effect he has on her...luved them...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Reli sweet update 😊 Flowers and the orchirds AWWW ! 😳 I so hope NiMmi ke wajah se these two lovelies confess πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww Dats so sweet of Swayam. lol nil nd simmi paseene chooth rahay hainπŸ˜†
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
manu plz mere liye kardena...*puppy dog face*
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Posted: 12 years ago
dekh shaanu aise senti na maar... page 67 pe update mil jayega...
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Posted: 12 years ago
manu tu itna zidd kyu karti hai???ek update toh dedo na...plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: manasie

dekh shaanu aise senti na maar... page 67 pe update mil jayega...

please please mere liye...*baby face*
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Posted: 12 years ago

so here's the next part hope u all like it... and i m updating it before page 67 only for shaanu next time nai karungi...

PART 14:



sharon and swayam rushed to four seasons... *note they dont know they are gonna meet there by any chance*

ladies washroom:

si: sharon m hell scared kahi kuch gadbad ho gayi toh...

sh: chill .. sim koi gadbad nahi hogi...

si: agar koi gadbad hui aur nil ne muje dump kar diya toh..

sh: this is it simmi.. stop thinking non sense... nil loves u... n trust me ill be here the whole time... without nil even noticing me...

simmi hugs sharon and leaves...

meanwhile NiYam:

ni: abe yaar meri phat rahi kahi kuch locha ho gaya toh...

sw: nil.. koi locha nai hoga... saari arrangements mene jo ki hai...

ni: toh phir pakka kuch toh locha 100% hoga...

sw: kya.. kya bola tu...

ni: kuch nai...* almost sweating*

sw: aare kuch nai hoga trust me... aacha thik me yahi rahunga... till ur date is over... without simmi even noticing me...

ni: pakka na...


sw: haa baba ab tu jaa vo tera wait karri hogi... n girls dun like to wait...

nil goes to simmi and tries to behave like a perfect gentleman... swayam was sitting in the longue section from where garden table was visible where NimMi were there... and sharon was sitting in the restaurant section from where garden section and longue section both were visible...

swayam was sitting alone when a girl*hot* wearing a black halter dress which was just above her knees comes with a glass of alcohol in her hand...

gi: can i sit here???

sw: ya sure ... saying this again shifts his gaze towards NimMi...

The girl was literally trying to trying to stick to him...

gi: hi i m aishani... n u??

sw: swayam... he was clearly not interested in her...

she was already trying to pounce on him... while swayam was trying his best to make her stay awY from him...

Meanwhile:

sh: inn dono ki date toh aachi chal rahi hai i think i should leave now...

she gets up and was all ready to leaving when suddenly she saw swayam in the longue section all close with a hot chick...

sh to herself: *sharon was fuming with anger... even she did not know why* she went towards the bar counter...

sh: a tequilla shot please...

bt: sure mam...

after some time...

she was already down with 6 shots... when suddenly a random guy came upto her and asked..

guy: can i buy u a drink???

before sharon could say anything... they heard a voice from behind...

" no mann.. she is with me"

they both turned around to find swayam there...

the guy leaves...

sh: tum, tum yaha kya kar rahe ho...? tum jao na apni hot girl friend ke saath jiske saath tum longue area me chipak ke baithe the...

a smile crept on swayam's face...

sw to himself: chahe tum kuch bhi kaho sharon tumhe fark to padta hai...

sw to bt: how many??

bt: six tequilla shots sir...

sw: what the hell mann...

sharon was murmuring something to herself...

swayam placed his hand on her shoulder n shook her...

sw: sharon, sharon challo yaha se...

sh: me tumhare saath kahin bhi nai aane wali... tum jao apni hot gf ke paas...

sw: sharon for the last time... vo meri gf nai hai... me usse janta tak nahi...

sh: haaawww jaane bina hi... tum uske saath...

sw: shaaaron..

he took her hand n placed it on his shoulder she was stumbling while walking... he took her to his car.. opened the door n placed her on the seat.. n then went back to the drivers seat... n started driving...

sharon was half a sleep... she was still murmuring something to herself... they reach sharon's house...

*imagine sharon talking in full drunk mode*

sw: sharon... sharon.. tumhare gharke keys kaha hai???

sh: ghar ki keys hai.. toh ghar ke paas hi hogi na...

sw: he checks her clutch but unable to find the keys... ab kya karu me tumhe apne ghar bhi nai leke jaa sakta...

sh: kyu tumhara ghar haunted hai kya???

sw: nai mere ghar pe koi nai hai...

sh: haaawww yeh toh bahot badi problem hai... tum muje khaa toh nai jaoge na...

swayam could do nothing but admire her beauty and innocence...

sw: promise i wont eat u...

sh: toh phir chalo...

They reach swayam house... he opens the door and lets sharon in... he takes her to his room...

sw: tum yahi ruko me tumhare liye shikha ke clothes lata hu..

sharon sits on the bed like a small kid waiting for her present...

after 5 mins swayam came back with a pair of night clothes in his hand...

sw: vo yahi mila muje... baaki saare clothes shikha apne saath *he turns to face sharon to see her sleep peacefully*


Hehehe dun worry sharon ko itni jaldi nai sulaongi... lekin aage kya hoga iske liye u have to wait for the next update...





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