Extended Scene Humsafar: Ashar's Apology - Page 2

^ LOOOL ikr i feel like an idiot for writing a cheesy scene i had to edit it 10 million times lol...but i guess the scene wud be incomplete w/o the cheesiness ahaha

awww i love it...😍...reading it was a treat😳...keep such beautiful scenes coming😊

Originally posted by: Sana.B

Finally, i got time to read it, and Wow Iqra, Such a magnificent writer you are. You should consider doing something in literature, your writing style is really intriguing. The apology was so well written.. Thank-you for writing this.. I love love love it, and i wish it was dramatized.. ❤️ Why don't you go into script writing, maybe we can get better stories? 😛

P.S, you did not go cheesy at all!

Originally posted by: -Grace-

omg sana! your comment made my horrible day!😳🤗

thank youu so much!!!😆

i wud love to go into script writing but then not taking sciences wud feel like something is missing big time..LOL..oh well lets see maybe my side [?] profession lol😆

Thanks again sana!

like uni tension wasnt enuf ...

reserveddd.

Originally posted by: Reenoo.

reserveddd.

editted.

Cheesy?! :O

u kidding me? this is PERFECT! 😳

OMG I LOVEEE IT! <3

ufff i was waiting for a hug though ;) :P LOL cz the drama tarpaas us so much, no hugs in the serial too :| i mean not the eew wale. the cute, intense, romantic, but graceful and pure hug 😍

this scene was amazing, im waiying for moree! [:p]

Finalllyyy😆

Wowww! This was great!😃 Keep writing more!

Wow I just love it

I know its too late but Swear I read that now .. 😛 Ohh God that was too good I wish in that show we had the same scene .. But unfortunately we had not .. But you're a very fine writer 👏👏 Keep it up ... 😃 Awesome work 👏