Blue lotus ARHI FF Real climax one more part

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Posted: 12 years ago

Blue lotus Part 1

 I hated the story of the malayalam movie 'Neelathamara'.They spoiled a love story.I don't want the hero is be a cheater or the separation of lovers.So i decided to write 'Neelathamara' in my own away.Though it's inspired by "Neelathamara' the story is completely different from the movie.The scenes are not similar at all.Neelathamara{Blue lotus}will be the only common factor.




The middle aged lady Jayashree opened the door.
She saw a thin fair cute innocent girl standing over there.
She touched her feet.
Jayashree blessed her automatically.
"Good bless you".
Jayashree thought, "Now a days it is difficult to find girls who respect elders".
"I am Khushi..heard that you need a home nurse".
Jayashree was surprised.
J:You are the my home nurse sent by Savitri?
Khushi smiles.
K:Yes Jayshreeji.
J:Don't call me Jayshreeji.Call me nani.I prefer to be called as nani.That's how my grand son Arnav calls me.And you are so young.Almost the same age of Arnav.
Khushi smiles:Yes.
J:How do you know Savitri?
K:I used to work there.
J:Ya...now i remember Savitri saying that she will send a girl who was working there before.Your marriage is fixed.Right?
Khushi's face became dull.
K:Yes.
J:What is he?
K:His name is Akash.He is an auto driver.
Suddenly Jayashree made a sound:Ah!
K:What happened nani?
J:My leg is paining.
K:Must be sprain.Sit down.
Khushi made her sit on the sofa.
She took the first aid box and applied oinment to her leg.
Jayashree watched it with a smile.

Khushi was watering the plants in the garden.Suddenly she heard someone calling her.
"Shoo..shooo...hey girl.."
She looked around.That was a lady from the neighbouring house.
She waved her hand with a smile.Khushi smiled slightly.
She went towards the wall.Anjali came towards the wall.
"Hi..are you the new home nurse of Nani?"
K:Yes.
"What is your name?"
She asked her.
K:My name is Khushi.
"I am Anjali.I stay in this house.Good thing that you came here.I was getting bored.I got a company".
Khushi smiled.
K:Are you alone here?
A:Dad is also here.But he is always busy.When my sister and her husband come i get engaged.But once in a while only they visit us.By the way how is this house?
K:Nani is very sweet.She considers me as her grand daughter.Her grand son Arnav is on study tour.Since he is not here she is lonely.So she talks to me a lot.He narrated Ramayan to me.
Anjali smiled.

After some days...
Jayashree seemed upset.
K:Why do you look upset nani?
J:Arnav is coming today.Our maid Radhika has not come here.She is very lazy.How can i prepare his favourite dishes for lunch?I'm old and tired.
K:Don't worry about that.I will prepare lunch.
Jayashree was relieved.

Noon time...
Khushi was arranging her clothes in the cupboard.Due to wind blow one of her shawls flew away.
Arnav gets inside the house.The shawl fell on his face.He got irritated.
A:How come salwar kameez's shawl here?
He threw the shawl.
The shawl flew and fell on Khushi.
Suddenly Khushi's eyes struck Arnav.
K:My God!I think that is Nani's grand son Arnavji.How will i go in front of him?I'm so tense.

Arnav saw her.He could not believe his eyes.
He thought:A young girl in this house?

Slowly she removed her shawl from her face.He saw her face clearly.
He was speechless.That much her beautiful cute face attracted him.
He could not take his eyes off her.

Khushi felt awkward and tense seeing him staring at her.She could not understand why he was staring at her.

She held the shawl in her hand.She bent her eyes as she did not have the courage to look at his face.
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hey Jasmine😃😃
woww👏.. this sounds really interesting to me!!😳
first of all😉.. khushi being a home nurse is just so different and unique😃
and then she is engaged to Akash😲.. whoa😲... what a twist hunnie!!👏
anjali has a sister n jiju😲 ... omg😃... this sounds really great to me as she wont be married to that snake lol..🤢😆
n i loved the last part sweetie..😳😳
thanks sooo much for the pm n pleaseee continue soon!!😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome start!! i like it!!
its different and sounds extremely interesting!! loved the part when arnav and khushi meet... it was soo cute!! wonder how arnav and khushi are gonna get close... since khushi is engaged to a guy named akash... 
continue soon!! and thanks a ton for the pm!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Really good FF. Totally different from the others and please update soon. PM me when you update
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Posted: 12 years ago
sounds intereting..goood start..looking forward to...
Posted: 12 years ago
ur ff's are all hatke
it is as always very cute
i m speechless bt as u want a big lot of comments frm me i will do as u say---
1. i like ur dupatta scene or shawl watever
2.arnav is falling foe khushi at d 1st sight..oho..sound exciting
3. khushi as a home nurse ..love ur idea
4.khushi is engaged...brings a twist to ur ff
5.i think i dont like is khushi is poor...i mean she is engaged to a man who is a auto driver..hope i m right...anywayz its a ff..ur thoughts ...but atleast i waned a better profession...
overall g8 idea best n fine work of urs~~~~~~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
do update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello. .jasmine.i'v seen dat movie neelathamara.n i dnt like dat movie to some extnt for d same reason.ur ff is entirely difrnt frm d movie.go on.n add me to ur pm list.
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Posted: 12 years ago
gr8 update pm me plz wen will u update next part of it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hai nice start.pls continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Haye haye Jassi, such a cute scene 😛
Loved it
Thanks for the Pm Hon 😉