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Posted: 12 years ago
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The Morning is always very beautiful after that beautiful Night if you have some one with you forever... ''..


The Sun had come out in a bright and in a sunny manner'  The morning was never ever as beautiful as it was today for Maan and Geet after the beautiful night '..

 

Maan and Geet both were sleeping in each other arms''' Geet was cuddling in Maan's arm and Maan had holded Geet from her waist tightly''

 

Maan was the first one to wake up and saw his beautiful wife sleeping in his arms'.. He had a smile on his face''.. He did not want to leave her''' Maan holded Geet more tightly''..  Geet was moving'. Maan realised that Geet was about to wake up so he immediately closed his eyes''

 

Geet opens and sees Maan holding her more tightly''.. Geet smiled looking at Maan''

 

Geet (self thought): Maan abhi tak so rahe hai'' Unke uthne se pehle nashta bana deti hu'..

 

she tries to move but Maan had holded her so tightly that it was impossible to move'' She slowly tries to take Maan's hand from her waist'.. But Maan holds her more tightly'..

 

Earlier Geet did not realised it but later she realised that Maan was also awake but had kept his eyes close''

 

Geet pinches Maan hand''

 

Maan screams''..

 

Maan: Geet what are you doing????

 

Geet: Oh I was right you were doing natak of sleeping''.. Come on move your hand'.

 

Geet was about to move and tries to take her clothes which were lying beside'''..


Maan pulls her more near and holds her more tightly'..





Maan: Geet how are you feeling???

 

Geet: Maan what???

 

Maan hands were moving on Geet hair'..: ans me'.

 

Geet puts her hand on his neck: Maan kya iradha hai'...

 

Maan: Not Bad'' now that you are asking what my demand is (and he moves his lips towards hers)

 

Geet (shy): Maan some one will come'' let me go'..

 

Maan: Geet don't try to fool me I know no one is there at home understood'.. Now come on wish me Good Morning''

 

Geet (smiles): Good Morning Maan

 

Maan: Geet I am not going to leave you till you give me what I want'..

 

Maan phones rings''..

 

Geet: Maan your phone'..

 

Maan: Let it ring''

 

Geet: Must be someone who may need to talk to you''

 

Maan sees the phone and it was Adi who had called''

 

Adi: Good Morning Maan Sir''

 

Maan: Yes Adi'.

 

Maan gets busy with talking to Adi and seeing this Geet covers herself with the towel and runs away in the bathroom''..

 

Maan: Geet you have cheated''..

 

Geet from bathroom: have not''..

 

Maan wears his clothes and is sitting on the bed'''.

 

Geet comes out of bathroom with wet hair and sees Maan sitting on the bed''.. Maan was staring at Geet'.. Geet was looking stunning''..

 

Geet: Maan aap ready ho jaye'. I will make breakfast for you''

 

Maan gets up and goes near Geet: Geet morning has made you more and more beautiful after yesterday night'''

 

Maan moves ahead Geet moves backwards'' Finally Geet gets stuck with the wall''.. and Geet tries to move but Maan block her way''

 

Geet: Maan whats wrong with you'''

 

Maan: Geet what I have done'..

 

Geet: Let me go''..

 

Maan: Go who is stopping you''..

 

Geet: If you keep on staring me like this and block my way how will I go''

 

Maan: But my morning is not started yet'' I have not receive what I want''

 

Geet and Maan very much close to each other'. There lips were almost about to touch'' and someone bangs the door''





Nakul: Geet didi Dadima has come'. She is searching for you''..

 

Geet: Maan chodiye Dadima agaye hai and push Maan and runs and opens the door'.. and tells Nakul tum chalo mai ati hu

 

Maan: Dadima ko bhi abhi ana tha''

 

Maan gets ready and comes down'' and ask Dadima about her trip'..

 

Maan eyes were searching Geet'.. Maan decides to tease Geet more as Maan was well aware that in front of Dadima Geet wont able to say anything''

 

On the breakfast table'.. Maan legs were moving on Geet'. Geet was feeling his sense and becoming more restless'.. which could be seen on Geet face and with the eyes Geet was telling Maan not to do this'' She couldn't say anything as Dadima was sitting with them''..

 

Seeing Geet restless Maan was enjoying more'''

 

Dadima: Maan beta you don't have to go to office today'..

 

Maan: No Dadima I have taken off today''.. Thought of taking rest at home'''

 

Geet was shocked to hear that''. As he had not said anything to her'..

 

Dadima: Maan good you will be able to spend time with Geet also''..

 

After breakfast''  Dadima, Geet were talking about her trip and everything''..

 

Maan was sitting in such a manner that only Geet could see him and was pretending to read paper'''  

 

Whenever Geet would see Maan'.. Maan would make all sort of signs'.. Maan would only touch his lips, he would move his hand on neck,

 

Geet was going restless'..  Geet was not able to concentrate on what Dadima was saying'. Seeing restless Dadima finally asked

 

Dadima: Geet Beta tumhari tabiyaat to theek hai na

 

Geet: Ji Ji Ji Dadima...

 

Dadima: I am seeing since morning'' you are sounding restless'' you did not even had your breakfast properly

 

Maan to tease Geet more: Geet Ha kya hua'.

 

Geet gives an angry look to Maan and Maan smiles

 

Maan again gets a call and Maan moves''

 

Dadima: Geet why don't you rest for sometime'' I will also go and rest

 

Geet: Yes Dadima

 

After Dadima leaves

 

Geet: Maan now I am not going to leave you, you wait'''.

 

Geet goes and search Maan and Maan was in their room

 

Geet: Maan Maan

 

Maan: Ha Geet

 

Geet: Maan yeh kya kar rahe the aap''

 

Maan: Geet abhi tak maine kuch kiya hi nahi morning se'..

 

Geet: Maan you are too much'''.

 

Maan: Kal ki raat itni hasin thi'' to subha bhi to honi chaiye na''

 

Maan pulls Geet more nearer to him'..

 

Geet: Maan door is open'..

 

Maan: Ohhh to you have problem with door being open'. I will close it '''

 

Geet gets shy'..

 

Maan looks at Geet red face: Sharma ke meri mishty aur bhi khubsoorat dikhti hai''

 

Geet: Maan Dadima will come''..

 

Maan: Geet abhi to mai tumhe jane deta hu but on one condition''..

 

Geet: Now what is your condition'..

 

Maan: you will have to pay double penalty'..

 

Geet: Double Penalty?????

 

Maan: Ya first penalty is that you never wished me in the morning and just because you never wished me in the morning you have to pay that at night with double''..πŸ˜‰

 

Geet: Maan I did not get you ''

 

Maan: Acha you want  me to show you the trial version of it or you want to see the whole film now...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

 

Geet gets shy and led her head on the Maan's chest'''.. and says Maan you make my all nights and mornings beautiful''..





Both goes in the world of love'''.




Hi Guys here is one more OS... I hope you all like it... Am not a very Good writer but have tried to write an OS on Maaneet...


Please do press like and do comments... Your comments means a lot to me... It really inspires me to write more...


Will be waiting for response...



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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Ana...


Simply Awesome

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     Wah Wah Wah zabardast Likha hai .

                                  



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Posted: 12 years ago
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i really liked it...it was excatly how maan and geets dialogues n reactions wud have been😍...nice attempt..if u plan to continue...do pm me
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 4 pm me..😊.
 
 
 
ur updates r ..πŸ˜³πŸ‘πŸ‘
 
 
 
 
 
me just ...πŸ˜ƒ
 
 
 
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 NoTe: my net is soo slow...me can't able to post big comment..sorrys..dears 4 this time...
 
P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...me only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as me saw many of my comments r copied me'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...😑

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it totally!!!!

awesome ana
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Excellent...
maaneet's  conversation is really awesome😳...loved it
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Awesome
U are a fantastic writer dear
Just loved the cute naughtyness between maan and geet
Thanks for the pm
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Loved it...especially Maan he is so naughty...
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