SS: Dear Diary... Part 14 Upd 11/30 Pg 66 - Page 52

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
SUPERB DEAR, WANT AN EPILOGUE SOON.
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Posted: 12 years ago
i dn't kn w hw many of us hs strtd fantasy of mid9gt snacks 😉.. those bourbon biscuits... so romantic
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Posted: 12 years ago
Perfect ending ...u completed it in your own way...agree it does not need an epilogue but need another story to read though...When are u penning more Hasini?
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Posted: 12 years ago
The ending reminded me of one my favourite songs' Take My Breath Away.'
I don't think you seriously need any compliments on your written skills, but I will agree I loved the sensuality.
Thoroughly enjoyed reading this fiction I am so looking forward to reading more of your work, as a fan I bow down. 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

nicely written

he was so much in character when he said "finally lord" as if saying in front of a judge
and she continues with her diary
Edited by t_areeb - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Helllooos...

When are you starting the new one? Missing your stories 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
No, I still cannot find the right words to say anything at all. But some of the initial discussions I had read , stuck in my mind, and so I'll write about Maans character here.

I loved it. Absolutely.

For what started as an arrogant assumption on his part, and indeed quite a shocking and a practical decision he took when he walked out of the marriage with Rajji right at the mandap, gave quite much away of his inherent sensitivity and depth of the emotions he carries.

He was very so quickly stung by her reserve and coldness, even though he could well imagine the reason for it. and the restless energy within him that demanded her confessions , wanting irrefutable proofs that the small insights she gave into her self, the small intimate rituals that they shared were not quite so incidental in nature. A testament to just how affected he really was, and how impatiently he wanted it all reciprocated.

Maan, is synonymous for a very passionate character, arrogant, ruthless and actually also a bit obsessive. In most ff's , these aspects are brought to fore so deliberately that they almost feel unnatural.

But here I just loved it. It all flowed well with him being a lawyer too no less.
And then there's the argument, that why cannot men throw tantrums and demand women come out with their feelings as unambiguously as is demanded of them.

its actually in the show, when Maan persists on having Geet confess her feelings first that I was drawn to this concept and found it very romantic and refreshing. ;)

Oh yes, I loved this Maan very much. and this ff. I may have read him very wrong too, but it did it for me. and I feel compelled to say again and again- you write brilliantly.

((I have missed many other points, but am in a hurry to write 😆 and can only mention those I remember without having to refer the chapters))
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry folks...I'm still half way through responding to everyone's comments. I'm down with a bad case of food allergy for the last few days...hands and feet are gone for a toss from hives.

Will take some time before I get back to writing or IF...bear with me.

Hasini
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Posted: 12 years ago
If you are interested...

Its my way of bidding adieu to the show.

OS: Lights, Camera, Action.
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