New FF (Maneet) Mere Humsafar thd4 Upd pt47 pg135

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Posted: 12 years ago

 
 
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This story revolves around our lovely manneet. It is actually a journey which begins with 2 strangers (maan n geet) n hw with time their relationship progresses. Initially they think of each other as their topmost enemy and the only feeling that they have for each other is hatred.
 
Later on circumstances force them to get married... bt it a contract marriage.
in this particular time slowly they start understanding each other, they start respecting each other n finally they bcm frnds
 
Now only time will decide whether their friendship will blossom into love and whether destiny will make them understand the beauty of marriage and whether they will confess their love for each other n will remain together always or would get separated due to their false ego.
 

SUMMARY

 
The story begins with two different personalities...Maan Singh Khurana and Geet Handa.  Maan does not believe in the institution of marriage coz his parent's relationship did not work and it ended on a very bitter note. Annie is waiting for her best friend to arrive and she also shares her feelings with Dadi that Geet would be the perfect match for Maan.
 
Meanwhile Geet arrives her cell phone is dead she is searching for a telephone booth to contact Annie
 
Maan's car bumps into Geet and her dress gets spoiled. Maan comes out of his car Geet thinks that may be this person will apologize but instead Maan starts insulting her and he offers her a check of Rs 10,000/- to get some decent clothes
 
Geet tears the check into pieces and places a tight slap on his face and on top of that she gives him a long speech and goes away. This was the biggest insult of Maan till date
 
He promises himself that he will find out Geet and will make her life a living hell
 
meanwhile Geet reaches KM she narrates the entire incident. Dadi tells Geet that she should have avoided this but Geet tells Dadi that whatever the case she will never support any wrong things
 
Dadi is extremely impressed with her. Dev returns back from a buisness trip and he offers geet a job in KC
 
Dadi n Dev convince Maan that Geet would be a perfect employee in KC. Maan agrees to keep Geet as his secretary without meeting her
 
The very same evening Maneet meet once again but their second meeting takes place in darkness. Geet is scared and falls in Maan's arms both of them are extremely comfortable with each other n this was the first time that Maan was caring for a stranger he promises her that he will stand there till the lights come back.
 
They share a Maahi moment
 
But this does not last for too long as soon as the lights come back both of them start exploding
 
Geet decides that she won't b working with Maan she takes Annie to her room. Maan is evil he understands her intentions and challenges geet that she is not brave enough to accept his enmity and if she has the courage then she should sign a contract with KC which has the clause that no matter what happens she won't b able to leave KC for 2 years
 
Geet signs the contract maan promises her that from now onwards her life will change and everyday she would b welcomed by a new hurdle ...geet also responds back by telling him k I will take ur attitude away u will have to change
 
Annie feels that Maan is clearly impressed with geet otherwise he would never meet her all alone she is happy n is discussing this with Dev Dadi also arrives and Annie is enthusiastically sharing her happiness but Dadi is lost in her own thoughts
 
Meanwhile Maan arrives and makes it clear that geet cannot stay in KM and if she stays here then she can't work in KC
 
Annie is shocked to hear this bt Dadi maintains her cool she questions maan that is this ur only condition maan gives an affirmative response. Dadi tells maan okay I will agree to ur condition bt u too have to respect my desicion
 
Geet informs Dadi that she is leaving KM and would take a house on rent. Dadi tells geet to shift to the outhouse and pay rent
 
Geet agrees
 
Dadi informs Dev n Annie that geet's Mr. Richie Rich is none other than Maan. They decide to change their enmity into love. they name their mission as Mission Maneet
 
Maan gets to know that Geet would b staying in the outhouse he is extremely angry bt Dadi is far too smart n intelligent n informs maan that she won't change her decision
 
Maan goes and starts arguing with Geet. Geet gets irritated and she hits maan with the broomstick and maan runs away from there
 
Annie n Dev witness this scene
 
Maan decides to teach a lesson to Geet once she comes to the office
 
he orders the liftman to tell everyone that the lift is out of order. He also places a broken stool in geet's cabin
 
Dev n Geet reach KC
 
Maan tells geet to get a file. Geet realizes that the file is placed inthe topmost shelf she takes the aid of the stool but ends up badly hurt
 
Dadi visits the office and is extremely angry...she orders maan to take geet to the hospital. Maan gets trapped in his own
 
Maan had no option but to lift her downstairs
 
Initially Maan tells the driver to drop geet in any ofthe nearby Hospitals but then finally he takes her back to KM and calls Tej his family doctor to examine Geet
 
Maan was abt to leave as he feels that now his job is done n he should no longer be bothering abt geet but something forces him to stop he takes full care of geet n also starts admiring her
 
Annie n Dadi cm back n Maan once again behaves as if he doesn't care for geet
 
Maan goes to the office but he is unable to concentrate on his work he is constantly thinking abt geet. In the pretext of collecting a file he once again comes back to KM but someone or the other kept irritating him n he is unsuccessful
 
Dev n Dadi find out the reason behind maan's behaviour n they r really very happy
 
Maan tries different ways to meet geet n tehn he realizes that her room is fully dark. He slowly enters her room and moves the curtain of the window the light of the moon was directly coming in her room
 
Geet was looking like a sleeping angel. Maan was completly lost...Maahi moment
 
But then once again his ego comes into picture n he suppresses his feelings n decides to trouble geet as he was abt to go an object falls down n geet wakes up
 
Accidently geet encounters maan. Maan places his hand on her mouth geet kicks him in between his legs and also bites him and starts shouting for help
Maan runs away from the window
 
Maan is praticising Tai chi to remove his frustration. Geet wanted to thank him as she feels that maan was the one who helped her when she was injured
 
We get a Kehna hi kya sequence and lots of maahi moments...both of them r currently in a different world now
 
They r about to kiss
 
But this doesn't happen infact maan accusses geet and shouts at her but geet also is strong enough and gives him a good reply
 
later on both realize that they were wrong
 
Geet starts working on a project which is very important for maan The client Arjun is impressed with geet but his intentions r not good maan realizes this and tries to protect geet from arjun
 
Maan starts developing feelings for Geet. We saw a song sequence
Rabba main toh mar gaya oye from the movie Mausam and we also got a Kurbaan hua sequence
 
Now the problem is that Geet is all alone in the storeroom and Maan, Dev and Adi are in some meeting and Arjun has a great chance to fulfill his evil intentions...
 
geet is in danger but somehow she manages to escape from Arjun and by that time Maan too comes back. But Arjun tries to embarras geet and calls her characterless. He tells Maan that their deal should not be affected due to geet. But Maan teaches a lesson to Arjun he hits him black and blue and it would have been his last day if geet had not stopped maan.
 
Arjun gets bail but this incident brings maan n geet more close and maan becomes possesive about geet and geet too starts respecting him.
 
In between we get many Maahi moments and many song sequences as well like Is pal main hoon (rain seq), Hum tum ek kamre mein bannd ho and Dil Ibadat kar raha hai (rain seq)
 
Maan wants to grab a very important deal and geet is working with him on this project but arjun is back and someone from KC is helping him so that he can b successful in separating Maneet by breaking maan's trust on geet. Geet too feels that something bad is going to happen she shares her feelings with maan. Maan tries to convince geet that this is just her imagination no one can separate them
 
Geet meets Arjun and Arjun warns her that he might do something with Maan. Geet is unaware that this meeting with Arjun is not a mere coincidence but a well planned strategy.
 
WILL ARJUN SUCCEED IN HIS PLAN?
WILL GEET TELL MAAN ABOUT ARJUN?
WILL MANEET SEPARATE?
 
OR WILL MANEET OVERCOME EVERY OBSTACLE AND HURDLE SO THAT THEY CAN FINALLY CALL EACH OTHER
 
MERE HUMSAFAR
 
Hope that I continue to get your love and support
Love- Piya
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Posted: 12 years ago

INDEX

 
Link to FF: Mere Humsafar Thread 1
 
Link to FF: Mere humsafar Thread 2
 
Link to FF: Mere Humsafar Thread 3
 
 
 
Link to my FF: Dil mil gaye Thread one  
 
 
Link to my FF: Dil mil gaye Thread two
 
 
 
 
Edited by piya- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Heya Piya,

'Mere Humsafar' has been a magical journey so far... really perfect...enchanting and divine world of Maaneet has been explored at each Update by you! The way the equation between Maan and Geet has changed gradually with no unrealistic drastic change is really commendable... I still remember the day this FF was started with the first Update being hilarious... Geet meeting BHK... and then how they faced each other at KM... Annie introducing Geet to Khuranas as her best friend who she aspires to be her bhabhi was totally natural feeling described...

Maaneet second mulakat... when the lights went off was so Mahiilicious!!! Maan and Geet hatred never knew would change into a feeling where they couldn't live a single day without seeing one another... Maaneet continuous fights were a treat to watch... and then the story slowly drifted... and so many Maaneet moments one by one...!!
and then we get a twist... Arjun is upto some evil dirty trick and he gets Geet alone once to execute his plans... (I read that Update biting my nails... wondering what was in store for the readers) Arjun tearing Geet's clothes and then *phew* Maan...!!! I knew he'd be there for Geet...

Arjun tried to tell Maan that Geet did that... pur Maan ko to apni Geet pe poora vishwas hai...ho bhi kyun na!! aakhir wo bhi to MSK hai!! what a lovely treat to watch... and then Maan Geet ko kabhi akele nahi chhodta...! I love it... phir song sequences to Piya ke ff ki jaan hai...!!! Hum tum ek kamre mein bandh ho ya Dil Ibaadat( rain sequence was dreamy) Arjun is still not done up...office ke kisi aadmi se milkar he's planning something...us din Geet is feeling ki kuch galat hone waala hai... and indeed she meet's Arjun... she has a small convo with him... and then the thappad... hope aise kai thappad khane pade Arjun ko... but Arjun leaves threatening Geet... Geet's worried and is still in a mess whether to tell Maan or not...!


Maaneet fights...


gradual change in their equation when Maan starts admiring Geet
Maan starts enjoying life...

Mahillicious moments...
Maan saves Geet from Arjun...!


Maaneet rain sequence... Dil Ibaadat





all I wanna say is... thanks Piya...for making this FF a really beautiful journey of Maaneet!!! Here's a thanks from Maaneet  themselves


ab now...thoda celebration to banta hai boss... main first!!!!

4 threads... pur picture abhi baaki hai...!!





we still wanna enjoy Maaneet more more more!!!!

aakhir mein...main first hoon...yippee!!!! basically my first hona didn't matter in front of the celebration of the new thread...!!! and kabhi yeh ff ko end mat karna...!!! closest Maaneet ff to my heart and the only Maaneet FF I read right now apart from Dil Mill Gaye!!!

luv,
shivu!!!

Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res

abhi thoda edit kia baki baad mein karungi...



still res😉
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Edited by -knirwal- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
congrats for the new thread
update the next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
congrats for the new thread
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just let Maan have some hints of Arjun getting back at them... let him know tid-bits now then he will himself get the whole story... great going buddy...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Congrats Piya for the new thread. Sorry no pics or animations as I am using office laptop but my wishes are with you. Hope to see many more threads of many more FFs along wiht this one.

 

Update soon dear...

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Posted: 12 years ago
congrats !! !!!!!!!!! 4 d new thread ...

thnx 4  d pm ...

update soon ...