my new OS-Haafiz(final UD wid Epil) pg-6 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Cuty16

Hey jo,
this one was one of the most sweetest Os i had read here,
just loved each n every line.
mostly dat office scene from where arpi cum and den the way avi expresses his feelings.


@jes,
the epilogue was realy nice dear.
Thanx dear !!πŸ€—πŸ€—

and loved it when avi makes her remember about dat night when she had said " to finish it off".
I loved dat line also...😳😳

On the whole u both made the end mind blowing and mind blasting. All credits to Neha..😳




I think my epilogue didn't turn out dat bad as I thought it wud..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†


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Posted: 13 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Eowyn

Picture perfect ending😍...

The verses in your update was beautiful Jo...
But I have a few doubts, what is zarra, aftaab, hafiz?😳
Jes- you picturised the window scene very wellπŸ‘
I like Avi's last dialogue🀣



Thanx for liking it !!!!!!!! πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ


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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
updated post on page 7
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: prash_t

Jo and Jess..

This is for you both...



Jo...for writing this OS...It was extremely beautiful, awesome, wonderful and touching...😳


Nd Jess... for writing SR...(I want completed version of it) you left it half... I wont imagineπŸ˜› PM completed SRπŸ˜†

Outstanding OSπŸ‘ I just loooved it to the core yaar...❀️


U, Jess (as well), CIC, Nidha, also Mukta Di, Sunaha Ramona(Sry if I missed someone)...u guys are romance queens...!!!..


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Hey Mrs, Thakur thanx for liking it hehe
wow so encouraging yaar
Oye m not romantic yaar its you who is romance queen have you forgotten ur first OS
kya likha tha😳


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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
I edited my post in pg 1,3,6 πŸ˜›

@ GJ

you think i am romance queen 😲 😲 😲 i rather prefer to be Jhataka Queen πŸ˜†
Edited by yoga23priya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: yoga23priya

TJ πŸ€—PriyaaaπŸ€—


ME FIRST ME FIRST πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³

love you for dedicating this part to me 😳

after vista di n dreamy di you're my fav writer in GKD IF 😳
Hayyy Ram😲 no ways yaar how can you put my name with Vista di n Dreamy di,no yaar i have to learn alot to be someone's fav😳

hope my future Updates will be lovely like yours 😳

No words for writing i just loved it πŸ˜‰
hey you know naa u are one of ma favs and
your Updates are greater then mine so i shuld hope to compare myself someday with you guysπŸ˜‰



Prashu ke Pappu Prasad got slap from Arpi πŸ‘

loved this part very much n Avita's part of confessions were super duper fantastic 😳😳
Love yaa for such sweet appreciation😳😳


love you πŸ€—

* Epilogue *

My Jaanu Saku-Chan πŸ€—

wowieee i am proud of you n my family 😳

i always thought you are awesome writer after reading our story in Gangster of week thread πŸ˜‰

Our devil family has unique talent in everything πŸ˜‰

I Know that my saku is so innocent that she dnt know abt SR but it was lovely 😊


LOVE YOU πŸ€—

Your whole family is super talented, love yaa guysπŸ€—
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