FF !!*!!Band Bajj Gaya!!*!!Chapter 2 page 2

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Okay guys worked 3 days on this intro from story to characters (not all) are my creations there avatars are how there characters look and how they speak so i can make their trademark lines and i spend hours on finding pics that were close to characters so guys i worked very hard please press Like and do reply to give me encouragement and thing wrong or suggestions and feedback will be welcomed !!!😳



The story is about 4 friends Asif (played by Asif Raza Mir),Khalid (Khalid Anam),Behroz (Behroz Sabzwari) and Jawaid (Jawaid Sheikh) who studied together but as their studies ended they drift appart Asif settled in UK,Behroz moved back to his villlage, Jawaid moved to Lahore while Khalid remained in Karachi but years later
they meet each other now old with wives and grown up children they decide to fix marriages bewtween their children but would that work?? Definately not there children hate each others guts and marriages are impossible!! so happy marriages is the wrong word its more like "Band Bajj Gaya"!!!!

Khalid has two gorgeous daughters Ajjiya and Marrium


Ajjiya (Ayeza Khan)

Ajjiya is your typical beautiful girl. There is a saying that when God grants too much beauty He takes away brains and this fits perfectly on Ajjiya she is a bit idiotic girl who likes to day dreams.A girl who is totally filmi and is waiting for her knight in shining armor.
She is 22 years old

Famous line:Meray khuaabon ka shehzaada ek din zaroor aayega aur mujhe lay jaayega *while blushing and biting her right index finger*
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Marrium (Neelam Muneer)

The saying that "when God grants too much beauty He takes away brains" goes completely against Marrium as she is totally gorgeous she is also a super evil genius.She knows how to get her way and things she want done whether by making her all so famous "Baby kitten face" or by working schemes she always gets her way done.

Famous Line: Love me or hate me you know you can't resist me *followed by a smirk*
She is 18 years old

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Baby kitten face look:


Asif has a perfect son and two imperfect daughters.Aryaan,Akbari and Asghari

Aryaan (Azfar Rehman)

Aryaan is the mr perfect which every girl searches for .Being the ideal for most girls he is also very proud and thinks him self the best.Girls fall hard for his smile,smirk and especially when he arches his eye brow in a questioning manner.The fact that he is perfect (which is a lie) has made him over confident.Aryaan is almost 26 years old

Famous Line: I am the best and thats an understatement!!!

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Akbari (Sanam Baloch)

Akbari is not what she seems being in love with a christian and spoild in every manner she still manages to keep herself the perfect and eastern girl in the eyes of her parents
.Akbari 24 years old

Famous line:par mujhe kya pata main to ek simple eastern girl hoon na?

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Asghari (Humaima Malick)

Asghari is spoiled in her outer appearance but from inside she is not that bad. She might be a bit bold bu she is not spoiled by nature
.Asghari is 23 years old

Famous Line:Par yeh meri zindagi hai main jaise chahoon jiyoon!!

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Jawaid has a stupid son a meek son and a beautiful daughter .Daanish,Zaheem and Imaan


Rameez (Humayun Ashraf)

Rameez is quiet and and doesn't talk much .He is intelligent and is very practical who loves to read books .He thinks that love is only a part of fairy tales that don't exist

Famous Line:yeh love shove kuch nahi hota sab kitaabi batain hai!!!

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Danish (Daanish Taimoor)

Daanish is very meek and stupid but very funny he has huge teeth which make him consious around people .He is very simple and plain
He is 25 years old

Famous line:humaray daanth kya bohot baray hain??

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(sorry only pic i could fine ROFL)



Imaan (Sadia Khan)

Imaan is sweet and simple yet very pretty though she is simple yet she isn't dumb and is almost every time the most sensiible out of her siblings
She is 23 years old

Famous Line:Kya sub kuch main hi karoon!!! aur tum sub aaram karo

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and Behroz has two completely weird sons Akbar and Asghar and a dumb daughter Khoobsurat.

Akbar (Imran Abbas)

Akbar is very religious almost too religious but e is also funny and cute while being very dumb .
He is 29 years old

Famous line: ye sub toh naiki ka kaam hai na?

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Asghar (Fawad Khan)

Asghar is very stupid but clever and when a stupid clever comes to thinking he always thinks wrong same with Asghar who wants to marry either Akbari or ASghari so he can go abroad without any hard work
Ashar is 28 years old
Famous line:Helooo (by this you can see he is very friendly LOL )

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Khoobsurat (Ayesha Omer)

Khoobsurat is a completely weird typical village girl who thinks herself very beautiful and tries to pass herself off as a western girl while her brother Asghar wants to marry Akbari or ASghari he wants to marry Aryaan so she can go out of her village and go to UK this a dream she was always waiting for.She tries to do full fashion
in whatever magazine she finds on. She is 30 years old

Famous Line:par main toh khoobsurat hoon na...followed by a cheeky smile


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here are all couples

❤️ Aryaan with Marrium
He is Mr Perfect and she is irresistable.She hates proud men and he hates intelligent girls .She can't stand him and he can't live without her...

❤️ Rameez with Ajjiya
He thinks love is a fairytale for her fairytales are reality .He thinks love doesn't exist she thinks love is her life...

❤️Asghar with Akbari
He wants her for Britiish nationality and she wants to get out of the village through Asghar .What will happen when they will want each other for their heart and love...

❤️ Akbar with Imaan
Both are alike yet both are different ...He is adorable she is serious ...He will teach her to smile and she will teach him to be practical...

❤️ Daanish with Asghari
She is beautiful he is ugly ...She loves him despite his faults... he loves her for her heart...

here are all the siblings

🤡 Ajjiya and Marrium

🤡 Aryaan,Akbari and Asghari

🤡 Daanish,Rameez and Imaan

🤡 Khoobsurat,Akbar and Asghar
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Okay guys i've changed Rameez from Sheroz Sabzwari to Humayun Ashraf
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It was a nice and peaceful Karachi morning ...well it won't remain that way... *ahem* lets continue...

so Khalid ran into the kitchen he was laughing loudly both his daughters stared weirdly at him then they remembered he was always like this especially when he gets extra pocket money from mom.

Khalid quickly said "tum log poocho gay nahi main kiyun khush hoon?"

Ajjiya who was busy admiring herself in her spoon didn't bother to answer while Marrium who had a mouth full spoke between chews

"ab bol bhi dijiye papa kya hua? mom ne ziyaada pocket money di hai kiya?"

their mom snapped back "Marrium don't talk with your mouth full beta and nahi main iss good for nothing loser ko kuch nahi doongi woh bhi EXTRA!! toh bilkul nahi"

both Marrim and Ajjiya chuckeled poor Khalid's mood was broken but he still continued "uff ye sab baatein choro pata hai meray dost Behroz se jo ek Punjaab ke gaaon main rehta hai uss ne hum logon ko 2 mahinay kay liye invite kiya hai!!! hum parso raat ko jaa rahe hain"

Ajjiya's spoon fell down as Marrium spitted out her cereal in shock

"Aapi..."

"haan Marrium"

"Aapi kya papa ne abhi kaha ke hum log 2 mahinay ke liye ek Punjaabi gaaon mein jaa rahe hain woh bhi parso?"

"haan Marrium papa yeh hi keh rahe thay"

both of them looked at each other in complete confusion

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Asif sneaked in quietly and geently shook his son

"...Aryaan... beta..."

Aryaan opened his eyes and screamed "Thief Thief Theif"

"What??"

Aryaan grabbed a bat and hit Asif while Akbari and Asghari came in switched on lights

"Ryan what happened!!!" they saw their father "PAPA" they all screamed at once while Asif kept yelling in pain

"meri kamar"

"sorry papa " said the embarrassed Aryaan

"nahi theek hai "

"aap yahan kyun thay papa" questoned Asghari

"Sarah sahi keh rahi hai papa its 3: 00 am " said Aryaan almost irritated

"Ryan Sarah papa ko toh bolnay do" replied Akbari

"tum log toh meray Pakistani friends ko jaante ho gay"

all nodded

"un main meray dost Behroz ne humain apne gaaown main 2 mahinay k liye bulaaya hai aur hum kal jaa rahe hain raat ko flight hai parso subah tak hum pahunch jaayen ge"

"WHAT??" screamed all three in one voice

after saying tihis Asif ran out

"Becky...Ryan ...kya papa ne abhi abhi" said Sarah

"parso ...gaaown!!!!" replied Akbari in total confusion

"do mahinay" replied Aryaan

"this is stupid hum toh aaj tak kisi sheher main nahoi gaaye Pakistan kay or gaaown!!!" fumed Asghari in anger

"Sarah relax" said both Aryaan and Akbari

"RELAX!!!"
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Jawed sighed and entered the kitchen whee his two sons and daughter were having breakfast

"ek khabar hai"

"mujhe pata tha " said Rameez

"kya pata tha??" asked Daanish

"choro aur abba ko bolnay do" scolded the angry Imaan

"bachon bachon main ne apne university friends main se mera dost Behroz se jo ek Punjaab ke gaaon main rehta hai uss ne hum logon ko 2 mahinay kay liye bulaaya kiya hai hum 2 din baad jaayen gay"

"gaaown" questioned the ever so angry Rameez

"acha par do mahinay!!" replied the dissappointed Imaan

"mazaa aaye ga" clapped the happy Daanish

"chalo kum se kum tum toh khush ho bhai" Rameez said sarcastically

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"putar!!" called Behroz

"jee baba jee" replied the humble Akbar

"putar chal jaa or apne bahi aur bhen ko bulao"

Akbar nodded and brought Asghar and Khoobsurat

"acha sunon maine apne university ke doston ko humaray gaooon pe bulaaya hai "

"jee?" Khoobsurat asked

"haan putar mera dost Khalid Karachi se ,Jawed Lahore se aur Asif bartania se"

"sirf woh log aa rahen kiya abba jee?" asked Asghar who got an intrest now

"nahi Khalid ki do betiyaan,Jawed ki ek beti aur do betiyaan aur Asif ki do betiyaan aur ek beta"

now Asghar and Khoobsarat got an idea

"baba jee " began Khoobsurat "aap ke dost Asif uncle ke do betiyoon aur ek betay ka naam kya hai?"

"meray khyaal se betiyoon ka naam Asghari aur Akbari hai bilkul meray bachon ki tarha aur betay ka naam Aryaan hai"

Khooburat smiled anf thought "Aryaaan acha chal Khoobsurat tera British shohar paaney ka iklota chance hai "

while Asghar thought the same " Chal Asghar 2 vilaayeti kuriyaan tera vilaayat jaaney ke iklota chance ab khush hoja "

while Akbar couldn't care any less

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Moning of day after tomorrow:

"chal putaron Asif ki rail aa gayi ho gi Akbar tu meray saath chal"

"nahi abba jee main nahi" excused Akbar

"baba main chalta hoon" called Asghar hoon

"baba jee main bhi" said Khoobsurat quickly

"acha theek hai chalo"

all three of them set off together

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Asghar and Khoobsurat were really impatient the train stopped at station and people came out Asif was soon seen in sight he hugged Behroz happily and two beautiful daughters and their son sttood behind them all looked totally irritated.Asghar made first move he stood between Akbari and Asgari

"Helooo" he startled the poor girls

"jee hello" replied poor Akbari while Asghari moved on ignoring him

"arrey aap Asghari hain na?"

"jee nahi Akbari"

"acha bohot pyaara naam hai ...bbilkul aapki tarhan" he blushed Akbari looked at him in shock

Khoobsurat after seeing her brother tried to talk

"jee main Khoobsurat"

"acha" answered Aryaan

"aap kaun?"

"Aryaan hoon main"

"arrey waa bohot acha naam hai aapka"

"Thank You" replied the creaped out Aryaan

"mention not" said Khoobsurat while blushing and biting her index finger

poor Aryaan was defo creaped out now

"chalo hum sab chaltey hain" said Behroz

"theek hai" said Asif


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"Asif ye hai mera beta Akbar"

they said as Akbar came to meet them when they were home

"ye Asghar aur ye Khoobsurat "

"arrrey bohot pyaarey bachain hai tumhaaray ye mera beta Aryaan,ye Akbari aur ye Asghari aur ye in ki khadoos maa"

all laughed as their mother got angry

"chal Asghar aur Khoobsurat in ko apna kamra dikhaao"

"jee abba jee" answered both happily

Asghar showed both girls their rooms Asghari went inside but Akbari pretending stood and waited him to leave but he kept staring at her and smiled that creapeed Akbari finally she said

"acha khuda hafiz"

Asghar smiled more broadly and said "okay tata byeee" and waved his hand weirdly

"lagta hai pagal hai" said Akbari as he left

While Khoobsurat shoed him his room "ye aap ka kamra hai"

"thank you" replieed Aryaan and was going inside when she grabbed his hand

"arrey itni jaldi jaa rahe hain"

"toh kya karoon" replied the totally freaked out Aryaan

"haaye mujhe kehne main sharam aati hai " she said as she took her dupatta in her mouth

poor Aryaan went in hurriedly and locked the door

"Oh God thnx for saving me!!! muujhe iss ladki kay iraday galat lagtay hain"

he said as he took a deep breath


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it was growing dark they all were sitting happily well not all ASghar was smiling boadly at Akbari while Khoobsurat was winking at Aryaan making the brother and siater very uncomfortable

"arrey main bhool gaya aaj Khalid bhi toh aaye ga raat main" said Behroz "Asghar tu jaa woh Akbar toh masroof hai"

"nahi nahi abba jee main nahi" said Asghar who just wanted to impress Akbari who seemed the easier target out of the two sisters

"main chaley jaaonga uncle" said Aryaan quickly he wanted to get away from Khoobsurat .Akbari who was geting creaped out of Asghar quickly sdaid

"Ryan main bhi chaloon"

"main bhi chalti hoon" said Khoobsurat quickly.

Aryaan thought if he brought Akbari along then Khoobsurat willl come too

"nahi nahi Becky its okay i'm going"

"beta teray saath humara ek naukar bhi jaa raha hai raaasta batanay ke liye" said Behroz

"okay" replied Aryaan

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It was growing late it was completely dark Khalid ,his daughters and his wife were at station waiting

"Papa 2 ghantay ho gaaye wait karay huye koi nahi aaya...main washroom jaa rahi hoon"

after saying that Marrium left

Aryaan was at station he didn't know where to look suddenly someone bumped at him and fell

"I'm sory" began Aryaan he looked at her and was over come for a few minutes beacause of beauty

"Idiot dekh ke nahi chaltey" said Marrium angrilly

"hello madam idiot kis ko bola"

"tum ko" she screamed

"ziyaada..."

"kya kar lo gay tum Idiot,gavaar jahil!!"

he raised a finger at her

"don't make me angry"

she raised her finger as well

"or what??"


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well did you guys like it??



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aww thank you so much for reading it
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or what???? waiting for next
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InshAlllah i'll update tomorrow after ""Or what" because i also gotta keep updating my other FF qurbat LOL
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Very nice... 👏👏👏 A big round of applause... Keep writing... Sorry for replying late, I was a lil busy...
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