Tere sang...AR ff chap-6 pg 30 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice concept...would love to read further..pls do add me in ur pm list...😊
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Congo on new FF n gr8 concept though i dunt lyk AR dat much bt still luv to read further...thnx 4 d pm n do pm me..
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Hiii friends...here's my 1st update

hope you all will lyk it
 
 
 
 

Alarm rings''

 

A girl whose in her bed'.switches off the alarm''

Right then'Payel comes in'.

 

Payel- ridhima utho''

Ridzy- payel'do minute aur'

Payel- tu kitni baar 2 minute 2 minute bolegi ha?chal uth

Our female lead'Ridhima gupta gets up!!!

Ridzy- payel tu bhi na

Payel- bas bas'jaake fresh ho jao'aur jaldi aana'.tym 8.30 ho gaya'

Ridyz- kya???8.30???hey bhagwaan'''.payel  mein 10 minute mein aati hoon'.

 

After a while Ridzy comes down...

 

ridzy- naashte mein kya hain???

Payel- bread n jam

Ridzy- kya payel'.aaj bhi bread n jam'

Payel- oh helow'.aaj breakfast tum banaane waali  thi'magar tu toh kumbkaran ki tarah so rahi thi na '

Ridzy- arrey meri dost,meri behen'.tu gussa kyun ho rahi hai????

Payel turns away her face in order to show ridzy that she was angry'

 

Ridzy- acha baba'soryy'..n he holds her ears'

Seeing this gesture'payel smiles'..

N they both hug each other'.

 They both have their breakfast

Payel-  chalo nikalthe hain..waise bhi hum aaj thodi late ho gayi'..

They locked the door n they leave for the office

 

On their way,they meet two boyz'.Well itz none else than Rahul n akash

 

Rahul- arrey kya ridhimaa aaj bhi late???

Ridhimma- rahul'sorry'aur yeh aaj bhi late ka kya matlab hain ???

Rahul- ohh tum yeh kehna chaahthi ho ki tum hamesha  punctual hoon???

Ridhima- maine aisa kab kahaa

Rahul- ridhima tum'

Akash cuts the convo

Akah- bas bas'agar tum dono aise hi jhagadthe rahoge toh hum aaj office nahi jaa paunge'..

Both ridzy n rahul show faces to each other '..

 

They reach the office

All 4 of them goes to their respectives sections'.they all do their work'.

 

Evening..

An attender comes to Ridhimma n sayz

 

Attender- ridhimma mam aap chaaron ko saab apne cabin mein bulaaya hai

 

All four of them go to their boss' cabin

 

4 of them ' Good evening sir!

Boss- good evening'.waise tum logon ko pata haina ki aaj tum logon ki yeh aakhri din hain iss office mein'.tum logon ka training period joh khatam hota hai'

Mein bohot sehemath hoon tum logon ke kaam se..you all worked very well'.

 

4 of them- thnk u sir

Boss- toh yeh lijiye'is mahine ki stipend

4 of them takes their cheque!!!!

 

Boss- all the best guyz

4 of them ' thnk u sir J

 

N they leave'..

 

On their way back home

 

Rahul- ridhima mujhe tumse ek baat kehni thi'

Ridhima- haan bolo                    

Rahul- mom dad ne meri shaadi fix kiya hai

Ridhima- ohh wow!!! Pehle kyun nahi bataaya

Rahul- yaar mujhe toh sirf aaj hi pata chal gaya tha

Akash- congrats buddy'

Payel- party kab de raha hai???

Ridzy- rahul'..tujhse jo shaadi karega na'woh unlucky hai'..mujhe nahi lagta ki who  tere saath adjust karegi'

Rahul- wat??tumhari kehne ka matlab hain ki mein bura hoon

Ridzy- haan'..sirf mein hi tujhe jhel sakti hoon

Rahul- acha'..toh phir mujhse shaadi kyun nahi karti

Ridzy- mujhe tum pe interest nahi hain'aur mujhe ek raajkumar shaadi karega..tere jaise bhikhaari nahi

Rahul- dekh ridhimma mujhe gussa mat dila'.

Akash- chal payel'..hum dono jaake packing karte hain'.

Ridzy- lo ji..yeh lovebirds toh akele mein tym bithaane ki bahaane doondh raha hai

Payel- ridhima tu bhi na''''..chalo packing karte hain'..

Aaj raat 11pm baje ki train hain'..

they go to their cottages n pack their stuffs'..

By 9.30pm,they hire a taxi n goes to the railway station.

They enter d train'.n they all leave for Mumbai..

 

Akash n payel were sitting together..while rahul n ridhima were still fighting...they reach mumbai at 3am in the morning'..Payel was sleeping on akash's shoulders'.

Akash- payel,utho hum Mumbai pahunch gaya hai

Both payel n akash noticed dat rahul n ridzy were not taking to each other

Akash- guys tum dono phirse jhagada toh nahi kiya'

Both of them didn't reply''

Payel- hey bhagwaan tum dono kab sudrenge???

Rahul- payel,akash meine decide kiya hai ki mein iss ladki ko(pointing to ridzy) apni shaadi mein nahi invite karoongi'..

Ridzy- fine'..mein aana bhi nahi chaahthi'.

Payel- bas bas'.chalo train se uthar the hain'.

They all come out of the train'.

Ridzy hugs payel n akash n bids them farewell'.. but she turns her face away(in a joking way) when it comes to Rahul'

Payel- ridzy  bye dear'.

Ridzy- bye!!! Tc

N they all leave'..

Ridzy walks n later she sees her dad n her elder bro(plz chk theCS in pg 1)for theri pix)'..she goes to them'n hugs them

 

Ridzy's dad- haaye meri jaan..kaisi hain tu???

Ridzy- mein theek hoon dad..

N then she hugs her bro

Dad- baaki sab log kaha hain

Ridzy- who log toh chala gaya'..

Bro- chalo ghar chalthe hein'.sab log tera intezaar kar raha hai''.

 

 

Precap-

Ridzy- mom mein abhi abhi aayi hoon'plz shaadi ke baat mat kahiyega'.n she leaves d room

Ridzy's mom- par ridhima'.

Her dad cutz the convo-

Ridzy's dad(to ridzy's mom)- woh shaadi ke liye maan jaayegi..im sure!!!

He calls someone

On the phone- hello ARMAAN!!

P.S---Plz bear wid with if i have some grammar mistakes...
hoep you all loved it..plz post ur valuable comments.(u can post ur own reviews...if u didnt lyk any of my part then plz tell me...i'll try my level best to write my FF well)
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Love,
sonia
 
Edited by awesumsonia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
hey dear
awesome partπŸ‘β­οΈπŸ‘β­οΈ
loved it
ridz n rahul fight so gud
waitng armaan ebtry
thanks for pm
plzzz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
nice part
loved 4 convo
w8ing for arman
thakx for the pm
lov
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
loved it...
thanks for the pm...continue soon...
Posted: 12 years ago
#39
superb update.waiting for arman entry.pleas continue soon.thanks for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey nice part...tanks 4 d pm..do continue soon...😊