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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 14

 

Khurana construction

Maan enter in company

 

Maan: adi,come  to mya cabin

Adi: yes sir

 

In maan 's cabin

 

Adi: may I coming sir

Maan: hmmm

Adi wo noida wali project ki file kaha hai

Adi: sir wo to pinki ke pass hai'

Maan: to jao usse leke aayo

Adi: sirrr, wo pinki aaj leave pe hai

Maan: abhi call karo, aur usse office bulayo

Urgently

Adi: yes sir

 

 

 

 

Pinki: geet jldi kr

 

Pinki phone ringing

Geet: chle ab

Pinki: adi sir ka phone

Ab wo mujhe kyun phone kr rhe hai

Geet: tu uthayengio nhi to pata kaise chlega

 

Pinki: hello sir

Adi: jldi se office aayo

Pinki : pr kyun

Adi: tumhare pass jo noida project ki file hai, wo abhi maan sir ko chahiye

Pinki: hey rabba, ab mein kya karu

Adi:hehehe, office aayo, right now

Pinki: sir, mein abhi aati hu

Geet: kya hua

Pinki: oye geet abhi hme office jana padega

Geet: pr kyun

Pinki: oye file deni hai

Time pen hi puche to dd ka gussa

Usse to rb hi bachaye

Geet: dd, ab ye kya hai

Pinki: tu chl ab

 

 

In khurana constructions

 

Maan cabin

 

Maan: adi ab tk file kyun nhi aayi hai

Adi: sir, maine phone kr diya hai, bs wo aati hi hogi

 

Sasha enter in the cabin

Sasha: MK, ye gurgaon wali prject ki file tyaar hai

Maan: hmmm

Sasha: MK, jo meeting phle yha hone wali thi ab wo bahar

Maan: sasha, saaf saaf kaho

Kya khan chahti ho

 

Sasha: MK, wo client ka call aaya tha, wo chahte hai, meeting khi bahar ho

Maine unse kaha end time pe kaise kh skte hai

Wo request kr rhe the

Unhe meeting ke trunt baad flight leni hai

Isliye

Maan: ok, koi baat nhi

Meeting kitni der mein hai

Sasha: after one an hour

Maan: hmmm

 

Sasha leaves

 

Maan : adi, jb tk mein wapas aayu mujhe file apni table pe chahiye

adi: yes sir

maan also leave the cabin

 

adi:  thank god bach gye, ye pinki kha rh gyi

 

 

PARKING AREA

Pinki: geet  tu yhi wait kr, bs mein aati hu

Geet: mein bhi chlti hu na

Pinki: tu ruk, mein bs jldi se ye file deke aayi

Geet: hmmm

 

Maan enter in parking area

geet(self talk):  he babaji, ye kha rh gyi

geet tu bhi na, abhi to gyi hai, thoda to time lagta hai

 

 

 

Geet apni hi khyalo mein khoyi hu khudse baat krte huye, ulti chle jar hi thi means backward direction

 

at other side

 

Maan also come forward, he did not notice the someone walk backward

 

Oops firse takkar

 

Geet will fall and maan held the geet from waist

 

 

Dono ek dusre ki aankhon mein kho jate hai

Kuchj pal ke liye

Asa lagta hai, bs isi pal ka intzaar tha

Sayad inhi aankhon me doobne ka intzaar tha

 

 

Mahi mein mahi mahi ve………………………………………………….

……………………………………………

 

Note: small update ke liye sorry

Phle de hi nhi rhi thi

Fir bad mein laga small hi shi pr de duti hu

I hope u enjoy it

 

Do comments

 

Aur rha precap

Wo aap pe chodti hu

1.   Maan kaha hai ye janana hai ya nhi

2.   Nhi to ase hi aage story chlti rhengi

3.   Ya meri marzi

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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Part 15

 

 

 

PARKING AREA


Pinki: geet  tu yhi wait kr, bs mein aati hu

Geet: mein bhi chlti hu na

Pinki: tu ruk, mein bs jldi se ye file deke aayi

Geet: hmmm

 

Maan enter in parking area

geet(self talk):  he babaji, ye kha rh gyi

geet tu bhi na, abhi to gyi hai, thoda to time lagta hai

 

 

 

Geet apni hi khyalo mein khoyi hu khudse baat krte huye, 

ulti 

chle jar hi thi means backward direction

 

at other side

 

Maan also come forward, he did not notice the someone

walk backward

 

Oops firse takkar

 

Geet will fall and maan held the geet from waist

 

 

Dono ek dusre ki aankhon mein kho jate hai

Kuchj pal ke liye

Asa lagta hai, bs isi pal ka intzaar tha

Sayad inhi aankhon me doobne ka intzaar tha

 

 

Mahi mein mahi mahi ve'''''''''''''''''''.

'''''''''''''''''

 

 

 

Dono ko ehsaas huye and they come back again in present

 

Geet: dekhke nhi chl skte, jb dekho takrate rhte ho

Maan: tum ulti chl rhi thi.

People sedhe chlte hai naki ulte

Geet:  oh ho

To tumne mujhe dekha, iska mtlb janbuzkar takraye

Hey babaji, yha ke ladke kitne bakar hai, jha ldki dekhi nhi 

chedna suru

Maan: mein tumhe ched rha hu

Maan come step forward

Geet take steps backward

Geet: ha, aur nhi to kya, bus stand se mera picha kr rhe ho

Aur ab yha tk puch gye

Maan: bs, bhut ho gya , tum yha khde hoke, mujh pe hi chila 

rhi ho

Geet: to tumhari jagah hai

 

 

Maan isse phle kuch khta, uska phone phirse''.😉

 

Sasha: mk, wo meeting 15 mins late ho gy hai

Maan: hmmm

Mujhe abhi time lagega

 

Maan left the place and reach to the car

 

In car

Maan mummers  acha hua meeting 15 minutes late ho gyi , nhi toh is ladki ki wajah se maan singh khurana phli baar kisi meetin me late puchta

 

 

Geet still standing in parking area and wait 4 pinki

 Hey babaji, ye sb kya hai, mein jha jati hu ye mujhe kyun mil jata hai

 

Pinki: chle geet, sorry yaar

Wo kaam aa gya tha

Geet: itk ok, pinki

Toh hm kha jar he hai

Pinki: hmmm

Geet: bol na

Pinki: geet ,chl tujhe sbse phle  golgappe  khilati hu'

Geet : golgappe, wow

Abhi se pani aa gya mooh me

Jldi chl na'

 

 

At night

 

9:00  p.m

 

Uncle: ye koi time hai, ghar aane ka

Pinki: papa wo mein geet ko

Uncle: geet aaj hi yha aayi hai, aur tu uspe

 

Geet: uncle wo saari meri hi galati hai, maine socha jitni jyada jgh mein jaan sku utna hi acha hoga mere liye

Isliye maine hi jidd ki thodi der aur gumte hai

Sorry uncle

Promise next time asa nhi hoga

Uncle: pr next time asa nhi hona chahiye

Tum abhi abhi aayi ho

Sb kuch jaan jayongi

 

Chlo tum dono dinner kr lo

 

 

In present

 

Ye sb pal yaad karke geet khilkhilake hs pdti hai

Uski hassi us waqt ghqr mein gunj rhi thi, itne dino ke baad geet dilse hassi thi

 

Asa laga ptzad ke baad savan aa gya ho

 

Daadi aur meera apne room se bahar aa jate hai

Daadi: meera , geet kitni pyaari lg rhi h na

Itne dino ke baad inhe muskrate huye dekha hai

 

Meera: ha daadimaa

Bs baghwan inki muskurahat yuhi bnake rkhe

 

Daadi: abhi tk aap dono yhi baithe hai

Geet: wo daadimaa

Mein aur veerji purani baatein krne lage to waqt ka pata hi nhi chla

 

Daadi: wo to hm, apke chehre ki hassi dekhke hio smjh gye

 the bte

Chlo koi baat nhi, brij bte jake fresh ho jaiye

Bs dinner tyaar hai

Meera: geet tbtk tum bhi rest krlo

Abhi dinner lgvati hu

Geet: hmmm

 

 

 

 

Precap: maan kha hai, iska jwab nxt mein mil jayega

 

And khti mitthi nok zhok  between maaneet

 

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
Woww.. just luved it..
waiting for next part..
Mujhe jana hai maan hai kahan..
Plz jaldi update karo naa..
n thanks for PM..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
bs itne se comment not fair
💔

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#55


Part 16


At dinning table



Daadi: dev bte itne late , chliye dinner kr lijiye

Dev: bs abhi aaya daadimaa

Brij: hey dev

Dev: hey, sorry wo maine note nhi kiya

Brij: its ok

Dev: bs mein abhi aata hu

 

After dinner sb aapne room me chle jate hai

In daadi room

Meera: daadimaa hm brij veerji ko to sch bta skte hai na

Daadi: nhi, aap to janti hai  na meera , ydi brij ko pta chelega 

to geet ke mayke me sbko pta chl jayega, aur sb geet se 

milne aayenge, ydi s baa gye khe geet  ko shk na ho jaye 

kuch gdbd hai

 


Aur meera kya peta wo geet kea age jhoot kh bhi payenge 

ya 

nhi

 

Dev: meera daadimaa bilkul shi kh rhi hai

Jb geet bro ke accident ki baat brdast nhi kr payi

To wo ye kaise sun payengi bro is missing

Kisiko nhi pata wo kaha hai

Meera: dev , tum kuch krte kyun nhi

Kbhi na kbhi geet ko btana padega

Tb hum usse kya jwab denge


Daadi: hume to kuch smjh nhi aa rha hai

Hr subh geet isi aas se uthti hai aaj maan wapas aa jyenge

Pr kb tk jhoot khenge hm unse

Dev: daadimaa police koshish kr rhi hai na

Don't worry bro jldi aa jayenge aur hume geet ko kuch btana 

bhi nhi padega

 



In maaneet room



Geet kisi ka number baar baar try kr rhi thi, pr no. nhi milta 

hai

Who phone dairy dundne ke liye drawer check krti hai, tbhi 

usse wha pen milta hai

 

Flashback

 

Pinki house

At morning

 

In pinki room


Pinki: oye geet, itni jldbazi kyun mcha rhi hai


Geet: tune time nhi dekha kya mujhe college jane mein late 

ho rha hai

Jake form submit krana hai

Principal se baat krnhi hai

Tb jakes hi mayne mein mera admission hoga

Pinki: oye tujhe ye sb phle krna chahiye tha


Geet: phle kb krti , abhi aayi hu na

To abhi krungi

Tu chinta na kr, phone pe baat kit hi veerji ne

Aur mere wha ke principal ne bhi saari baat kit hi

Unhone mujhe form aur marksheet submit krane ko kha hai

Acha ab mein chlti hu

Pinki: best of luck

Geet thanks yaar

 


Geet( self talk): hey babaji, aaj mera college ka phla din 

haisb kuch acha jaye

 

Geet left the place

 

At the road

 

Geet: taxiii

Taxi were not stop

Geet : lgta hai tujhe aaj taxi bhi nhi milinge

Lift hi leni padegi

Oh geet tujhe koi lift bhi nhi de rha hai

Apne hoshiyarpur mein to koi bhi lift dene ko tyaar ho jata 

tha

Aur yha sb hi khadus hai

Hey babaji kuch karo

 


At other side

Maan (to driver): south x chalo

Driver': ji sir


After this maan opened his laptop checked his mail and took 

the file from other side and checks it


Suddenly his car stops with a jerk and one girl come front in 

to the car

Maan: what happened?

Driver: sir ek ladki car ke samne aake khdi ho gyi hai

Maan: what?

Usse phle maan kuch kh pata ,

She ran and open the side door of the car and sit in the car.

 

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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Loved ur FF... Pls add me to ur PM list
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Its really nice.. 👏
do continue soon 😊😊
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#58
nice update 

continue soon 

love
Sana
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thanks for the update
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#60
awesome ... superb ...

loved d parts 15 n 16 ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...