Maaneet.. Deja Vu Last part page 73

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi
this is my 2nd fanfiction. hope you like it
 i was having this idea for quite a long now. so i just finally thought of sharing it with you guys
plz tell me if i should continue it
😊
 
 
 

                               DEJA VU

 

 

He sat there for God knows how many hours. Staring blankly at the door ahead

Nurse and doctors were rushing in and out of the room but he was oblivious to all that.

He knew it he had known it all along

It was all his mistake if he could just bring back the time.

He sat there for 18 hrs soul less and life less

Mr.khurrana .i am sorry we could not save her

We tried everything but

Maan just got up from his chair and went to sit next to her

That was his life now

To live with this

Or no he won't

Why would he live when his Geet had gone to the other land

He wd go there or if not he will call her back

And with a thud he fell down

Pich black

doctors came in rushing

Mr.khurrana  mr.khurrana

No response

There was nothing left to response

Mr khurrana was looking for only one voice  voice of his mishti

Calling him with  all her love

Maan.

 

i'll be waiting for your response😊

those who have been asking me if it was on a sad note to i just wanted to tell that it's as normal and happy noted story as others are . it will take 3 4 updates for you guys to understand the topic.
 
 link to a new beginning:
INDEX:
Concept: page 3
 DEJAVU II season 2
 
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shah10 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
wow..amazing update.
love it.
do continue plz
thx
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
congrats !!!!!!!! on new one ...

awesome ... interesting ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
awesome...do cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
lovely...seems to be a sad FF😭😭😭😭

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#6
wow awesomeee
update soonnn
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#7
interesting...cont soon...thanks 4 pm..
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#8
wow its seems really interesting...
continue dear...
waiting for next part...
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
amazing update congrats for new ff thank you for pm great concept 
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
Awosome start
Do continue
Can u add me in ur pm list nd can I hav ur other ff link
Pls