Originally posted by: Nidhsara
Loved it...I was smirking when I read the begining...but when Nisha came in first I thought whats wrong with this guy...you did a fantastic job next of unfolding the truth.. Thnks darling.Avi was hiding his grief behind the flirt facade...felt bad for him when i tead his dialogues to Arpi's photo.. Yeahhh 😭😭😭😭😭. but honestly dear jumping from the window😲😲😲...loved it when Arpi (with memory loss i guess) asked him the question...waiting eaaagerly for more...give you⭐️5 stars for this.. Awww....love you🤗 Love u tooo
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Originally posted by: shahrukh_divya
wow dat was awsum!
srsly luved it! part 1 was awsum! Thnks dearwa8in for more 2 read..!!! it will come soon😉 m gettin addicted 2 ur updatess!!!! luvin it! Thnk u soo muchthx for d pm dear!
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Oh dear, Avi attempted to commit suicide in this story as well. The poor guy is dying every second already. Yeah..my poor avi😭😭😭When will his miseries end. BTW, when did Avi start going to hookers? This scene reminded me of the scene in New Moon where Edward attempts to commit suicide and he sees Bella and believes that he is in heaven. Yeah sidda😉So cute that Avi believes he is in heaven, he can continue to dream.
Thnks fr commenting dear
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Originally posted by: joliefille
OK, i read it,it was nicely written👏 Thnks dear😳
first part was quiet good n engaging ,👍🏼
i have to admit , u shocked me again,
Avi is paying girl
n more over his behavior toward that girl nisha stunned me ,😡 Me tooo
n top on all he jumped from window, i thought it must be a dream or something🥺
but finally she came, ❤️
waiting for next part dear update soon n don't take too much pan killerstake some rest too😳
Yeah dear...I vil...
Ill update soon😉
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Originally posted by: chatterbox
oh man i m confused who is who
wud read again and comment
No prob di..
U can take ur time😳
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OMGgg...what a bold character awdesh has in this OS...He slapped a woman...😲... Its shocking naaa😲😉Luved awi as some bussinessman.. He is heartthrob😍
waiting for the next part priya... Sure...vil update soon😃
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