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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
My Sweetu!!!!!!🤗🤗

Wonderful Part dear!!👏👏

OMG!! Well I was shocked dat Avi slapped a girl...😲😲

Beautifully written..It was if I was watching it on T.V. while reading it...⭐️⭐️

I am really eager to knw what will happen next...😳😳




Edited by jes_jade - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Wat 2 say bout u di u r jst

awesomeee

i don't have words 2 say bout u n ur work

bas yahi dua hai ki aap issi tarah humare

liye yunhi aise interesting OS laate rahe

or hum apke shaan mein or shabd jodte

rahe luv u alottt😳
Edited by jasveensokhi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
Res. .hv exams 2mrw.wl cmnt latr priya ponnu
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: zash_LubUKriYa

Res. .hv exams 2mrw.wl cmnt latr priya ponnu


Azi poonu 🤗

r u not studying and tommorow is your exam 😡

u can comment later 😳

love you 🤗
Edited by yoga23priya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
res its really good dii
next part kab likh rahi ho
Edited by rubal223 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
Loved it...I was smirking when I read the begining...but when Nisha came in first I thought whats wrong with this guy...you did a fantastic job next of unfolding the truth...Avi was hiding his grief behind the flirt facade...felt bad for him when i tead his dialogues to Arpi's photo...but honestly dear jumping from the window😲😲😲...loved it when Arpi (with memory loss i guess) asked him the question...waiting eaaagerly for more...give you⭐️5 stars for this...love you🤗
Edited by Nidhsara - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
wow dat was awsum!
srsly luved it! part 1 was awsum!
wa8in for more 2 read..!!! m gettin addicted 2 ur updatess!!!! luvin it!
thx for d pm dear!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
Oh dear, Avi attempted to commit suicide in this story as well. The poor guy is dying every second already. When will his miseries end. BTW, when did Avi start going to hookers? This scene reminded me of the scene in New Moon where Edward attempts to commit suicide and he sees Bella and believes that he is in heaven. So cute that Avi believes he is in heaven, he can continue to dream.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
OK, i read it,it was nicely written👏

first part was quiet good n engaging ,
👍🏼

i have to admit , u shocked me again,
Avi is paying girl
n more over his behavior toward that girl nisha stunned me ,😡

n top on all he jumped from window, i thought it must be a dream or something🥺

but finally she came, ❤️

waiting for next part dear update soon n don't take too much pan killerstake some rest too
😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
oh man i m confused who is who

wud read again and comment
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