Heartless~~~Pg-45 part-8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey everyone...i was jst wondering abt maan n geet...recently i had seen a documentary film ...and was wondering abt writing a ff on maan n geet based on it...

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The basic concept of it is...

Geet Handa is vry beautiful and wants to be a model.Her best friend is Anwesha Khurana.She considers Anni as her own sis...But one day changes her life forever.The day which she thought was a boon became a bane...She is no longer Geet,the happy go lucky kind of a girl

Any one interested...den i may continue...



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Friends here is the Prologue..........tell m if you want m to continue.................your opinion is very imp for m...as it is the first time i m trying to write a ff........


Geet's monologue

 

My head was paining very badly.I opened my eyes'.I could not see anything'I tried to move my hands'but I could not'I realized I was tied to a bed''..My whole body was aching'..In still tried to move my hands'but they were tied very tightly by some very sharp rope''..and it seemed as if my hands were bleeding''My whole body was sore''.All I could move were my legs which were not tied''As I moved them my dress moved above my thighs'I tried to put them down but in vain'..I realized I was wearing a very short dress'dress????no!!!!!a lingerie'..only lingerie'..and nothing''.

 

I tried to remember where and why I was here?????I closed my eyes as realization dawned upon me''

 

I slowly opened my eyes'.I tried to look around'but it was very dark'..I realized I was in a small dingh room'..with no windows'.but only a door''.The only source of light was the light which penetrated from under the door''.

 

Suddenly I heard footsteps and heard someone laughing loudly''.and someone entered the room''..I was blinded by the sudden light''..Someone entered and closed the door with a BANG''

 

I tried to see who it was''.He came towards me and on seeing me looking at him he smiled and threw away his shirt''The whole room was filled with the smell of alcohol''He came towards me and touched my thigh'moving his hands upwards"Hey Geet'you are beautiful'but you will look more beautiful without this '."and smirked'.'I jerked and shouted "Don't you touch me'..you basterd'.."

 

Man:" Oh.....Den whom do you want to touch you???"(laughs loudly)"Geet,you can do nothing see what I do to you'.and smirked"He ripped off Geet's dress and jumped on her'.his hands moved all over her'..pinching pushing pulling all over her''.tears rolled down her eyes''.

 

Geet:"Please don't'don't'"she begged''.she could so nothing'..afterall she was tied and the monster was more powerful than her and was on her'..

 

Man:"This is just the beginning''more is yet to come"'he brought his alcohol smelling mouth towards her and began kissing her roughly'..biting tearing her lips till it started to bleed''.tears rolled down her eyes''..He left her mouth and smiled an evil smile and licked his lips''.

 

Geet:"You bas***d''.."and she spit on his face and with all her might kicked him in between his legs''.He moarned in pain and fell down the bed''..cluching where it pained the most'''

 

He slowly got up and said,"Don't be happy so much'..I will come back"''..with that he left her'took his shirt and barged out of the room''..

 

Geet lied naked on the bed with her hands tied and tears and blood rolled down her eyes and body''She closed her eyes in pain'''.



So frnds how was it......plz tell m.......was it to much violence.....did someone like it?????since its the 1st ff i m trying 2 write so plz tell m frnds should i continue??????

Edited by sam1234fly - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey...everyone?????should i continue?????????

Those who want pm.....plz add me in your buddy list.............i cant add anyone 2 m buddy list....der s some error.......
Edited by sam1234fly - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Index
Part 1--------   scrol up!😊
Part 2--------    https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1617388?pn=3
Part 3--------    https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1617388?pn=6
Part 4--------    https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1617388?pn=8 
Part 5--------    https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1617388&TPN=21         
Part 6--------    https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1617388?pn=27
Part 7--------    https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1617388?pn=30
Part 8--------    https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1617388&PID=43818024&#43818024

Don't forget to comment!!!!!!πŸ˜ƒ

Edited by sam1234fly - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was amazing. hehe is that maan. it must be…. oh please post part 2 :D
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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#6
Thats new
Looks lik the person is jus after Geet for his satisfaction
Lets c wat happens aage
Update soon n plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
#7
Great  FF....n Sam continue soon dear.....me waiting for the next part..!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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different concept!
 
wonder who that man is...
 
continue soon!
 
plzzz add me 2 ur pm list!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Are you posting the next part right now? πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i made a note on my thread about your ff' you beter update fast nowπŸ˜†
& LONG parts :DπŸ˜›
Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 13 years ago