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Posted: 13 years ago
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next morning

Geet: woke up ..her hand was in his ..."when he came last night?" saw him sleeping peace fully.. try to take out her hand from his.. but failed as he was holding it very tightly... she again laid ..."i don't feel he did all that in some pressure." stared at his sleeping face.

Maan: why you are looking me like that... he looked at her 

Geet: woh kuch  nai ...  try to free her hand

Maan: hold it more tightly ,closed his eyes..

Geet:  uff kya mushkil ha...

Maan: smiled.."how you are here?"

Geet:  hmmm beeji & kids took my room

Maan: oh... was that your room or this is your room? suddenly got up turn on her side

Geet: woh jee

Maan: kya jee..... removed her curls .. as he stared 

Geet:she held her breath ...closed her eyes   

Maan: smiled.. "they were wrong" embrace her in his arms pull her close whisper..."promise me one thing" could feel her restless or shy

Geet: open her eyes."Jee"

Maan: never leave me ...

Geet: surprised at his shaky voice 

Maan: i know we will face different kind of problems but you always be my strength not my weakness... removed her hairs 

Geet: looked at him in surprised..

Maan: last night your uncle try to create a scene..

Geet: what he did?placed her head on his chest...

Maan: liked it he just raised a bit placed pillow behind his head..."He was here, he said he want to take you with him..."

Geet: but why?  placed her hand on his chest...

Maan: "i have asked Adi to find out ..paused"

Geet: why you didn't let me talk to him?

Maan: as that was not 

Geet: you were with him till 12?

Maan: " looked at her...no i went out..

Geet: i waited for you...

Maan: why?

Geet: "woh..."playing with his shirt button

Maan: did you had dinner?

Geet: yes

Maan: then...

Geet:"kuch nahi "...try to get out of his arms..

Maan: you will not go any where without me...

Geet: washroom bhi nahi...

Maan: smiled . nahi..

Geet:pushed him away....but failed

Maan: was angry to see your  door closed last night ..... i just slept..... you were shouting at me ...

Geet: i 

Maan: yes made a baby face

Geet: why?

Maan:as i was snoring 

Geet: oh pushed him away.. walk to wash room

Maan: where are you going ?

Geet: shyly walk in

Maan: " she likes my presence"

At out house....

devMom: why you want us to come back with you?

Dev: mom i think  now there is no need of staying here.

Devmom: we have spend so much money , visited Delhi let us visit few places

Dev: but mom they are  not in state to entertain you.

Rahul: bhai i am here i will take them.

Dev:: felt help less in front of them."ok i will tell Maan."walked out...

nt: Mama you are too mother in law of her daughter they should give you proper respect...

Devmom: i am watching all this .


at Mansion

Geet: came out with towel wrap over her head... Maan was watching tv..."you can go"

Maan: where? looked at her...

Geet: you don't want to get ready..

Maan:nai

Geet: everyone must be waiting... made a sad face

Maan: "let them "walk to her  as she was drying her hairs.

Geet: stand next to wall."kya kara raha ha aap"

Maan: move more closed ...

Geet: placed her hand on his chest to stop him"roka na"

Maan: if i don't...  took a step forward ..

Geet:closed her eyes ... for few second she stand like that....slightly open her eyes,it was dark in room ...looked around Maan was not there...."Uff" took a step... fall down on him,their face brush each other ...Ouch... what are you doing here?

Maan: yar i was trying to close your payal.....he hold her tightly....Geet: was totally on him...

Geet: it was so dark i couldn't see.....removed her wet hairs from his face.

Maan: jo hota ha acha ka leya hota ha... took a deep breath ..inhale the aroma 

Geet: jee.. she felt strange in his arm..

Maan:"if you don't i can hold you like this ....paused"

Geet: oh just quickly stand..

Maan: ahhh....

Geet: kneel down... "kya huwa are you ok ?"

Maan: my back...

Geet: worried "does it hurt " rub it slightly

Maan: yes alot... looked  at worried face

Geet: wait let me help you in getting up.. gave him her hand


Maan: grab it... "ahhh"

Geet: i am sorry , i really didnt see you.... you sit here i will bring balm. placed cushion behind him

Maan:started laughing.... hold her arm...

Geet: kya..with her eyes

Maan: pull her.."kuch nai huwa mujhe "

Geet: you were making me fool....

Maan: i was just trying to see you reaction

Geet: dekhe leya .... i am not talking to you...

Maan:" why?"try to leave her hand from his.....but he pull her

Geet: haar waqt taang karta ha

Maan: "you are so cute i love "paused

Geet: what you love? looked in his eyes

Maan: i love mmmm rub his chin removed her curls 

Geet: kya

Maan: i love .. peck her quickly went to washroom..

Geet: was surprised as what he did ...she could still feel his touch ...  bit her lips..looked at his and dadi picture at  his table...smiled.

Maan: in shower why i ki*** her? i am broking friend ship rules....if she mind... he quickly dress up..walked out..she was sitting same way he left her.... holding his Picture frame ...

Maan: "why are you crying? saw tears floating out of her eyes 

Geet:kept the frame back...wipe her tears..."i am not"

Maan: i am sorry i shouldn't done it....

Geet: looked at him..."woh"..in heart i am not crying on that

Maan: acha sorry i will not do  it again promise..  wipe her tears

Geet: i am not crying on that.

Maan: cupped her face "then why?"

Geet: that... paused

Maan: that what Geet?

Geet: you ..paused

Maan: i didnt do it properly... brush his nose tip with her's

Geet: closed her eyes as it was difficult for her to see in his eyes ...

Maan:  kissed her fore head "roya na karo mujhe ko bilkul acha nai lagta" .hug her as tight as he could....

Knock at the door

Geet: someone knocked...whisper

Maan: hmmm...let her free.... Geet fix her duppata open door.

Ved: uff didi you too slept like mamoo today...enter their room

Tanu : we both waited.

Geet:Oh sorry...

Ved: no sorry

Geet: your Mamoo slept late last night that why.

Tanu: Mamoo slept not you didi...

Geet: looked at Maan he smiled " ok why you were looking for me?"

Tanu: didi we came here for a month ,but mama saying we have to go back.

Geet: why?

Ved: wrap his arm around his chest "she said you & mamoo will go on Moon"

Tanu "uff it is honey moon"

Geet turn her back towards Maan sat on bed edge

Maan: "tell mama didi doesnt  want to go on Moon"

Ved: so we can stay here.hurray  jumping on their bed

Geet: looked at Maan"when i said that?"

Maan: acha you want to go then..

Geet; yeh bhi kab bola...

Maan : hug Ved.. " phir kya bola" sit next to her hit his shoulder with hers.

Geet: kuch nai... try to get up..hold her hand 

Maan: kids you wait for us on breakfast... we will get ready for office & come.

Tanu: you will go to office..

Maan: will take you both too.. wink pack your bags , didi will help you with your home work there...

Ved & Tanu: hug them  

Maan: wrap his arm around Geet waist..

Geet: try to move his hand , but he drag her more close...

Tanu: let us keep our books... they both ran

Maan: close door beta... 

Ved: ok get ready hug didi later...

Geet: ufff.. try to get up...

Maan: pull her... 

Geet: Leave me?looked confused

Maan: leave her hand ,walk to that dresser, comb hairs , grab tie....

Geet: is he angry.... she walk to see in his eyes....but he turn his face ...cleared her throat.

Maan: hide his smiled.."we are late"

Geet: jee.. quickly tie her hairs... 

Maan: removed the clip & walked out..." very difficult to stay that close to you"

Geet:"uff he is angry... what if i had let him k*** me i am his wife..." talking to her self walk out...

Meera: "how are you?" try to tease her

Geet:" what will happen to me didi" walk to lounge

Meera" really she is ...paused..

Beeji: kya huwa... hold Meera shoulder

Meera: look at them it look like they had a fight....

Beeji: also look at that direction, Maan was busy reading inewspaper, & Geet was keeping Ved books in his bag..

Meera:"beeji it doesn't look like they are married for ages ... a husband reading paper, wife checking her kids school bags."

Beeji: come with me... 

Meera:where are you all going?

Tanu : office..

Devmom: enter..kids to office..

Tanu: we all 3 are going with Mamoo..

Sasha: why?

Tanu: maasi didi will help us with our homework

Devmom: why at office?

Tanu: ufff dadi ma jee ....

nt: i will help you in your homework

Ved: you never did it before massi

Meera: hide her smile...

Geet: i work with him , kids want to be with us and we can't give them proper time that why taking them with us.

Sasha: what you do there?

Maan:sorry  we are late...

Dadi: both of you come here...

Geet: jee both walked...

Beeji gave Maan a small box... Make Geet stand in front of him

Maan: smiled ...take a pinch  placed it care full in her maang...whisper" i am getting better" cleared her forehead..

Geet: lowered her eyes...

Ved & Tanu clap .... "Beeji  Prince & Princess" both feel shy

Beeji: yes ...

Sasha: Prince & Princess...

Tasha: laugh..

Dev: "Maan yar aik din tou choti karlo...

Maan:" bhai life should not stop..."

Dev: so true ..both walked out

Maan: "if i will not take her with me she will just think & cry...which i don't want."

Dev: mom & sis want's to stay here for few more days,i hope that will be not a prob for you..

Maan: "not at all, as kids will be with me Meera didi can give them time."

Dev: thx ,

Maan: bhai

Dev: kya buddy

Maan: you too shift in Delhi..

Dev: why?

Maan: i want you here... hug him

Meera: looked at them..."Maan is ..paused"

Geet: kya didi...as she was standing next to her..

Meera: "he is very sensitive.."

Sasha:cut her " bhabi will you take us for shopping?"

Meera: sure...

Geet: yes indeed he is ....she walk to the car as they were waiting for her....

Maan: started  car... 

Geet: tanu & ved if someone is angry from you what to do?. try to read Maan face.. he was looking out.

Ved: who is angry?

Geet: if some one...

Tanu: hug and kiss as when we fight we do that...

Maan: hide his smiled "now do my wife..."

Geet: blushed ... 

Ved: but who is angry?

they reached the office.....

Geet: i just asked if someone is

Tanu :mamoo where we will sit.

Maan: in my cabin .

Ved ran as he saw pinky in the other lift...didi do you have chocolate?

Tanu ran too... i am too coming

Maan: pull Geet to his lift... 

Geet: let me go with kids

Maan: pinky will take care of it he started walking towards her..

Geet: it  will open

Maan: stop it.."now it will not open.."

Geet: started looking on floor.

Maan:  where is my hug?

Geet: but you are not angry..

Maan: wrap his arm around his chest "i am see..."

Lift shake a bit & light went out

Geet: yeh kya huwa.. hold his arm

Maan: quickly hug her , pressed the buttons.."it is stuck"

Geet: aab kya hoga

Maan: called ..."Adi what happen?"

Adi: "sir 5 more mins it will be fixed"

Maan: make it fast... it was moving..he pull her next to wall hold her tightly...

Geet: could hear his heart beat ..hold him 

the roof of the lift open,

worker "sir you come one by one..."

Maan: Geet you go

Geet: no i will not leave you ..hold him more tight

Maan: whisper "kuch nai hoga mujhe"kissed her cheek

Geet: bola na i will not leave you wrap her arm around his neck.placed her head on his shoulder.

Maan:bring other rope ...could feel shiver in her voice

worker: but sir

Maan:"she will not come she is scared"

worker : then you wait....

Maan: ok...run his finger in her hairs "relax  i will go with you "

Geet: "never ask me to leave you, you are my only friend"

Maan: promise...

Geet: aagr phir kabhi bola i will go away....

Maan: sshhhhh..bus wipe her tears.

Worker: sir tie this belt around you.

Maan:tied around them... kissed her fore head "you close your eyes" as he remember she is scared of height.

Geet: just rested her head at his chest.... 

they workers pull them out.....

Maan: Geet you can open your eyes..... 

Geet: open saw everyone looking at them.... loosen her grab

Ved: are you ok ?

Geet: yes i am...

Maan: Adi what happen to it?

Adi: sir it was stop in between, then it was stuck...

Maan: fix it ... walked to his cabin...

Pinky : water

Geet: thanks... please give me one more glass i will give him... walked with water to his cabin.

Maan: was talking to Ved & Tanu made them sit on table.

Geet: water....gave him glass

Maan: looked at her drank ...she took back glass.... was about to go out ...Maan look back at kids ,they were busy...grab her hand , pull her to him "never leave me never" hug her as tight as he could .


to be cont..... will reply to your comments soon ..sorry for delay😳

Edited by naddiya26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#3
Awesome part di
Loved it!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#4
Nice part👏...keep updating yaar...
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Congrats dear for ur second thread🤗🥳, and awesome part updates dear, just loved it😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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now maneet can never be separated by those evil sisters..thnx for the lovely update but after a long time ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome!!!
loved it!!!
con soon!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update
pls pm me ur next update
😉😉😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#9
naddiya is back han very happy
awesome update naddiya
loved it
lift part was excellent
do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#10
that was really sweet
plz continue soon