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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

ohh shytt...interestingg conceptt ! andd oo i cantt wait till the nextt partt =D can you pleasee PM me when you update? andd updatee soon =]

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Riddhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

heyyy dear,
nice part
do write longer part
continue soon

love
Riddss

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aisha_ranbir8

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

hey......... ur concept iz really good .............. n wid my favorite couple its all the more interesting ......so pls continue soon looking forward to da story .......... n pls add me to ur pm list ......... anywaz take care............ love aish

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176084

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

i just came across your fan fic! i love the concept you have going!

but the first part is wayy to short :(

i hope to get a better feel of your fan fic soon with longer parts heheh :)

could you pm me when you continue again? thanks (:

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fidmfshnbeauty

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

@angullgrl91, Glad you like the concept...part 1 was short in my opinion as well but thats because I'm still trying to get the concept fully going in my head. The next part should be slightly longer, will definitely pm it to you.

@ aisha_ranbir8, glad you like the concept, have added you to the list. 😊

Edited by DMGlover91 - 13 years ago