-truly magical- Maaneet thread 1

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Muskan does'nt seem to stop!!!! another maaneet FF...

 

 
 
 
 
Character Sketch

Maan ~ Maan Singh Khurana, MD Khurana constructions
26yr old bussiness tycon, sucessful famous rich..ok..same as our serial

 
Geet ~ 1st yr MBA student in a business school in delhi..so she is 21yrs kind of
daughter of a rich influentional bureaucrat
tom boy..no girl friends wats so ever, her life revolves around her three best buddies
dr. armaan, prem and Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat
 
Dr. Armaan - offcourse u all know him..DMG 1st season ok..like a intern her school mate
 

Prem - from KZK...her class mate in MBA

Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat - off course the famous left right left wala..her school mate
 
 
 
-truly magical-

Black long sleek Mercedes-Benxz drivers in a white dress opens the door for
Maan Singh Khurana, his body gaurds join him in the other car that followed
Maan opened his lap-top checked his mail answereing some calls in his blachberry
suddenly his car stops with a jerk
Maan - what happened? (in stirn voice)
driver scared & nervous - some girl jumped infront of the car
maan - sort it out & looked back in to his lap-top
she ran & opened the side door of the car & hopped in
his body gaurds rushed to pull her out..before they could
her body gurads stopped them..there was a certain tension between the body gaurds
maan turned left to meet her eyes..it was magical..
curly hair unkept & tied up with a clip..worn jeans, lose fitted top, dirty sneakers &
side bag ..she pleeded please I am getting late for my exam
please please please please...
maan kept looking at her lost as if he has never seen anything so beautiful, so angelic
geet waved her hand infront of his eyes..please just drop me untill next signal
I will manage from there my gurads won't let me take an auto..please please please

closing her eyes & then slowly opened open to see his reaction
maan looked away & told the driver to drive to her college
driver - told the body guards to move back & said every thing is fine

Ever felt a smile crossing across your face when a face breezes by you!!
The world seems more beautiful, the weather always perfect and your dream girl 
the most wonderful person on this planet. It can happen to anybody at any place,
on any day & it was the day in their life!!! At first you fall in love or get attracted
to the physical being of a person. After all that's all one sees when it's the case of
love at first sight. Something catches your attention, like her smile, the enchanting eyes..
her pleeding lips then the nature conspires to bring them closer...like the sudden bump in
the car & she fell on him!!!very difficult to feel a bump in a luxcury car like this one
unless the nature was truely conspiring!!!

maan tried his level best to keep his eyes off her...it was like an instant attaraction
he felt for her...like love at first sight!! he had never felt anything like this before
he probably never had time for anything in his life except his business...
geet could'nt stop thanking him - ur an angel!!! I have my exams..aur my
stupid car had to broken down
she points at a silver BMW convertable rare to
be seen on Indian roads actually my mistake...I did'nt give it for service
after that accident!!today is really a tough paper..economics...
I don't know how people study that subject
& why do they study at all..kitna dry subject hain..pata nahi kya hoga?
I am supposed to prepare for this one question in the moring outside the hall...
look at me !!! oh god save me!!! wat do u think sab teehk hojayaga na?
maan does'nt reply..pretends to look into his laptop
geet continues..itna negative vibration mat de yaar waise mujhe tension horahi hain
maan almost smiled & but maintained a stirn look.
she probably did'nt stop for next 20mins...car stopped infront of the college gate
she extended her hand & said thanxs..sir nahi too formal, uncle..nahi itna old nahi lagtha
ok Mr..nahi that is too rude..ok thanxs mr.Amitabachan , I am Geet
maan does'nt move..she shakes her hand arre yaar I am getting late!!!
maan brings his hand in front ...she pulls her hand back & winks...caught u mr.bachan
& disapperas into the college crowd

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=koxO4p367pI&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]
 
maan smiles looking at his hand in mid air...
driver - khanha jana hain sir
maan was too lost did'nt reply
Maan Singh Khurana definitly in Love with a perfect stranger not so perfect..he knows
she is GEET..studying in this business School!!
he see stars in the morning! No, he has'nt banged his head but
feeling the compulsion of love. His life almost stoped and all he could think
was her. he don't seem to get anything done and every moment since then
her face seems to come in front of him.

He started missing her like he haven't seen her in ages,
when actually he just said goodbye...did'nt even say that properly!!

She seemed flawless. he overlooked all her faults and weaknesses...
her dress, messed up hair do ..well darling love at first sight!!!

he could'nt stop smiling when she was around. for first time ever Maan singh Khurana
was all happy and joyful from heart. But as soon as she left, his world collapses
in front of him. he actually felt sad..

Maan Singh Khurana is definitly not a compromising person but he changed his
route completely to drop her to the college.. strangely he was more flexible and a
wonderfully understanding person..oops not Maan singh Khurana!!!

it all felt so very filmy at first but it actually happened Love at first sight!!! to him
Perhaps the most romantic thing that happened to Maan losing his heart in a
fraction of a second..he always knew Love is a very strong emotion, beyond human control.
but today he felt it & was blessed..he knew he was lucky..he wanted to embrace it
but off course Maan Singh Khurana ka EGO!!!

geet was far from all this feel ..she is lost in her own world of friends, studies
exams...cool fundu life!!!
this is -TRULY MAGICAL- how do they finally fall in love!!! or should I say nature
conspires to get them togather yet again!!!

please do comment & let me know how it feels should I continue...wanted to name it ~pyar ka ehsaas next season~ but then decided it this was...
tell me how is it..VM CREDIT BUBBLYGAL
love
muskan
 
PART 2        PART 3        PART 4        PART 5      PART 6      PART 7   PART 8
 
PART 9      PART 10      PART 11     PART 12   PART 13   PART 14 PART 15
 
PART 16   PART 17       THREAD 2
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice beginning.. concept is very nice...
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n plz continue soon...
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Edited........

Sorry Dear pls check next page.........
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Posted: 13 years ago
sounds interesting
plz quickly update and a long one plz
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wow that was good, love the new geet very much, MSK as usual, but love geet very much, you keep going gal, you are the best, cant wait for the next update๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 13 years ago
Muskan- Thrid FF!! swwweeeeettt ;)
Nice concept..im willing to read anything you write. :
 
keep writing
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice ff
really liked it
and maan falling in love and that too at first sight
please do cont soon
willing to read what ever you write
you rock!!!
 
 
love
Noor
Edited by NoorFatima - 13 years ago
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hey muskan luved it can u add me to PM list
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