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Posted: 13 years ago
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MEMORIES

Whenever you look outside the window,
You see things have changed
And people have moved on,
 And you feel you have nothing left
Ah! no, you have a bundle of memories!
Memories are the only door to the future & windows to the past,

They reflect you today
But don't conceal your past,
Don't be depressed over what happened yesterday,
But, vow today not to let it happen tomorrow;
For life is only once lived
                                       But the nostalgia lives forever.

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This is written by me only....this was written way back in 12th std...just a week before my CET exam :)

Do read and give in your valuable views :)

-Fatima

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Posted: 13 years ago
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shab do u know

u r the one who write small but beautiful Poem
i said i dont read it much but see you made me
 
 
Luv
Aru di
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Posted: 13 years ago
#3
Wow...its beautiful...😍 u hv such a poetic soul...❀️
 
Luv it..!! Great one....n btw.. All the best for ur exams πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great work dear.................
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Posted: 13 years ago
#5
Hey Fatima,
 
I love your writing.How many times have I told you that?
 
Reminded me of a quote
 
"We ll have out time machines, some take us back to our past, they are called memories and some take us to our future, they are called dreams :D
 
Continue with your writing
 
So long
cR
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Posted: 13 years ago
#6
Amazing poem!

This poem is really inspiring, every word counts and it indeed, is a fine piece of poetry. More than the poetic devices, the essence is kept in mind and that's best about this poem!

Very well done, Fatima! I wish this poem helps souls like us. πŸ˜†

-Kanky
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh my Noor - πŸ€— 

I hope you will think over your own lines and move on... as you promised me.
 
and you reminded me my exam days back in time..  Everyone used to study during study leaves and I used to write stories or poems...
Aur mano ya na mano - jab se meri zindagi se ye exams ka kissa khatam hua and settle ho gayi , meine likhna hi chod diya 😊 It was just a coincidence - fir bhi...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow...fatima..

this is tremendous...depth and real...

life's lesson....in few words...

this is the formula for happiness..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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fatim u r brilliant writerπŸ‘πŸΌ
i love to read ur poems b'coz  they
describes our lives ur thought are very deep
loved ur poem πŸ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It amazing sweety! Loved it!