Magic that is anticipated...:)

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Hey guys...

we all are anticipating a great intense recovrey track for MAYUR.....infact Mou made a special thread on futrue ideas and suggestions where i posted some one -shots bcz i love writing on MAYUR, than u  u all liked them so much...muah..😳

so i have collected them in my own thread and here i will continue the OS...i though it would be easier for u all to follow...i mean those who want to read it...😕😆...

the OS starts form the next post...

and anyone who wants my PM, plz plz U will have to sent me  a buddy request bcz my account gives some stupid verification error which i dont know how to solve...so plz co-operate..i hope u all enjoy my writing.....

and i will like to give the credit of my insipration to SENNY who introduced the terminology of AWKAWARD MAYUR...and Mou for opening the thread when we all were being shy...hugs to both of u..🤗

PART 1 - 4 on PG 1
PART 5       on PG 2
PART 6       on PG 5
PART 7       on PG 9
PART 8       on PG 13
PART 9       on PG 17
PART 10     on PG 21
PART 11     on PG 25
PART 12     on PG 28
PART 13     on PG 32
PART 14    on PG 36
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PART 1:

this is the first time after re-union when MAYUR enter thier home, gunajn and samar have left and now both of them are alone oi thier home..Nupur is looking at her home with longing eyes...a  simple smile on her face..

M..kiasa laga?

N..haan?

M..ghar?

N...*smiles*...bht acha hai...

M.....yaad hai jab main bengalaru ja raha tha aur hum date pe gaye thye, tab us shed main tum ne mujhe bataya tha k tumhe kaisa ghr chaiye...main ne bilkul wiasa hi banaya hai..

he held her hand and took her to the curtains..

M..ye dekho bilkul waise hi bari bari windows aur in pe parde...

he then moved towards the lounge..

M..ye dekho sab se bara tv liya tha main ne...aur ye dekho kitchen..

he then took her to the kitchen.

M...yahan pe sari machines hain...bus coffee - maker nahi hai...

nupur was smilinga nd admiring her dreams which were standing in front of her...

M..ab main tumhe hamara kamra dikhata hon...

He took her hand and they both went in thier room...

M..dekho hamari shaadi ki picture...kaisi hai nupur...

N...bilkul sapno jaisa hai sab kuch...

Mayank realsied that nupur was very quiet, she was just staring at everything..It was him talking all  bout the house but nupur was just staring..

M..umm nupur..

N..haan?

M..dinner kia karo gi?

N...kuch nai...

M...aisa kasie kuch nai..kuch tu kha lo..

N..nahi...

She was still staring at thier marriage picture..

M...acha world ki best coffee piyo gi?..

These words made her turn towards mayank, her eyes fuilled with tears......she wanted to speak but couldnt..

M..tum change lkar lo, main coffee lata hn...

Nupur wiped off her tears and siad..

N..wo mera samman tu..

M..arey haan..

he held her hand again, and took her to the cupboard and opened it fro her..

M...ye tumhre kapre.
..
and then he left..

Nupur gently touched her clothes...it was  all her things she owoned three years back...thier gentle touch made her cry again, but she took aher night suit and went to change...

Mayank entered with the coffee and nupur was standing in the window...

M..here madam!...

Mayank had a smile o his face and nupur was lost into it, she held the cup..

M..main bhi change kar leta hnon..

Mayank went to change and nupur took a sip...it was the same flavour...the same taste..the same LOVE...she held the cup tightly...and brought it close to her...she was crying and she drank it in one go!..

Mayank came back and saw nupur with the empty cup..

M..nupur itni garam coffee pi bhi li?

Nupur was shocked at his question, she didnt even realise that it was HOT...all she felt was MAYANK's LOVE, she wanted it to feel it to its fullest extent so drank it in one go..

M..nupur?

N..haan?..umm..wo nahi...itni garam nahi thi...

Nupur turned her face, she didnt wanted to revel her tears..mayank wanted her to talk..

M..nupur...tum mujhe se koi baat nahi karo gi...

She turned..

N..ahh..wo  main kia kahon?

Some thing broke inside mayank, the girl who wanted no reason to talk now couldnt utter a word from her mouth...the pain she had been giong through had completely changed her..his bubbly talkative nupur had turned into a  silent girl...whose eyes just conveyed pain....

He went close to her..

M..mujhe batao gi nahi k tum ne mujhe kitna yaad kiya hai?

These words broke nupur...this was the question she herself couldnt answer...tears were dwelling in her eyes.....but she turned her face, she wasn't able to gain the strength to face mayank.,..

Mayank turned her face towards him...

M...pehle zara sa kuch hota tha tu kitna bolti thi k mujhe ye ho gaya , wo ho gaya..aj nahi batao gi k kitna dard saha hai?..

Nupur was looking into his eyes...she wanted to speak but words weren't cordinating with her thougts...her lips were trembling to speak but the immense pain inside her came out in the form of tears.....

mayank brought her a bit close and she clucthed her shirt and paced her head on his shoulder and started crying...mayank gently brushed her fingers on her head...she tightly held his shirt in her fist...she was continously crying....mayank could realsie that she wanted to speak but was helpless...all he could hear between her sobs was,....

N...main.....wo...mayank.....

he made her sit on the sofa but nupur didnt leave her shirt, niether did she lifted her head from his chest....she went on crying and mayank went on brushing his fingers on her head,  her sobs slightly fainted and mayank saw that she fell asleep..he wiped off all the tears from her cheeks, he knew that his nupur was completely shattered...and he had to RE-BUILD HER
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PART  2:

Nupur gently opened her eyes and she  found herself on mayank's chest and holding his shirt, she gently let her fist loose and maynk also realised that she has woken up..

M..good morning..

Nupur got a bit confused a..she smiled weakly..

N..good morning...

She tried to lift her head but her hair were stuck in mayank's shirt buttons..

M..ik minute..dehan se..

Mayank tried to remove them and nupur was staring him, they were so close that nupur herself titled her head away in shyness...Mayank removed the hair and nupur stood up..she realsied that she has been sleeping all night n mayank's chest...she was feeling embarssed..

N..sorry...

Maynk wasnt expecting this, he was busy removing some broken hair of nupur from his shirt when nupur said this..he stood up..

M..kia?..

N..wo meri waja se sari raat sofa pe..mujhe pata hi nai chala ..sorry..

Mayank looked straight into her eyes and took a step towards her..

M..kis baat pe sorry bol rahi ho?..sari raat merey itney kareeb hone k liye?

Nupur lowered her eyes , she was out of words...

N..nahi...wo...

he moved a bit more close and nupur was now looking on the ground when mayank gently said.

M..please nupur, tumhara haq hai..merey kareeb hone ka, mujh se dard batne ka...

This made her look staright into his eyes...again a tear dwelled,

M..acha bus bus..ab emotinal batien khatam karte hian...tum batao kia break fast karo gi...main banata hon..

N..kuch bhi...

he wasnt expecting this, he remebered how much long list nupur used to give him whenever he voluntereed for making the breakfast, he felt very weak ..

M..ok...

he went to the kitchen and nupur went for a bath..

When nupur reached the dining table, mayank had made aloo parathas and nupur sat down and started eating it, myank was standing in the kitchen observing her ...and he was shocked that nupur was eating it!...

actually mayank had placed a burned paratha just in order to make nupur fight with him, and taunt him the way she used to do, but this time she was quiety eating,it was the third bite she was about to eat when mayank held her hand,..

M..nupur ye kia kar rahi ho?..ye jala hua hai!..

N.. koi baat nahi...

She again began to eat, this time a tear dwellled in mayank's eye...he had never seen nupur so compromising, she had forgot to retailiate , to question, to argue..

M..pagal ho gai ho..jala hua khana khao gi...

he removed the plate and brought another one...

M..kia ho gaya hai nupur, mujh se pocha ku nahi k jala hua khana ku diya main ne?..

N..koi baat nahi...mujhe addat hai..wo dhruv..

She suddenly stooped...as if somedbody sealed her lips...

M..dhruv kia?

Nupurs hands started shivering..

N..kuch nahi...

She started eating again..

Mayank wanted to ask but he wasnt able to, nupur was so sacred...so he himself left the question.

After the breakfast she went into the room, mayank followed her, she took out her diary and was begging to write when mayank held her hand...

M..ye kia kar rahi ho?

N..wo dairy likhne lagi thi...

M..ku?

N..wo teen saal se main ne is main hi sab kuch lika hai..jo bi main feel karti hon..

M..ku?

Nupur wasnt able to understand mayank's question,

N..ku k main aklei thi..

M..exactly!..tum akeli thi is liye diary likhti thi..

He moved forwards an held her hand..

M..ab bhi akeli ho?

this made her close her eyes...tears again started flowing from her eyes..she tightly held the arm of the chair she was sitting..

Mayank sat down on his kness and held put his hands on nupur's..

M..dekho nupur main tumhe kisi chez k liye force nai kar raha...main bus tumhe itna yakeen karwana chata hon k  ab tum akeli nahi ho..

Se looked at him with all  teary eyes...

M..tum jab b mujhe batana chaho bata sakti ho...bus ik baat samajh lo ab tumhe apni feelings share karne k liye be-jaan chezon ka sahara lene ki zarorat nai hai...

He smiled gently and closed her diary..he wiped off all her tears..

M..Ok ab main college ja raha hon, sham ko milte hain..ok...

Nupur smiled weakly..

he left and nupur was sitting there thiking that mayank was really making her feel his love and support but it is not easy to forget those three years...

She was sitting alone and again crying...

N..main kia karon...mujh se nahi buhlaya jata wo sab!
Edited by -Mehak - 13 years ago
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PART 3:

Nupur again went to see her house, she was gently touching all the things of the house.,she wanted that the essence should penetrate through her soul...she stared at each and every piscure for hours, as if she had forgotten where she was standing and wanted to go back to the e tme of the time of the pisture...

She didnt even realise when the phn rang..she went to the phn..

M..nupur?..

N..haan mayank...

M..kia kar rahi ho?

N...umm kuch nahi...bus aise hi...

M..khana khaya hai?

N...khana?..

M..mujhe pata tha k bhool jao gi...fridge main ne ne tumhari favourite dum allo banaye hain, garam aro aur kha lo..ok...

N..ok....

Mayank wanted to say something more, wanted to ask that is she missing her , but he refrained himself..

M..ok bye...

Nupur went to the kitchen and ate her lunch, not bcz she was hungry, but bcz she could feel the essence of maynk's love coming out of it...

Nupur made herslf strong enough, she want to give maynk the impression that she realised that she is not alone, she changed, and wanted that mayank should be happy seeing her that she is forgetting her past, but the reality was that she WAS NOT..she still was fighting with her, still every vioce made her alert that may be dhruv had returned, still his wild eyes followed her, but tt SHE WAS WITH MAYANK..and this gave her some courage..

She heard a car horn, she went down staris and opened the door..mayank was standing there smiling, she herself tried to smile..

M..hii...

N..hii...

mayank walked inside and nupur followed her..

M..so kaisa raha din...

N...ye tu mujhe pochna chaiye...

Mayank turned towards her, she said it so plainly and with such innocence that mayank couldnt help smiling...

M..well is main kia hai...hum  main se koi bhi poche ...right?..

Mayank looked straight in her eyes..., she lowered them and took the files from his hand...

Mayank and nupur both walked inside the home mayank was constantly talking..

M..tum ne khana khaya tha?

N..haan..

M..kaisa tha..

N..acha tha...

M..jala hua tu nahi tha..

N..nahi....main cofee banao?

M..well aj chai ka mood hai tu chai bana do..

N..ok..

Mayank again exected that nupur would fight with him that why is he not drinking coffe bcz he doesnt likes her coffee, but nthing of that sort happened...he went to the room

Mayank called nupur from the rromm..

M..nupur..

Nupur was down stiars she went to the room..

M..trouser tu change kar liya hai main ne per meri  koi shirt nai mil rahi hai...

N..wo main ne uper rakh di thi

She took out and gave it to him.

Myaank was about to open the buttons of his shirt  when suddenly nupur turned her face away..mayank relaised his mistake...he immeditely said..

M...nupur tum bhol gayi ho tumhari chai hai choley per...

N...haan...

Nupur breathed a sigh of relief and immdieately left..mayank on the othr hand realised that there is gap built n between which he knew he would get on..

Mayank and nupur had dinner, the same dum alloo, mayank gaain was telling her about college and she again wa straing maynka nd smiling at him..

Mayank was reading a file in his room when nupur came..

N..mayank ye...

M..ye kai hia..tumhari dairy?

N..haan.. parh lo..

M..ku?

N..is main main ne sab kuch likha hai..3 saal tak kia hua hai mere sath, sab likha hai..sach sach..parh lo..

M..ku parhon?

Nupur looked at him...

N..mayank tumhe hag hai ye jane ka k merey sath kia hua hai..main kis haal main rahi hon...main tumahre laiq hon ya nahi..

Mayank put his fingers on her lips...

M..nupur please...For God sake...merey pyar ko aise sharminda mat karo...haan sach  hai k main jana chata hon k tumhare sath kia hua..lekin aisey nahi...main tumhara dard batna chata hon, tum se sawwal nahi kar raha...

N..mayank muje se nahi kaha jaye ga..plz main..

M..tu thek hai, jab batana chaho tab bata dena....aur tumhe mujh se kuch kehne k liya koi sahara nhai chaiye...samjhi...

Nupur was looking at him

He cupped her face in his hands..

M..nupur main tumhe kabhi chor kar nahi jaon ga..kabhi bhi nahi....tum merey pas wapis a gay ho, i promise ab koi hamare beech main nahi aye ga..i really really love u nupur...i really do....

Maynk smiled at her and expected that she would also smile but she said

N..tum ne jo kaha hai tum us se peche tu nahi hato gey na...?

Mayank was shocked at her question......SUCH EMPTY EYES!!,....he really didnt know how to make her realise..how to give her confidence..how to make her happy...this was indeed the biggest test of his love...even bigger than when he had almost lost her..at that time he was away from nupur, but this time...nupur is away from herself....
Edited by mehak03 - 13 years ago
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PART 4:

Mayank wanted to answer her question but he was unsure, what to say..

M..tumhe kaise bharosa dialon nupur?..tum batao?

N.. wada karo....

M..mujhe tumhari her muskurahat ki kasam hai..main tumhe kabhi chor ka nahi jaon ga..

Mayank felt that this somewhat spread a peace on her face.
she wiped of all her tears and was turned towards the dressing table., where she took of her bangles,

Mayank expected that she would say something but he was happy that he somewhat saw a slight satisfaction on her face.

mayank again held his file...Nupur was looking at mayank though the mirror, he was silently turning pages of the file

Nupur felt that she was responsible for all the problems of mayank, even after coming back she could not give him the happiness and love he deserved..

N..main tumhain bht tang karti hon na...

Mayank looked at her, she was standing facing the mirror and looking at him through the miror , he came to her and stood behind her,

now both of them were looking at each other through the miorror...

maynk bent sligthly towards her neck ....nupur closed her eyse in confusion, he inclined towards her ear and gently said..

M..nahi...tum mujhe bht pyar karti ho...

She immedieately opened her eyes,and turned her face towards mayank, he was smiling and nupur was lost into that magical love in his eyes......

M..acha ab agar asie hi ik dosre ko dekhte rahen gey tu subah ho jaye gi..

Nupur immedeitely turned her face away...

M..good night...

He went to the bed and picked up all his files and placed them on the table and went to sleep...

Maynk hadnt said anything to nupur abput sleeping bcz he wantd her to make her decision herself..he wanted her to decide where she was somfortable...near him or away from him..

he waited that whether she will leave the room or sleep with him on the same bed...He closed his eyes just to give the impression that he had slept...

Nupur was standing at the mirror and and the she turned towarda mayank, she was very confused what to do, whether to sleep on the couch or bed,

she headed towards the couch and sat on it, she was still looking at mayank..

maynk realised that she was giong to sleep on the couch, he didnt open his eyes at all..

For some time nupur kept staring, her mind was absouletely blank...she looked at him and then  she got up and headed towards the bed, what feeling made her do that..she herself didnt knew..

she cautiously  lied down oppoisite to mayank, just not to disturb his sleep..

mayank was facing the other side, he realised that nupur ha come,,,he opened his eyes, just tilted his head a bit and saw that nupur was there with her eyes closed,

after sometime, when mayank was sure that she was asleep he turned his face towards her

he got his answer that nupur was comfortable NEAR HIM...

he smiled and kept on looking at her and brushing his fingers in her hair when  he himself didnt realise when he aslo went asleep.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanx 4 making it in one thread dear...all were juz awesome..pls continue soon..............
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this is just so wonderful n , arti will really fill magic in these scns with their beautiful performances.......
can include sajan to with mayank in helping nupur.............
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yea i went thru ur both d os!

they were amazing!!

n the part 3 n 4 are even better!
plz cont soon!
Edited by nikitasharma. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely mahek it was amazing you have written it soooooo very well ................. i do t have words to descibe how much beautiful they were do keep writing more ...............you are amazing writer nd how i wish we get such scenes in the show as well.......
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plzzzz plzzzz plzzzz i beg u to continue it............it ws lovely mindblowin fantastic fabluous .....fantabulous