GEET poem (IRIDESCENT LIFE)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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IRIDESCENT LIFE
 
 
I walk a lonely road,
On a path filled with trudgery,
The cold harsh wind blows,
Leaving me alone in melee.
 
It's driving me crazy,
And I can't find a way out,
Yet the more I try to elude,
The more I end up being tangled.
 
In one swift turn life changed,
And happiness replaced sorrow,
Giving birth to a new day,
Yet mysteries shrouded the way.
 
Time elapsed turning dusk to dawn,
Dissolving melancholy into hope,
Flowers bloomed and birds twittered,
And an invincible summer took over.
 
Looking back I now realize,
Nothing did really change,
Still days turned into night,
But the frown didn't remain !
 
-GEET
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Link to other poems:

1) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1466735
2) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1456321
3) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1484971

-Fatima


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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice poem dear👍🏼

m sorry...m not able to read ff's these days there r so many pending.....i will read em soon....tc luv ya!:)

And do write more n pm me....i will b goin thru all the PM's later:)

Thnaks for the PM

Luv
ZJ
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow the poem is really wonderful fatima👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Fatima!🤗

That was an A W E S O M E poem! 👏Do write more! 😊Loved it!😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thnx a lot everyone for liking the poem !
It means a lot to me :)

-Fatima