dear polki ....
i wanna convey my heartful thanx for sharing such a fiction with us.....
it was a romantic and senssitive journey thru ur fiction .....
my heart fluttered when he met her ....
when he met her daughter ...
when he met his daughter .....
their daughter .....
i m maan singh khurana ..!!!
i request u to give this starved man love of his daughter .....he was satisfied as he knew geet loved him throughout his life.....
i loved the harvrd scene
i loved most the scene he had seen painting made by his daughter ..and he had been erased....
wonderfully potrayed emotions of a father .......
thats something ......!!!
the way geet hinted him that its his own house.....the way they wre complete with each other ....
but i loved more when she was scared when maan told he is going outside.....
i loved when maan ressured her saying i will come back....
let him come back polki .....
if not please give him his daughters love ..he needs it ....!!!!
i love you ......
and i love ur fiction more than you ...!!
i wanna kiss ur fingers which typed it ...!!!
thank you !!
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